My 1st FF: Updated pg 22 May 28 08

Jai Walia

- Handsome, Sexy and confident he is the rich businessmen who has more than money can buy yet craves for love something that he cannot buy!…arrogant, impatient, cold, egotistical…always gets what he wants…(has not yet found a person to melt his hard exterior)…yeah pia still left him at the altar….

Bani Dixit

- independent girl does everything for herself and her sisters Rano and pia, has a very in your face kind of attitude that hides her feelings of pain for losing her parents but is very sweet and lovable. Always on task and ready for the job ahead! Is married to our handsome Jai Walia

Jigyasa Walia

- Is very upfront and just plain mean..(cannot share her brothers love with anyone else…has a special place in his heart)…has FOUR kids!!…dats right 4 Ranveer, Sahil, Anu, and Tina ..lol…loves the fancy and expensive things in life…divorced from hubby Aditya…buh cant stand Bani and her sisters…and wants her brothers property and money.

Ranveer

- The oh so sexy Sansyasi..who is a momma's boy and works for his Jai mamaji…loves to worship god..buh hardly ever follows his religious persona.

Pia- the usual Pia..as in the show…selfish, money-minded, thinks the world revolves around her.

Pushkar-Jai sir is like a father figure to him and him n pia are married now….buh him and Jai arent talking yet

Rano Dixit- very moody, young yet so mature. Loves Bani to death and major priority is to study and make her didi proud.

Billo Masi- sweet and very kind like a mother figure to every body. Loves her munna and bahu to death.

Dadi- every one calls her dadi is very very nice and loves tv and movies…dispises Jigyasa….Filmy…funny and light hearted… loves her grand children to death…yes even Ranveer..lol…

Tina- She is Jai's fav. Niece…she lives in the US and handles the business there…loves to dress designer also likes the finer things in life and is very funny and cares deeply about her family. Aditya and Jiggs are very proud of her…and have usually given her whatever she wants because out of the 4 she deserved most of it! Hard working…is filmy also..lol…wants to see her Jai mamaji happy!!!

Heres a picture of her for you guys....

Guys this fan fiction starts right after Masi comes and Bani's back @ Walia mansion where she belongs (Duh)…anyways here goes nothing cuz this is my first attempt at writing sumthin….ignore my mistakes n my hindi reallie sucks so plz bear with me…..n oh yeah Bani's not exactly on speaking terms wit Mr. Walia right now..remember guys he accused her of sumthin about money…n having Rano go to Sahil to trap him…n blah blah…n Jiggs yelling….n Jai's like almost over Pia…buh not quite there yet…ab to addat si hai mujko…lol…n oh yeah plz do comment and plz tell me ur views on it..and if u want me to continue..ok ok..ill shut up now n heres the FIRST PART…I wonder what I shud call this "thinks with hand on chin…oh well will think of that later"

Part 1

Masi: Munna tum breakfast karke jao na beta

Jai: Nahi masi..bahut important meeting hai

Masi: acha to office mein kuch ka lehna…Jai: ji masi…and hurrys out the door

Every one is sitting at the breakfast table dadi, Jiggs, Adi, Anu, Sexy Sanyasi..I mean Ranveer…lol…Rano n lets not forget out loveable Sahil and Tony is serving Breakfast.

We see a girl in a yellow sari with jet black hair coming downstairs looking gorgeous yet simple. Its no other than our Mrs. Bani Jai Walia…she's looking quite annoyed at coming back into the house but changes her look into a smile when she see's Masi…she loves Masi…makes her feel like sumone reallie loves and cares for her (I know u guys might be thinking..that Rano n Pia care n love for her…but its not the same u know..cuz Masi is older)

Dadi: oye meri Rani Mukherjee bohut sunder lagrehi ho!…Masi: mera munna kitna lucky hai usko itne achi aur kubsuraat patni mili hai….Jiggs and Ranveer are exchanging evil looks and just went back to their eating Bani's thinking like yeah really after what he said to Rano and me the other day.

Sahil gets up to leave and Masi is like why don't you take Rano along too..you guys go to the same college and should giver her a ride also…Jiggs was shooting daggers with her eyes at Rano.

Sahil: uhm ji masi…chalo Rano….she followed him to the car….Rano: Sahil! Main auto se chali jaongi.

