AR: Just Be With Me FF Updated part 3-pg 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ok, I'm new to this, Dont even know if I am posting this in the right section! thought I'd give it a go...so here goes...
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Part 3 Pg 2
Part 1

She left early morning as she had so many meetings scheduled today; somehow all the important meetings ended up on one day! She left the house at 6am. Looking at her phone she was thinking about how he hadn't called in a while and the last phone call they had, he said he didn't know if he would be back for another week yet. This made her feel upset, it was her birthday today and he wasn't going to be there today. Thoughts went back to the conversation.

FLASHBACK

Armaan: I don't know, I've got so much work and so many meetings.

Riddhima: You won't be able to make it back for my birthday?

Armaan: I really don't think I will, you know how this stuff is and how a small decision takes ages. I want to be there, you know that.

Riddhima: I know, I'm not blaming you, it's just, I'll miss you she said softly

Armaan: I'll try my best. I have to go, meetings going to start. I'll chat to you soon. Bye.

Riddhima: Bye she just about got that in before he disconnected, she felt upset that he probably won't be able to make it back for her birthday.

They hadn't talked since then so she assumed he couldn't make it and so didn't call her as it would upset her more.

She got to her destination and got out of the car and headed inside the building.

On the other hand at the Gupta house, the doorbell rang and Rahul and Muskaan's 4 year old kid Aryan opened the door with his mum standing behind him.

Aryan: UNCLE!!! He shouted in excitement

Armaan: Hey buddy, what's up?

Muskaan: Come in Armaan.

Armaan walked in the house with a big box in his hand.

Aryan: What is in there uncle? Pointing at the box

Armaan: hmmm, lots of things, come and see.

He opened the box and a big smile came on his face. The box was filled with decorations and other bits and bobs.

Aryan: Can we blow these balloons up?

Armaan: Of course we can buddy.

Rahul: Hi Armaan he said as he walked into the room All set?

Armaan: Hi Bhai, yes all set pretty much, rohan is coming down in a little while with some stuff.

He made his way into the main room of the house and they started to get to work. Moving furniture to make space, blowing up balloons and putting up decorations, Muskaan was baking a cake in the kitchen while the men where sorting out the main room. Aryan was playing with a new game that Armaan had bought him.

Muskaan came into them main room and looked around.

Muskaan: Wow, it looks great!

Rahul: Thanks to Armaan, you've thought of everything he said looking towards Armaan.

Muskaan: Well he has been planning this for a while, can't believe you managed to keep it a secret from Rids for this long.

Rahul: I know, all the phone calls and conversations we have had about this, they seem like they were ages ago when really it hasn't been long at all.

Rahul and Armaan thought back to all the conversations they had where Armaan had asked if it was ok to have a party at their house. He told them that he would plan everything and organize it all but he knew Riddhima would love it if it was at her own home.

Riddhima's mom and dad walked in to the room.

Dad: wow, fabulous job you guys.

Mom: yeah well done, it looks great. Armaan Thank you

Armaan: Come on Aunty, I've told you so many times, you don't need to say thank you he said smiling at her, she smiled back.

Armaan: Ridhaan he shouted

Ridhaan: yes Uncle? He said walking into the room

Armaan: Want to help with these balloons?

Ridhaan: his face lit up yes please.

Armaan: Come on.

Rahul, Muskaan, Mom and Dad all looked at the both of them having fun whilst blowing up the balloons and playing with them.

Muskaan: He's so good with him

Rahul: Yeah he is. He said with a smile.

There was a knock on the door; Muskaan went to open it,

Rohan: Hi Bhabi

Muskaan: Hello Rohan, How are you? Come in

Rohan: fine thanks he walked in with a box in his hand

Rohan: Bhai, the food stuff is in the car.

Armaan and Rohan went out to unload the car, Rahul followed to give them a hand.

Everything was set up; now all they had to do was wait for the 'Birthday Girl'.

She pulled up outside her home at 7 in the evening, she had been out of the house all day, this was a first for her birthday. She walked up to the door, realising she forgot her keys, she rang the doorbell. Looking down at her watch to see the time, the door opened, when she looked up she was shocked!

Armaan: Yo!

Riddhima: huh? What? How? When did you come?

Armaan: its good to see you too, no Hi or Hello?

Riddhima: finally realising she jumped in his arms, he smiled, this was the reaction he was hoping for. He loved surprising her, the smile on her face is always so worth it.

Armaan: Happy Birthday he whispered while still in an embrace.

Riddhima: I can't believe it, Hi! She said as they were coming out of the hug.

Armaan: wasn't going to miss your birthday now was I.

Riddhima: I'm glad you didn't she said smiling, but then remembered that he hadn't called since the last few days and she thought he wasn't coming

Riddhima: hitting at his chest your so bad, you didn't even tell me you were coming, I thought you had meetings and work and meetings and work!

Armaan: Hey he said holding on to her hands Come on, I'm sorry, I wanted to give you a surprise, he looked at her with a puppy face. Forgiven?

Riddhima: I cant even stay mad at you for long! They both smiled as she said that.

He led her to the main room.

All: SURPRISE! HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Riddhima: Oh My God! She looked around seeing all her family and friends, a big smile adorned on her face. She was hugging her family and friends when he slipped away to the food area to make sure everything was ok.

Riddhima: Thanks guys she said as her mom and dad and bhai and Bhabi were infront of her while she was hugging Aryan.

Muskaan: It was Armaan's idea

Rahul: yeah, he's been calling me while planning it all.

Mom: He's been here since you left for work to set up everything.

