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Posted: 12 years ago




Part 21

After some time,

She was bored sitting in the room alone, her stomach ache was

much better now.

Suddenly there was a knock on the door, she looked towards

the door. Dev entered with a smiling face.

Geet thought, 'hope kuch achi news ho!'

Dev: Hey geetu, wats up?

Geet: kya lagat h aapko, hospital bed mein ek bimar insaan

kya karega?

Dev: ha ha ha how silly me, of course bore hoga.

Dev was nervous, actually he was here to tell Geet that she will

be going home in few days as she is getting better and the

medicines are working very fast, but, she is weak and can't

dance for few weeks because it will again make her weak.


He knows that she can do anything but can't miss her practices

as her competition is near. He couldn't gather the courage to

speak. He took a long breath and started.

Dev: Geet, I want to tell you something.

Geet: Go on I am listening.

Dev: Ummm.. Doctor said that medicines are working very fast

and you are better now. We can take you home tomorrow.

Geet: Voh toh hongi hi itne injections jo thoke hen mujhe.


She made a poor baby face and rubbed her bum where the

nurse has put 5 injections since morning and 4 are still left.


Dev: And.. Geet'. You can't'..

Geet looked at his face and sensed something serious.

Dev: (sigh) Geet you can't dance for few weeks as you are very

weak. Dancing will make you weaker. You need proper rest to

get better. That means you can't''..

Geet: This means I can't participate in the competition. Right?

Dev nodded and looked at her. Her face was expressionless,

but her heart was thudding and she was hurt, 'How can he even

think like that. He knows that I am practicing for this

competition from past 5 years and wining it is my dream!'

Dev: Geet I know that you were'.

Geet: NO you don't know anything, tabhi toh aapne kitni

asaani se keh diya ki I can't participate' Just' how'. How could you..

Her voice cracked and was on the verge of crying. Tears were

brimming down her face and Dev was feeling very guilty but it's

his duty to take care of her. She just hides her face in the

blanket and turned to the other side.


Dev called her, but she didn't listen to him. He left after

sometime but Geet was still crying. She too slept after crying a

lot.


She woke up after sometime when the nurse came inside to

shot her an injection. The nurse brought her food, but Geet

didn't touch the food. She was still thinking how he could just

spill it out.

NT came at the same time and saw her pale face. She got

worried seeing her and went inside.


She sat beside her bed on the chair slowly holding her stomach,

carefully. She shook Geet a little.

NT: Gappu!


Geet came out of her reverie and looked at her sister. She was

shocked to see her.


After the morning incident Dev called NT and narrated

everything to her. She asked Dev to pick her up.

FLASHBACK

Dev and Nt's conversation in car,

DEV: Nainu, I don't know what to do? Mujhe uski fikar h,

yeh baat tumhe bhi pata h na. Isliye mene usse kaha ki

she can't dance! But voh toh ulta mujhpar gussa ho gayi.


NT: Calm down Dev, yahan pregnant mein hun aur mood

tumhara kharab ho rha h.


Dev: tum dono beheno ne meri zindagi barbad krke rakh di

h. Ek ko manao dusri ruth jaati , dusri ko manao toh pehli

vaali ruth jaati h'.

NT looked at him angrily. He shut down his mouth instantly and

diverted his gaze on the road.

NT: Don't worry' I will try to make her understand. Hope

she listens.



FLASHBACK ENDS

NT held her hand and ask,

NT: kaisi h Geet? Pata h isne tujhe kitna miss kiya. (She

smiled and put her hand on her tummy pointing on the

baby)

Geet was really sad and gloomy today and NT can see that

clearly in her younger sister's eyes. She tried to cheer her up

by talking to her.

Geet just nodded in return.

NT: Achi h na? At least say it from your mouth. Acha sun

I have a surprise for you.

She said and Geet looked at her instantly sensing the Anxiety in

her voice.

She asked meekly: kya?

NT smirked and shouted looking towards the door.

NT: ANDAR AA JAO!!

Geet was perplexed. She was thinking who it might be?


'Maan, no yaar voh toh subah hi tujhse milkar gaye hen.

Toh fir kaun ho sakta h.. kahin'..' her thought was left in middle when


Two MONKEYS came inside.

Rahul and Raghav came inside smiling and holding two bouquets

of roses with a tag of GET WELL SOON ANGEL. 'As expected!'

Geet thought and shook her head. They extended their

bouquets towards her and she rolled her eyes and snatched the

bouquets from their hands and what happened next was

unexpected!


Geet looked at the flowers and then looked at both of them one

by one with expressionless eyes and then suddenly her eyes

become red and she throw the bouquets at both of them one by

one.

They both dodged and looked at her shockingly. Rahul tried to

protest and next thing Geet found near her was a water jug

which was empty, so she easily threw it on Rahul and he jumped

back, it broke near his feet. he shouted, "MUMMY, Geet tu

pagal ho gayi h kya?" Raghav was hiding behind Rahul and Geet

was throwing things at both of them.


