Part OS: Studio Scene Replayed updated pg 5(10/12)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Confused by the title..šŸ˜† that is coz i am confused if i shud present you with my version of the studio scene... i've seen a couple of posts about the sudden change towards KC in RK... i've felt the same too... i am not saying he is not affected by Madhu but his sudden change of attitude towards KC puzzled me... see i had felt his outburst about it was genuine... he in his anger had blurted out his real stand about this ritual and that second time he had mentioned his father... RK's feelings are real whenever his father is involved...
then why the need for another enactment of KC... this OS is an attempt to explain it... my imagination which feeds on romances and mysteriesšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†.. but i understand it dampens the rishbala spirit at least for some... so read on only if you want to...
*sigh* such a long intro... but very much needed i feel😳


He watched the screen shots that played on the screen... 'screen shots' 'rushes' whatever term made it impersonal... Impersonal or fake like the props he had used for the scenes... the moon, the sieve on the tripod, the artificial trees and illuminations... the bottled water and a wrapped chocolate. But as always fate played it's dirty trick on him, catching him unaware, poking it's nose in his perfectly planned scenario.

He had tried to keep in the character of RK the superstar who presented a perfect setting for his Biwi's Karva Cauth ... something specially planned, in RK style... a scene he knew would compel the men to enact them for their lovers and wives. A glimpse into the married life of RK the superstar, an exclusive coverage of how RK's wife celebrated her Karva Cauth. But as the scene progressed on the screen he could feel the replay of the emotions her expressions had stirred up in him.. the innocence wonder in her eyes, the joy, the pride... her smile at his joke...her shy smile of acceptance at his teasing

Why did he feel his heart flip seeing the belonging in her eyes as he offered her the bottled water, so impersonal...anyone could have bought it for mere 20 rupees...As he watched the scene he could almost feel the beginning of the meddling by fate ... from his taking the chocolate for her, selected by Bittuji, where he distanced himself from even the choice of sweet for her...but fate made it personal by adding him into that little slab of chocolate, melting it with his body warmth...


continued on pg 5

OK that is it for now... sorry to leave you with an incomplete write up... but i felt i will continue with this only if there is demand ... so give me likes ...ummm how about anything between 25 - 50 likes if you want me to continue...šŸ˜‰ and i will update, if you wish it, 2morrow...busy today have a housewarming to attend 😊

PLZ REMEMBER THIS IS NOT A PREDICTION JUST MY IMAGINATION...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow...i cnt wait to read more of RKs feelings..may be his guilt seeing how genuine Madhus feeings are
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful write up Di...

very well put up in words...

His feelings for madhu r at stage of realisation... so dis is his first step towards it...



Do continue Di.. its really Lubly
Edited by shamon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ahh this is very different. i would love to see how this will be developed! do write more! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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you know something you are one of the best when it comes to writing...u should write professionally
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good one! Had crossed my mind too that it might be for show! But still dont want to accept that completely!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so sweet continue soon
its lovely šŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@bangalores: Awesum n fantastic OS!!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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BINDU YOU HAVE JUST TAKEN OUT THE WHOLE ROMANCE FROM THE SCENE
DIDNT WANT IT TO BE A CALCULATIVE DISPLAY FROM HIS SIDE

AND WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO START A FF HERE
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u r a gud writer. plz add me to ur pm list

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