She looked up to see him at the food area; he turned around and saw that she was looking at him. He motioned his head up to say 'what'? She mouthed a thank you and he smiled at her. He turned around and started sorting out some of the placement of food.

Riddhima: Armaan she said while putting her hand on his shoulder from the back. He turned around

Armaan: Hey, you like it?

Riddhima: It's awesome!

Rohan: Bhai, shall I put these here? He said while putting the tray down, he noticed Riddhima there. Oh, Hi Riddhima Di, Happy Birthday giving her a hug.

Riddhima: Thanks, when did you come?

Rohan: Just today, here for about a week.

Riddhima: that's great. And thanks.

Rohan: it okay, Bro did most of it, I just helped out.

Riddhima: yeah so I've heard she said looking at Armaan with a smile, who smiled back, she went up to him and gave him a side hug and smiled.

Rohan: Do you want something to eat?

Riddhima: Yeah, maybe later.

Armaan: come on, you've been out all day, have something, I'll put some stuff in a plate for you, and you go and meet everyone. Giving her a push from the back to motion her to go and picking up a plate in his hand, he puts some food on the plate.

The party was in full swing, everyone was enjoying it a lot.

Mom: Riddhima come and cut the cake.

She walked towards the cake and saw it, it was a chocolate cake with white icing reading 'Happy Birthday to our angel' she looked up at Muskaan.

Riddhima: Bhabi it looks awesome!

She cut the cake and gave a piece to her mom and dad, Aryan was waiting for a slice and was very happy to receive a bite next. She fed her Rahul and Muskaan and looked at Armaan. She gestured for him to come forward and he moved his head to say no. she went forward herself and was about to put the piece in his mouth when he stopped her by taking some off the piece and fed her first, she smiled and gave him some.

Armaan went into the kitchen, he saw Muskaan picking up a tray of drinks to take out to the guests.

Armaan: Bhabi give that to me , I'll take it.

Muskaan: No, its fine Armaan, you sit down, you've done enough today.

Armaan: its fine Bhabi, I'll take it.

Muskaan: Okay then, thank you.

As he walked out he started offering drinks to the guests.

Lady: Who are you? Why are you offering the drinks?

Armaan was confused, why was she asking that.

Lady: its only people of this house and family that should be doing it and you aren't!

Armaan: im Riddhima's friend

Lady: don't know what is wrong with Riddhima, what kind of friends does she make! She is just a stupid child.

Armaan: sorry mam, you can say what you like about me but please don't say anything about Riddhima and her choices, they are hers.

Lady: Oh so you will tell me what to do and what not to do, A good for nothing loser like you?!

Riddhima: Aunty, what are you saying? She heard the last part of the conversation as she was walking past.

Aunty: He looks like a waiter handing out the drinks, Riddhima what kind of friends do you make?!

Riddhima: Aunty you have no right to speak about my friends like that, he is my friend, infact he is my best friend and I wont tolerate a word against him.

Aunty: Really, you will speak to me like this? Do you have no respect? You don't seem to have respect for your family so they cant exactly be proud of you, have you ever done anything to make them proud, such a disgrace!

Riddhima was shocked; she couldn't say anything, had she really not made her parents proud ever. She had tears in her eyes. Armaan saw this and immediately looked at the lady:

Armaan: You have no right to speak to her like that, you are in her house dammit. You can speak to me how you want but how dare you speak to her like that. He was angry, he saw that Riddhima was moving away, he left the lady giving a hard glare and ran towards Riddhima. She was heading towards the kitchen. She got in and started sobbing badly, Armaan followed her, he put the tray down and he embraced her straight away. It was heartbreaking seeing her cry like that.

Armaan: Hey shhh while still hugging her.

Riddhima: Armaan Am I really a disgrace, are my parents not proud of me, she was sobbing and trying to speak. She suddenly remembered what her aunty had said about Armaan and pulled out of the hug.

Riddhima: How dare she say that stuff about you!!

Armaan: hey, wiping her tears listen, I don't care about what she says about me. But I need you to know that you are not a disgrace, how could you be?! You're an amazing daughter, sister, aunt, and friend. And I know that every one is very proud of you and always will be, your mom, dad, brother, Bhabi, even Ridhaan looks up to you, he loves you so much. And even I am proud of you. He said giving her a smile. Now stop crying, it's your birthday and your party is going on without you! Come on lets go back.

Riddhima: You go, am coming.

Armaan: You Sure? She nodded; he knew she just needs a minute so he said

Armaan: okay, I'll go check where Ridhaan has got to, he's probably getting bored in this grown up party, Ill see you out there Riddhima. She smiled at him and he turned around and saw Muskaan standing at the door, he smiled at her and went to the main room.

Muskaan walked up to her and said the same.

Muskaan: He's right, were all proud of you, don't take any notice of what Aunty says, you know what she is like! And by the way you've got a great friend there she smiled

Riddhima: I know J

On the other hand.

Rahul: Aunty why is Riddhima crying?

Aunty: she's just making a big deal about what I said, what did I say wrong. I mean, what kind of friends does she have, does she have no sense in decisions.

Rahul: Aunty what are you talking about??

Aunty: That Armaan or whatever his name is, he looks like a casanova type, what is she doing making friends with a boy like him.

Rahul: Aunty he is nothing like that. You don't even know him so how can you say stuff like that about him. He is a great guy, and Riddima;s best friend. If mom and dad don't have a problem with him, then you shouldn't be saying things like this to Riddhima. He's practically part of the family. Saying this he walked away, angry at his Aunt for making Riddhima cry.

As she walked back in the main, looking around she was searching for someone, not one person but two. She noticed them sitting on the couch at the far end of the room opposite the TV. She smiled as she thought of them both chilling their playing games.