First was the empty water jug, then a knife that was kept to

cut fruits on the table, then a glass, and much more things.


She started panting heavily due to weakness. NT who was

watchng seeing the scene in front of her, shut up instantly and

looked towards Geet worriedly.

NT: Geet tu theek h na? Paani pee le.

Rahul: didi paani ka jug aur glass toh humpar throw kar

diya. Bacha kahan h paani.

NT she shook her head and called nurse inside and asked her to

get the room clean and get a glass of water. Geet drank the

water slowly and rested her back on the pillow and held her

stomach with pain.

Geet: Kutton, Kaminon, You bas***ds, tum dono ki vajah se

aaj mein hospital mein hun.

She said this cluthching her stomach tightly with pain. A nurse

came in and looked at her watch and then took out an injection

filled with medicine inside and asked Geet show her hand.

She put her hand forward making faces. The nurse put the

injection in her hand. After 2 minutes Geet's pain was gone and

she was relieved. Rahul looked at her concerned,

Rahul: I am really sorry Geet, mujhe nahi pata tha ki un

samoson se teri tabyat kharab ho jayegi varna toh mein'.

Raghav: varna toh yeh do chaar samosan aapko apne haathon

se khilate.(NT and Raghav broke into fits of laughter)

Rahul: Abey sale tu fikar mat kar Geet ke saath hi tera

bed bhi lagega.

Raghav: Kyun kya karogey?

Rahul: TU ruk to sahi, hospital se bahar chal fir batata

hun ki kya karunga.

Raghav got scared of Rahul's intentions and went out saying he

is hungry and is going to canteen. NT was looking tired so Geet

asked her to go home.

NT went home with Rahul and Geet spent little time with

Raghav. He was telling her about the practices going on for the

competition and everyone is working so hard.


Jilian took her place and is dancing with Yash now. Geet was

happy as Jilian knew all of her steps so she could easily help

Yash with the steps.


Suddenly she got an idea and she ask Raghav to get her a

participation form.

Raghav: Kyun? Aapki toh tabyat theek nhi h na, you cant

participate in the competition.


He asked munching chips.

Geet: ohho, voh mujhe'. kuch dekhna h '.. and haan kal

tak dono jakar participation kara lena varna entry nhi

milegi on the competition day.


He nodded and again started telling Geet about what they do in

the academy, the whole day.

NEXT DAY

Armaan walked in her room with Dev, Maan and NT was present

in their room. Geet made angry face seeing Dev. Dev settled his

spectacles and cleared his throat and started,


Dev: Umm, Doctor ne kaha ki Geet will be discharged in

few hours.


Nt: wow, that's a great news! Acha huya I borught your

clothes from home, wait I will call a nurse, she will help

you to change.

Geet: didu, I am not a little kid , I will change myself

don't worry.

NT Smiled and gave her clothes and Geet moved the sheets

away and jumped out of the bed happily, 'yeah, HOME!!!,

yipieee.'



PRECAP~~ Zara hatke.. Geet ka

childhood flashback!

PART 22

Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update..
Loved it...
Bt missed maaneet scene..
Eagerly waiting for geet's childhood falshback...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice...
i think its only geet's story...😕😔
Edited by maaneetmaahi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
aaj toh raghav nd rahul bach gye warna inka bed bhi lag jata hospital me🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update..atlast geet got discharge frm hospital..
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
love geet ka gussa on rahul nd raghav
but missed maaneet scene also
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update dear 😊

loved GEET reaction to both Rahul n Raghav

loved this part a lot 😆 😆 😆🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Rahul and Raghav came inside smiling and holding two bouquets

of roses with a tag of GET WELL SOON ANGEL. 'As expected!'

Geet thought and shook her head. They extended their

bouquets towards her and she rolled her eyes and snatched the

bouquets from their hands and what happened next was

unexpected!


Geet looked at the flowers and then looked at both of them one

by one with expressionless eyes and then suddenly her eyes

become red and she throw the bouquets at both of them one by

one.

They both dodged and looked at her shockingly. Rahul tried to

protest and next thing Geet found near her was a water jug

which was empty, so she easily threw it on Rahul and he jumped

back, it broke near his feet. he shouted, "MUMMY, Geet tu

pagal ho gayi h kya?" Raghav was hiding behind Rahul and Geet

was throwing things at both of them.


First was the empty water jug, then a knife that was kept to

cut fruits on the table, then a glass, and much more things.





eagerly waiting for next update


(sorry for late editing)


Edited by -gurtimaniac- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Harshitabedi


I will try to give more maaneet moments... as jab mein likhni bethti hun na Maaneet ke liye dimag blank hota h 😆...
And dont worry No long long armaan and geet parts... 😃



blank hotha hey matlab..
🤔 .
in this update too no maaneet..
no maan in the story only geet
😔
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetmaahi



blank hotha hey matlab..
🤔 .
in this update too no maaneet..
no maan in the story only geet
😔


SoRr... umm... pkka man ko bhi daal dungi in betwen )
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update yar.
geet is so cute&addorable.
missed maan a lot.hehehehe.

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