Sahil: nahi Rano tum mere saath hi chalna plz…for Masi…he said making a lil puppy face but you could make out a grin on his face. Rano: uhm teek hai chalo…drive carefully you two!!! Anu waves from the upstairs window is laughing and is like "Sahil keep your eyes on the ROAD!!!"…Sahil's thinking…with Rano in the car how can I concentrate on anything else….hehe. He gets in the car and they make their way to the college.

Meanwhile inside the house Bani is helping clear away the dishes..( I swear all they ever do is eat, party, and create problems)..while Masi and Dadi are glancing at her from the living room they are whispering and being sneaky. "Biji yeh bahu aur Jai..who kya khete hai..per nahi gaye"…Dadi:HONEYMOON per? Nahi to….shhhh "biji dheere bolye…main soch rahi thi..ki voh Munna ki conference hai na voh Goa mein kyun na hum Bani ko bi uske saath beje???….

Dadi: oye Billo tu bhari smart ho gaye hai…as she laughs and they whisper some more.

Its late in the evening and Bani is putting away some of her things from the dresser when Jai comes in and sits on the bed with his laptop open. She gives him a glance and continues with her task at hand. Jai is not in a very good mood. "areh munna tu kaam se aa gaya".."ji masi..bus kuch emails check karatha"

Masi looks at Bani standing in front of the dresser staring back at her with a look like go ahead pamper your little "munna".

Masi: uhh…Jai mein soch rahi thi ki kyun na tum Bani ko bi apne saath lechalo Goa waise bi tum dono shaadi ke baad kahin gumne nahi gaye.

Jai: per masi Bani waha kya karegi?..he looks at her with that signature Mean look.

Bani: Masi Mr. Walia apne kaam me busy honge aur…

Masi: main kuch nahi suna chaati…tum dono jarehe ho…tickets kaal subah ki book hai. Jai tum aur bahu enjoy karna…before they have a chance to say anything Masi shoots out of the room..to give a smiling Dadi a highfive. (I love these too..partners in crime..haha..)

Jai: Damnit!…Bani is just glaring at him and just leaves the room…He goes back to checking his emails and the tune of aadat is heard. After dinner Jiggs, Ranveer, Sahil, Dadi, Adi, Masi, Anu,is in the living room chatting and having a good time. "Bani beta tum be akar bheto" says a smiling Masi. Bani looks around and see's that there are no other seats except the one next to Jai on the sofa. She slowly goes and sits down next to him. Jiggs roles her eyes and Ranveer is just looking at the time..and takes a yawn…

We here a car pull up and out comes…………guess who you guys….and plz tell me how it waz! I don't noe how often ill be able to update this fanfic..cuz of hw and stuff…and if you have any suggestions then plz PM them to me! Ill be happy to put in sum of your guys input!…thanks a bunches!

Love you all!

Min

I noe her picture isnt showing up..can someone plz help me with uploading images? 😳 ..thankz

hey sweetie.

the first part was very interesting.!! plz do continue..!!

i am hopeless at uploading pictures so sorry cant help u there!!

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superb start.keep it up.plz do cont soon. 😊

fab start min!!! 👏 👏 👏 so you're writing a fanfic urself!! can't wait for the next part 😛

okay for the image...upload the picture onto imageshack.com

copy paste the URL....before the URL put IMG in brackets like this [] and then after the URL put /IMG in brackets!!! hope that helps 😉

i hope that someone who comes out is not roshni *crossing my fingers*...
awesome fanfic....
cont. soon

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i think that someone is Tina
plz write soon

thankz all of you for your comments 😳 ..i decided to post the second part also!! 😉

PART 2

Recap:Rano and Sahil ride to college together. Masi tells Jai and Bani to go to Goa together. And we continue from where we hear a roaring sports car pull up.
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The Walia's are shocked to hear a vroom vroom of a sports car…

Sherni yeh aankhen tumhari

She's seen walking up the steps of the house wearing Black Chanel Sunglasses with her hair in waves flowing as she walked.

kya gazab hai pyari pyari

With Jimmy Choo Stiletto heels making the tap tap noise on the ground

makhmali yeh roop tumhara aashiqui ban jaye humari

She's wearing a form fitting Black Armani business suit…with pencil skirt that goes up a bit above the knee. Carrying a matching Guess hand bag.

pata pata dali dali sab kare yeh sawal bekhabar is dhadkanon ka pootch na tu haal.