She got to the sofa and Armaan and Ridhaan were playing a racing game on the console.

Riddhima: Hey, there space for me? She said pointing at the two-seater sofa they were sitting on.

Ridhaan: Bua he said all excited, he stood up on the sofa as soon as he saw her

Riddhima: she smiled and walked towards him, took him in an embrace and sat down putting him on her lap, she looked at Armaan, who gave her a smile while putting his arm around her.

They carried on playing the game with Riddhima playing with Ridhaan against Armaan. Two pairs of eyes were looking at them.

Muskaan: That is so your sister, her birthday party is going on and she is sitting playing games with Armaan and Ridhaan on the sofa she said laughing a little.

Rahul: I know, she's always been like that, so simple.

Muskaan: Armaan is a great friend to her and he is so fond of Ridhaan. He was telling Riddhima earlier that he will go look for Ridhaan because he will be getting bored. So sweet isn't it.

Rahul: yeah, he asked me when he came from the kitchen if I knew where Ridhaan was. Looking at the three of them he smiled.

As people were starting to leave they were coming to say bye to Riddhima, Riddhima was falling asleep on Armaan's shoulder, and Muskaan took Ridhaan a little while ago as it was his bed time. Armaan looked towards Riddhima and saw that she was asleep. She had a long day, waking up at 5am and getting out of the house at 6am and then returning at 7pm and then the party!

Armaan: She's fallen asleep, she has had a really long today he said as the last few were coming over to say bye. Everyone had now left. Muskaan came towards Armaan and Riddhima.

Muskaan: she's asleep? When did she fall asleep?

Armaan; A little while ago, I'll go put her in her room.

Muskaan: you sure? I can call Rahul.

Armaan: No its fine, Ill take her he said as he got up and picked her up in his arms. He took her to her room and put her down on the bed. Covering her with the duvet, he planted a small kiss on her forehead and said Happy Birthday once again and left the room.

Thanks for reading, I'd really appreciate some feedback.
Edited by marhaba1 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome! loved it!
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Thanks :)
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I appreciate your comments guys, thanks. Ive nearly finished up the next part, will upload soon
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PART 2 Here goes...

It was a Sunday afternoon, Armaan and Rohan were sitting watching TV, the doorbell rang, and they both looked at each other wanting the other to get up. Rohan finally decided to get up and answer the door.

Riddhima: Hi

Rohan: hey Di

Riddhima: What took you so long to answer the door? She said as she walked in. They both looked at each other and she understood.

Riddhima: so lazy! They both smirked So why did you call me here Armaan? She said looking at him.

Armaan: were going out to have lunch, so thought you could join us

Riddhima: cool.

They walked out of the house, getting in the car, Armaan driving, Rohan sitting at the front passenger seat and Riddhima sitting behind. They had been driving for 10 minutes now.

Riddhima: Um, Rohan, open the glove compartment please…

Armaan looked at her through the mirror and smiled.

Rohan: he looked at his brother and then turned to look at Riddhima

Rohan: um okay, he opened it.

Riddhima: there should be some sweets in there she said smiling.

Rohan: looking at the amount of stuff in shock woah! There's so much stuff in here, Bhai there's so much papers and rubbish in here. He said looking at him

Armaan: don't look at me, its all her. She stuffs that with anything and everything!

Riddhima: Oh come on, whatever, anyways there should be some mints in there Rohan, can you see them?

Rohan: rifling around the stuff he found the mints and took them out, handing them to her here you go.

Riddhima: Thanks she said smiling Want some? She asked as she held them out to him.

Rohan: No thanks

Riddhima: Armaan?

Armaan: No, I'm good.

Riddhima: okay.

They entered the caf and sat at a table.

Riddhima: wow, this place hasn't changed one bit she said smiling

Rohan: you been here before?

Armaan: yeah, we used to come here a lot, haven't come in ages so thought why not today he said smiling.

Rohan: cool, so what do you recommend?

Riddhima: the Panini's are good here. But take a look at the menu, you might find something.

Waiter: what would you like?

Armaan: can we have one chicken Panini with the chilli sauce he said looking at her while she smiled. And a tuna baguette and looking at Rohan

Rohan: I'll have a tuna and sweet corn Panini please.

Waiter: Drinks?

Armaan: sprite

Riddhima: Oasis

Rohan: coke

The food had come and all three of them were eating

Riddhima: So Rohan, How's college going?

Rohan: Yeah, its going ok, lots of assignments recently but its good so far.

Riddhima: That's good, so any girlfriends? She asked smiling

Rohan: Diii

Riddhima: what dii? She smiled sheepishly you can tell us, its only me, oh and your bro!

Armaan: what do you mean Oh and your bro!

Rohan: no seriously there isn't anything to tell

Armaan: you sure?

Rohan: yes Bhai

Riddhima: hmm I think he's scared to say in front of you she said pointing at Armaan smiling

Armaan: What rubbish, he's not scared of me! Are you? He asked softly looking at Rohan

Rohan: Of course not Bhai

Armaan: See! He said pulling his tongue out at Riddhima as she smiled. He looked back to Rohan. No but seriously, you do know you can tell me anything about anything? I'll always be here.

Riddhima smiled as he said that, she knew their relationship was special. She knew Rohan would gladly tell his brother if there was something, she was just teasing him.

Rohan: Of course I know that Bhai, and believe me I would tell you if there was something and I know your there for me, you always have been he said smiling.

They had finished there food and so where heading out.

Rohan: That was nice.

Armaan: glad you enjoyed lil bro.

In the car ride on the way home

Armaan: you coming to mine or you want me drop you home?

Riddhima: drop me home please, need to sort out some stuff for work tomorrow.

He took the turn leading to her house

Riddhima: so you're back to work after 2 weeks tomorrow

Armaan: yeah he said grumpily

Riddhima: Oh come on, you had like two weeks away!

Armaan: yeah but I wasn't partying, I was still working over there aswell

Riddhima: yeh, but change of scenery right

Armaan: Yeah, I guess so.

Riddhima: what time are you in tomorrow?

Armaan: 8 I think, you?

Riddhima: half 8-9

He pulled up outside her house

Armaan: cool Ill see you tomorrow then.

Riddhima: You not coming in?

Armaan: another time, I have loads of stuff to sort out for work aswell.

Riddhima: okay then, as she was getting out of the car.

Riddhima: Bye Rohan.

Rohan: Bye Riddhima Di

Riddhima: Bye Armaan, see you tomorrow

Armaan: yup, Bye Riddhima.

The next day, she walked in the canteen and saw him.

Riddhima: Hi

Armaan: turning around Hey, getting a coffee, you want one?

Riddhima: yeah, please.

Armaan: he smiled and turned around to order.

As they were walking out

Guy: Hi Riddhima

Riddhima: Hi Prateek, how is everything going? Settled in okay?

Prateek: yes thanks.

Riddhima: turning to Armaan oh Armaan, this is Prateek our newest recruit and Prateek this is Armaan.

Armaan: taking his hand out Hi

Prateek: shaking his hand, Hi nice to meet you.

Armaan: so, how are you finding it here?

Prateek: its good, good so far.

Riddhima: He's working with us on the new project.

Armaan: oh, ok cool. About that, I wanted to get caught up on the details for that, so are you guys available to meet up after work?

Riddhima: hmm that depends, are you providing dinner? She asked as she smiled.

Armaan: he smiled, Yes, I will be providing dinner.

Riddhima: then I can come!

Armaan: turning towards Prateek. You ok to come? I know its asking a lot telling you to discuss work after hours especially when you've just started as well, if not, its cool, we can do it tomorrow during work?

Prateek: No, it's absolutely fine. I can get to know you guy's better as well.

Armaan: you might regret the getting to know you better part! Especially her he said rolling his eyes towards Riddhima.

Riddhima: Nudging him Oi! and he's suppose to be my best friend!

The doorbell rang and Armaan opened the door, it was Prateek

Prateek: Hi Armaan

Armaan: Hey, come in

They walked towards the main room and Prateek saw someone on the sofa.

Armaan: that's my brother Rohan

Rohan: looking up Hi

Prateek: Hi.

Armaan: Take a seat, Riddhima is on her way, you want a drink or anything?

Prateek: I'm ok thanks.

The doorbell rang; Armaan went to answer the door.

Ridhaan: Hi Uncle he said excitedly

Armaan: he smiled hey buddy, have you come to do some work aswell?

Riddhima: Sorry, He was just so insistent in coming to his 'uncles' house!

Armaan: hey, its fine I was just kidding, of course he has come to see his Uncle.

As they walked into the main room Prateek and Rohan looked up.

Rohan: wow, Ridhaan has come today! Ridhaan smiled at Rohan Hi Riddhima Di

Prateek: looked at Rohan calling her Di, and looked back a Riddhima Hi

Riddhima: Hi Guys she saw Prateek looking at Ridhaan This is my nephew Ridhaan

Prateek: Oh, Hi Ridhaan he said looking at him.

Ridhaan: smiled nervously and went closer to Riddhima

Riddhima: he's a little shy with new people

Prateek: Oh, will he be okay here while we discuss the work

Riddhima: Yeah, he will be fine; he'll just sit on the sofa and play on his console.

Rohan: Ok, I'll be upstairs watching TV, see you guys later, have fun!

Riddhima: we will!

They had been discussing the project for a while now and Ridhaan had fallen asleep on the couch. The doorbell rang, Armaan went to answer it and came back with a box of Pizza.

Riddhima: What! You didn't cook for us? She said dramatically while laughing

Armaan: Ha ha very funny.

Armaan: Rohan he shouted foods here!

Rohan: coming he shouted back.

Armaan and Riddhima got up to get the stuff from the kitchen.

Ridhaan woke up, as he started to sit up he was looking at his surroundings trying to figure out where he was, he recognized the house as his 'uncles' and saw a picture of Armaan on the wall. He remembered he came here with his Bua, But he couldn't see Riddhima anywhere. He looked up and saw Prateek.

Prateek: Hey

Ridhaan: he was a little scared as he didn't know this person. His eyes were tearing up and he started to cry.

Prateek: Hey, you ok.

Armaan came in the room with the drinks while Riddhima was still in the kitchen choosing the sauces from his cupboard.

He saw Ridhaan crying and went straight to him and picked him up in his arms.

Armaan: hey buddy, Ridhaan, ssshh what happened huh? Ssshh

Ridhaan's sobs were subsiding as Armaan was talking to him.

Ridhaan: He picked his head up from Armaan's shoulder and saw Prateek, he started to get teary again.

Armaan: hey, he is an uncle to.

Ridhaan: No, You are my uncle he said putting his head back on his shoulder.

Armaan: ok, stop crying. He said while caressing his head.

Ridhaan stopped crying but was still holding on to Armaan.

Riddhima came in the room with sauces.

Riddhima: Gosh Armaan, I can never find anything, you always mess it up she stopped as she saw him holding Ridhaan and hearing Ridhaan Sniffle a little

Armaan: Look Ridhaan, Bua is here.

Ridhaan turned to look at his bua and held his hand out

Riddhima: what happened? She asked while taking him from Armaan.