All the eyes are on her as she steps into the door and makes her way to all of the jaws hanging down.
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s kaal kaal main hum tum kare dhamal

She stands in front of them with her hand on her hip. Jigs is the first to speak.
Jigs: OMG!!!…Ti..Tina beta tum!…she goes and hugs her as she has not seen her in almost 4 years. Bani is standing there looking her up and down. And Jai has the biggest smile on his face.
Adi: Mera bacha!…as he goes and takes her in his arms…she hugs both of her parents and moves in front of Dadi and takes her blessing.
Dadi: Meri Lara Dutta ah gaye tum!…
Tina: Yes Dadi im back…as she says this looking right at Ranveer..(hmm..something seems up with her)
Tina: Ranveer Bhayia!..he goes and hugs her as well.
Ranveer: Kaise ho Tina..tum achanak yaha??…he still has that stubborn look on his face.
Tina: why should I go back?…she said laughing.
Jai: Tina!…..She turns and looks the other way.
Tina: Mamaji aap to mujse baat hi mat karna!
Jai: kyun kya huwa?
Tina: aap ki SHADDI ho gaye aur mujse aap ne kuch bi nahi bataya?…she moves over to Bani who is just standing there with a blank face. Tina takes off her sunglasses and fixes them on her head and stands in front of Bani.
Tina: aap Bani Mami hai na?…Bani nods her head and Tina gives her a hug. As Bani gives a slight smile.
Adi: Beta tumne koi khabar nahi ki…hum laine aa jaate?
Tina: Nahi dad I wanted to give everybody a surprise and I really wanted to see my new Mami!…Jai and Bani share a glance and Jiggs is just astounded that she didn't want to meet the women that gave birth to her but rather her "Bani Mami".
Anu and Sahil, Masi come over and give her warm hugs also.
Sahil: Big sis im soooo glad your back!
Tina: thanks Sahil I reallie have missed India. Jai is still standing there with sad smile.
Tony and 5 servants are shown carrying her Louii Vatton Luggage.(LOL hey girls need a lot of stuff! but She acts like she is stayin for good?)
Sahil: Sis soooo many bags…did you bring me anything? He said all excited
Tina: YES!! I have brought presents for everybody, but I will give them out later.
Masi: Beta tum thaak gaye hogi…mein Tony se Khana lagwati hoon.
Tina: Nahi masi plane mein dinner kafi acha tha..(reallie I hate airline food..but she is rich so probably got a 5 course dinner in first class)
Tina: oh yeah mom I got that make-up kit you wanted..ill give it to you later.
Dadi: leh isko aur make-up chahye?…everybody laughs and slowly they retire to their rooms.
Bani is getting water from the jug and Jai is sitting on the couch thinking about the trip to Goa. Tina walks out of the washroom and towards the sofa.
Tina: mamaji…he looks up at her and she is smiling. Jai gets up and engulfs her into a hug. (he loves her like a daughter and she is very dear to him) Bani see's them hugging and thinks yeh Mr. Walia Tina se kitna pyar karte hai. And smiles
Tina: Mamaji aap ki choice ko daat deni paregi. Bani mami is so pretty! And she is the perfect asset to this family.Bani looks up just at the same time Jai looks at her after hearing Tina.
Tina: Masi bata rehi thi ki…aap dono kal Goa ja reh hai?
Jai: uhm Haan voh ek conferece hai vaha.
Tina: ohic…Well I think I should be going to sleep now…New-York ki flight bahut hi long thi….Goodnight mamaji…goodnight mamiji.
Bani and Jai: goodnight
Tina: I will talk to you both tomorrow


Wow that part waz difficult..to write…reallie pushed my brain…I hate to write but our Jai and Bani and all of you guys and the Fanfics made me decide to write one myself and I set it as a challenge to myself!…so plz comment and tell me how its going! And if you are liking it…it's a lil boring…buh trust me it will get better…I have to set the atmosphere
Love ya all
Min

Originally posted by: ziddi

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i think that someone is Tina
plz write soon

you guessed right!!!..your wish is my command second part is up!..thankz for the commens 😉

Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

hey sweetie.

the first part was very interesting.!! plz do continue..!!

i am hopeless at uploading pictures so sorry cant help u there!!

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thankz!..im glad you found it interesting!