Armaan: he woke up and got scared because we weren't here.

Prateek: yeah but as soon as Armaan came and held him he started feeling better. I guess he recognizes you really well he said looking at Armaan. Armaan told him I was an uncle too, but he said only he was his uncle, he seems really attached to you.

Riddhima: well I should think so; he has known him since he was born.

Prateek: Oh, you guys are really good friends then

Riddhima: well yeah, he's my best friend! She said laughing as Armaan smiled. He was one of the first to see him at the hospital aswell. She smiled as she looked at him and remembered that day.

FLASHBACK

Riddhima: what?!?! She said talking into the phone.

Mom: she's gone into labour, were at the hospital.

Riddhima: Ok, I'm coming.

She turned around to see Armaan finished talking to another staff member, as the person left, Riddhima got to Armaan

Riddhima: Bhabi is at hospital!

Armaan: what? Its time?!

Riddhima: Yeah, I need to go!

Armaan: Um Ok, ok..Um…I'll take you in my car, he said hurriedly come on. I'll just tell someone we are going. You head towards my car. He said and then ran.

They were both in the car, they were at a traffic light when Riddhima saw a shop.

Riddhima: Armaan, can we go there quickly and pick up some stuff?

Armaan pulled up at the next opportunity and they both got out of the car and ran into the shop, as they went in they both went in different ways. Riddhima got a teddy bear, a card and a big blow up balloon which read 'congratulations'. Armaan picked up a bunch of flowers for her; they both reached the counter when Riddhima's phone rang

Riddhima: Yeah…No way! Congrats bro!

Armaan: what!?

Riddhima: It's a boy!

Armaan: what?! No way…awesome!

Riddhima: Hold on she ran to the balloons and changed it for the one that read 'It's a Boy' she got back to the counter and they paid for the stuff.

Walking into the hospital she was so excited, they saw her mum and dad at a distance and walked faster towards them.

Riddhima: How's Bhabi?

Mum: she's doing fine

Riddhima: and my Nephew? She said with a smile

Dad: he is good too, go in go on, we've just seen them.

She walked into the room and she saw her bro holding the baby and Muskaan smiling as she turned and saw Riddhima

Riddhima: congratulations!!!

Rahul: Thanks sis, come and see your nephew

She walked towards him

Riddhima: Aww he's so cute! Muskaan smiled

Riddhima: Bhabi you ok?

Muskaan: yeh, im fine.

Rahul: so, do you want to hold your nephew 'bua'

Riddhima: smiled wide as she heard 'bua' of course I do! Give him to me please.

She slowly took him from her brother, looking at him she gave him a kiss on his forehead.

Rahul: hey Armaan, he saw him standing near the door. Hi, come in, what are you doing at the door?

Armaan: sorry, didn't want to intrude, family moment and all.

Riddhima: don't be silly Armaan, come in

Muskaan: Come in Armaan

He walked towards Riddhima as she was holding the baby.

Armaan: he's gorgeous looking towards Muskaan

Armaan: congratulations!

Rahul: Thanks

Muskaan: Thanks

Armaan: How are you? He said looking at Muskaan

Muskaan: I'm fine, thank you.

FLASHBACK END

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Part 3
She was just sitting there, lifeless, a tear stricken face staring into space, with all her family around her, but she didn't look up, just stared at the ground. Just then a man was walking past, he looked up and saw her, took another step and looked back to see if it was definitely her. He was so confused, what was she doing here? What's happened? He walked towards her, seeing her so still he moved to her bhabi.

Man 1: what's happened?

Bhabi: she looked at the source of the voice Rohan? ... It's dad she said in a low voice, sniffing. He's unconscious, we don't know what is happening, and they are saying he needs to wake up soon.

Rohan: Is she ok? Looking towards her.

Bhabi: taking a look at her she hasn't said anything since its happened, she hasn't moved from there, she's been crying all this time and now her eyes are even dry, I'm worried about her.

He looked at her and took his phone out of his pocket, dialling the number hoping he would pick up the phone quickly.

Somewhere else, a guy was getting into his car, heading for a meeting. He was at the traffic light when he heard his phone going off and buzzing in his pocket. He answered using his hands free.

Armaan: Hello?

Rohan: Bhai

Armaan: Rohan, Hi lil bro, what's up?

Rohan: Bhai, I'm at the hospital

Armaan: His smile suddenly disappeared Why? Nervously What's happened?

Rohan: no, I've just come for a check up

Armaan: and everythings fine, yeah?

Rohan: yes, I'm fine

Armaan: breathing a sigh of relief Thank god.

Rohan: I don't know how I'm going to say this, oh man Bhai, um Riddhima Di is here.

Armaan: Suddenly froze, he parked up on a side road. Whats happened?

Rohan: I was heading out and saw her here, her dads unconscious, I think he will be fine but they are waiting for him to wake up, bhai, she's in a really bad state.

Armaan: which hospital are you at? He said impatiently

Rohan: City hospital

Armaan: ill be there in a few mins.

Rohan knelt down to riddhima, he looked up at her.

Rohan: Riddhima Di, Bhai is coming, he will be here in a few mins.

Riddhima looked up and acknowledged what he said, she didn't say anything.

Two pairs of eyes were watching Rohan

Aunty: who is that boy?

Rahul: that's rohan, Armaans brother.

Aunty: oh that Armaan, her 'best friend', she said sarcastically

Rahul: Aunty please, not now.

Aunty: why is he calling her Di?

Rahul: because he takes her as his Di, he's known her for years.

Aunty: Hmph

Rohan went downstairs. I should go to the front so Bhai knows where he's going.

He got to the entrance and saw his brother walking in.

Rohan: Bhai he called out.

Armaan: He heard Rohans voice, looked up and acknowledged him.

Rohan: It's this way

Armaan followed Rohan in the lift, down the corridor and he looked up.

He was so distressed by the sight in front of him. There she was, his best friend, so lifeless, looking so drained. He walked up to her slowly and acknowledged her family members around her with a nod; he wanted to go straight to her.

Rahul: Thank god he is here looking at Armaan

Aunty: why, what can he do?

Rahul ignored the comment and looked at Riddhima, hoping that now she will relieve all that she has built up inside her.

Armaan knelt down infront of her, he put his hand on hers, she looked up. He felt so helpless, she was clearly drained. He put his hand on her cheek, she looked at him with tears in her eyes and just engulfed him. He embraced his arms around her, protecting her. She was sobbing.

Armaan: he whispered in her ear "sshhh, everything will be ok"

Riddhima: Armaan, Dad…that's all she could say in between her sniffles

Armaan: he'll be fine, everything will be fine, I promise. He just kept repeating.

They stayed in the hug for a while and as he pulled out, he wiped her tears, got up and sat next to her on the bench all the while holding on to one of her hands. He sat down and she dropped her head on his shoulders, he kept his arm around her waist and kissed her forehead. He looked up to see Rahul giving him a thankful look, he reciprocated with a blink of his eyes assuring he will always be there for his sister. he saw her aunty and she gave him a confused look, he just looked away and concentrated back to Riddhima who was falling asleep on his shoulder.

After a little while, the doctor came out and told the family that the patient was now conscious. Riddhima looked up, the family began to go into the room. She looked at her father and walked forwards, Armaan stayed back at the door,

Her dad looked up to see everyone,

He looked at his wife, sitting next to him

Dad: Hey, am fine. He said looking at her and then looking at everyone else.

He saw riddhima, his daughter.

Dad: Come here, She came and sat down next to him on the other side of the bed, her brother and bhabi standing behind her.

Riddhima: Dad

Dad: hmm, you look like you have been crying for days, he said trying to lighten up the mood as he tried to giggle a little bit.

She looked up at him.

Riddhima: Dad, we were so worried. She said softly

Dad: he understood the tone I know, but I'm fine and you could have made yourself ill the way you have been crying, I can tell by your face.

He looked down.

Rahul: Dad, she's been beside herself, it's a good thing that Armaan came when he did.

He saw Armaan standing at the door.

Dad: Come in, why are you standing outside?

She looked at him, she knew he was standing there because he thought he should leave them to it, he forgets that he is a part of the family too.

He walks forward nervously; he gets to the end of the bed, holding the edge of the bed he stands there.

Armaan: How are you feeling now Uncle?

Dad: I'm fine, I want to say thank you for managing my daughter, I know how much of a handful she can be. He said giggling a little to lighten the atmosphere; Riddhima looked at her Dad in shock.

Armaan: There's no need to say thanks Uncle, I'll always be there for her and she knows that. He said looking at her, assuring her that he will always be there for her whenever she needs him. She looked at him and blinked her eyes and smiled, silently saying thanks.

A pair of eyes looking at this whole conversation, maybe I was wrong about him.

As everybody started to go home, he stayed back, sitting on the bench outside the room. Her dad was to stay the night and Rahul had to catch a flight that night, he said he will postpone but his dad told him to continue as it was important so Armaan offered to pick up her dad from hospital tomorrow when he gets discharged and they agreed. Rahul and Muskaan were leaving, his Mom was staying the night and Riddhima said she would sit in for a while more and then go home. He was sitting on the bench talking on the phone to his brother, a pair of eyes watching him.

Armaan: Yeah listen, can you do me a favour.

Rohan: Sure bhai, what is it?

Armaan: can you get me some food for Riddhima and Aunty, they haven't eaten since morning.

Rohan: Yeah, hold on, there's a shop here. There's sandwiches; cheese and salad, tuna, chicken and sweet corn, there's some pasta aswell.

Armaan: yeah, get a chicken and sweet corn for Riddhima and pasta for Aunty.

Rohan: Drinks? There's the usual coke, sprite, Pepsi, some Oasis.

Armaan: Get an Oasis for Riddhima, aunty wont like any of that, is there any juice?

Rohan: hold on; let me check, yes there is. I'll get that then. Do you want anything Bro?

Armaan: just get a chicken and sweet corn sandwich and a sprite for me, thanks.

Rohan: Sure, I'll see you in a few minutes.

Armaan: thanks bro, Bye.

As he hung up, he turned around to see her aunty standing there, he looked away not wanting a scene or anything, and he started walking away.

Aunty: Armaan

He stopped

Aunty: I'm sorry

He turned around confused.

Aunty: I'm sorry for the way I talked to you at Riddhima's birthday, I misjudged you, I can see now how much you care for Riddhima and not only her but the family also. You're a good friend. Anyway I'm just sorry.

She walked away. He went to the doctor's room to have a chat with him just to make sure everything was ok.

As he was coming out of the doctors room, he saw Rohan walking towards him.

Rohan: Here you go bhai handing him a bag.

Armaan: Thanks.

Rohan: How are they?

Armaan: they are ok, Riddhima is much better and Aunty is ok too.

Rohan: That's good. Bhai, I'll go now, I've got an early train to go back tomorrow.

Armaan: Sorry you had to end your holidays like this.

Rohan: Don't be silly bhai, As long as everyone is fine I'm cool. Actually Bhai, can you just call her out for a second, wanted to say Bye to her.

Armaan: Sure.

He went in the room to call her. Riddhima came out.

Rohan: Hi Riddhima Di, You ok?

Riddhima: hey, yeah I'm fine, you leaving?

Rohan; yeah, early morning, end of holidays and back to college.

Riddhima: tell uncle and aunty I said Hi.

Rohan: I will.

He gave her a hug and said "take care"

Riddhima: I will, you too,

Riddhima: Oh and Rohan, thanks for calling Armaan when you did.

Rohan: he smiled at her that's okay, you needed him.

Armaan came out of the room.

Rohan: Okay then bye

Riddhima: Bye, come back again soon, there's only so much of this one I can take she said nudging Armaan who was now standing with them.

Armaan: Haha, very funny.

Riddhima: smiled and said Bye one last time and went back in the room

Armaan: What time is your train tomorrow?

Rohan: 6.30am

Armaan: Ok, I'll drop you off.

Rohan: Its fine, you don't have to.

Armaan: I'm dropping you off.

Rohan: Ok then, thanks. I'll see you at home, Bye.

Armaan: Bye.

Armaan walked towards the room, he opened the door and saw that uncle was sleeping. Sitting beside Riddhima and her mom, he put the bag forward and started taking out the food.

Riddhima: What's all this?

Armaan: you both haven't eaten since morning.

Aunty: I'm not hungry, I don't really feel like eating.

Armaan: Oh Come on Aunty, Uncle is fine and you need your strength. You both look drained.

Riddhima: He's right Mom she said looking at Mom

Armaan: Thanks he said with a smile on his face, handing the food to both of them.

Riddhima and Aunty: Thanks Armaan.

Armaan: Your Welcome.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 3
She was just sitting there, lifeless, a tear stricken face staring into space, with all her family around her, but she didn't look up, just stared at the ground. Just then a man was walking past, he looked up and saw her, took another step and looked back to see if it was definitely her. He was so confused, what was she doing here? What's happened? He walked towards her, seeing her so still he moved to her bhabi.

Man 1: what's happened?

Bhabi: she looked at the source of the voice Rohan? ... It's dad she said in a low voice, sniffing. He's unconscious, we don't know what is happening, and they are saying he needs to wake up soon.

Rohan: Is she ok? Looking towards her.

Bhabi: taking a look at her she hasn't said anything since its happened, she hasn't moved from there, she's been crying all this time and now her eyes are even dry, I'm worried about her.

He looked at her and took his phone out of his pocket, dialling the number hoping he would pick up the phone quickly.

Somewhere else, a guy was getting into his car, heading for a meeting. He was at the traffic light when he heard his phone going off and buzzing in his pocket. He answered using his hands free.

Armaan: Hello?

Rohan: Bhai

Armaan: Rohan, Hi lil bro, what's up?

Rohan: Bhai, I'm at the hospital

Armaan: His smile suddenly disappeared Why? Nervously What's happened?

Rohan: no, I've just come for a check up

Armaan: and everythings fine, yeah?

Rohan: yes, I'm fine

Armaan: breathing a sigh of relief Thank god.

Rohan: I don't know how I'm going to say this, oh man Bhai, um Riddhima Di is here.

Armaan: Suddenly froze, he parked up on a side road. Whats happened?

Rohan: I was heading out and saw her here, her dads unconscious, I think he will be fine but they are waiting for him to wake up, bhai, she's in a really bad state.

Armaan: which hospital are you at? He said impatiently

Rohan: City hospital

Armaan: ill be there in a few mins.

Rohan knelt down to riddhima, he looked up at her.

Rohan: Riddhima Di, Bhai is coming, he will be here in a few mins.

Riddhima looked up and acknowledged what he said, she didn't say anything.

Two pairs of eyes were watching Rohan

Aunty: who is that boy?

Rahul: that's rohan, Armaans brother.

Aunty: oh that Armaan, her 'best friend', she said sarcastically

Rahul: Aunty please, not now.

Aunty: why is he calling her Di?

Rahul: because he takes her as his Di, he's known her for years.

Aunty: Hmph

Rohan went downstairs. I should go to the front so Bhai knows where he's going.

He got to the entrance and saw his brother walking in.

Rohan: Bhai he called out.

Armaan: He heard Rohans voice, looked up and acknowledged him.

Rohan: It's this way

Armaan followed Rohan in the lift, down the corridor and he looked up.

He was so distressed by the sight in front of him. There she was, his best friend, so lifeless, looking so drained. He walked up to her slowly and acknowledged her family members around her with a nod; he wanted to go straight to her.

Rahul: Thank god he is here looking at Armaan

Aunty: why, what can he do?

Rahul ignored the comment and looked at Riddhima, hoping that now she will relieve all that she has built up inside her.

Armaan knelt down infront of her, he put his hand on hers, she looked up. He felt so helpless, she was clearly drained. He put his hand on her cheek, she looked at him with tears in her eyes and just engulfed him. He embraced his arms around her, protecting her. She was sobbing.

Armaan: he whispered in her ear "sshhh, everything will be ok"

Riddhima: Armaan, Dad…that's all she could say in between her sniffles

Armaan: he'll be fine, everything will be fine, I promise. He just kept repeating.

They stayed in the hug for a while and as he pulled out, he wiped her tears, got up and sat next to her on the bench all the while holding on to one of her hands. He sat down and she dropped her head on his shoulders, he kept his arm around her waist and kissed her forehead. He looked up to see Rahul giving him a thankful look, he reciprocated with a blink of his eyes assuring he will always be there for his sister. he saw her aunty and she gave him a confused look, he just looked away and concentrated back to Riddhima who was falling asleep on his shoulder.

After a little while, the doctor came out and told the family that the patient was now conscious. Riddhima looked up, the family began to go into the room. She looked at her father and walked forwards, Armaan stayed back at the door,

Her dad looked up to see everyone,

He looked at his wife, sitting next to him

Dad: Hey, am fine. He said looking at her and then looking at everyone else.

He saw riddhima, his daughter.

Dad: Come here, She came and sat down next to him on the other side of the bed, her brother and bhabi standing behind her.

Riddhima: Dad

Dad: hmm, you look like you have been crying for days, he said trying to lighten up the mood as he tried to giggle a little bit.

She looked up at him.

Riddhima: Dad, we were so worried. She said softly

Dad: he understood the tone I know, but I'm fine and you could have made yourself ill the way you have been crying, I can tell by your face.

He looked down.

Rahul: Dad, she's been beside herself, it's a good thing that Armaan came when he did.

He saw Armaan standing at the door.

Dad: Come in, why are you standing outside?

She looked at him, she knew he was standing there because he thought he should leave them to it, he forgets that he is a part of the family too.

He walks forward nervously; he gets to the end of the bed, holding the edge of the bed he stands there.

Armaan: How are you feeling now Uncle?

Dad: I'm fine, I want to say thank you for managing my daughter, I know how much of a handful she can be. He said giggling a little to lighten the atmosphere; Riddhima looked at her Dad in shock.

Armaan: There's no need to say thanks Uncle, I'll always be there for her and she knows that. He said looking at her, assuring her that he will always be there for her whenever she needs him. She looked at him and blinked her eyes and smiled, silently saying thanks.

A pair of eyes looking at this whole conversation, maybe I was wrong about him.

As everybody started to go home, he stayed back, sitting on the bench outside the room. Her dad was to stay the night and Rahul had to catch a flight that night, he said he will postpone but his dad told him to continue as it was important so Armaan offered to pick up her dad from hospital tomorrow when he gets discharged and they agreed. Rahul and Muskaan were leaving, his Mom was staying the night and Riddhima said she would sit in for a while more and then go home. He was sitting on the bench talking on the phone to his brother, a pair of eyes watching him.

Armaan: Yeah listen, can you do me a favour.

Rohan: Sure bhai, what is it?

Armaan: can you get me some food for Riddhima and Aunty, they haven't eaten since morning.

Rohan: Yeah, hold on, there's a shop here. There's sandwiches; cheese and salad, tuna, chicken and sweet corn, there's some pasta aswell.

Armaan: yeah, get a chicken and sweet corn for Riddhima and pasta for Aunty.

Rohan: Drinks? There's the usual coke, sprite, Pepsi, some Oasis.

Armaan: Get an Oasis for Riddhima, aunty wont like any of that, is there any juice?

Rohan: hold on; let me check, yes there is. I'll get that then. Do you want anything Bro?

Armaan: just get a chicken and sweet corn sandwich and a sprite for me, thanks.

Rohan: Sure, I'll see you in a few minutes.

Armaan: thanks bro, Bye.

As he hung up, he turned around to see her aunty standing there, he looked away not wanting a scene or anything, and he started walking away.

Aunty: Armaan

He stopped

Aunty: I'm sorry

He turned around confused.

Aunty: I'm sorry for the way I talked to you at Riddhima's birthday, I misjudged you, I can see now how much you care for Riddhima and not only her but the family also. You're a good friend. Anyway I'm just sorry.

She walked away. He went to the doctor's room to have a chat with him just to make sure everything was ok.

As he was coming out of the doctors room, he saw Rohan walking towards him.

Rohan: Here you go bhai handing him a bag.

Armaan: Thanks.

Rohan: How are they?

Armaan: they are ok, Riddhima is much better and Aunty is ok too.

Rohan: That's good. Bhai, I'll go now, I've got an early train to go back tomorrow.

Armaan: Sorry you had to end your holidays like this.

Rohan: Don't be silly bhai, As long as everyone is fine I'm cool. Actually Bhai, can you just call her out for a second, wanted to say Bye to her.

Armaan: Sure.

He went in the room to call her. Riddhima came out.

Rohan: Hi Riddhima Di, You ok?

Riddhima: hey, yeah I'm fine, you leaving?

Rohan; yeah, early morning, end of holidays and back to college.

Riddhima: tell uncle and aunty I said Hi.

Rohan: I will.

He gave her a hug and said "take care"

Riddhima: I will, you too,

Riddhima: Oh and Rohan, thanks for calling Armaan when you did.

Rohan: he smiled at her that's okay, you needed him.

Armaan came out of the room.

Rohan: Okay then bye

Riddhima: Bye, come back again soon, there's only so much of this one I can take she said nudging Armaan who was now standing with them.

Armaan: Haha, very funny.

Riddhima: smiled and said Bye one last time and went back in the room

Armaan: What time is your train tomorrow?

Rohan: 6.30am

Armaan: Ok, I'll drop you off.

Rohan: Its fine, you don't have to.

Armaan: I'm dropping you off.

Rohan: Ok then, thanks. I'll see you at home, Bye.

Armaan: Bye.

Armaan walked towards the room, he opened the door and saw that uncle was sleeping. Sitting beside Riddhima and her mom, he put the bag forward and started taking out the food.

Riddhima: What's all this?

Armaan: you both haven't eaten since morning.

Aunty: I'm not hungry, I don't really feel like eating.

Armaan: Oh Come on Aunty, Uncle is fine and you need your strength. You both look drained.

Riddhima: He's right Mom she said looking at Mom

Armaan: Thanks he said with a smile on his face, handing the food to both of them.

Riddhima and Aunty: Thanks Armaan.

Armaan: Your Welcome.

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