KRIYANSH REUNION (PART 2) CHAP 4 UPDATED

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello guys.. iam attempting to write a ff first time so please cooperate. iam writing this ff on my favorite Jodi of rey and kriya from dil dosti dance. i will continue it from where my friend kriyansh24 has completed it.i did'nt want it to come to an end so deceided to continue it. she has very beautifully wrote this ss. if u people want you can read it. here is the link :

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2801150
i would advise u that u should read this. it is fantaboulous and help u in geeting the concep of my ff.

iam updating a small part in continuation. please di let me know whether it good or bad. so here u go...
CHAPTER 1

REY 'S P.O.V.

I am feeling very relieved today. The reason is not only this dat kriya is with me but also this that now I have let my heart out. I have shared all my feelings which I wanted to. I have got answers to all my queries and today Iam proud that my baatcutter understands me so well'I PROMISE THAT NOW I WILL NEVER LEAVE U IF U WANT THEN ALSO BAATCUTTER. I WILL GIVE U ALL THE HAPPINESS IN LIFE.

KRIYA is in kitchen pouring coffee 4 them in 2 cups. She started thinking about all the times she had spent with Rey from the very first day. (First meeting in dehradun club, when kriya calls rey line cutter, when rey helped in forming her team, when he saved her from being falling in d corridor, there first fire escape meeting, rdx sir's party, food fight, when kriya slapped rey'..etc etc.) She remembered all the times when she misunderstood rey and fought with him. She felt sad for not realizing rey's love earlier but felt happy that she has got the right person in life.

It was when hot coffee strike her hand she came back to reality. She smiled and went to rey holding two coffee mugs in her hand.

Rey saw her coming and smiled. He was about to say something to her just then kriya said..

KRIYA: REY coffee peke baton Na kaisi bani hai'

Rey took one sip.

REY (SMILING): meetha kam hai

Kriya immediately took cup from Rey's hand and tasted it.

KRIYA (CONFUSED): rey sahi to hai. App ek bar dubara taste Karoo.

REY: (He took the sip of coffee from the same place where kriya tasted it) hmm. Now it's perfect'

Kriya started blushing. They chatted for sometime and then rey felt something on his shoulders and immediately turn to look and only saw his baatcutter sleeping peacefully on his shoulder. He was mesmerized by her beauty. Her innocent face turn him on. He controlled his desire and took her in his arms and moved towards her room. He made her lie on the bed and put blanket over her and about to leave when he noticed kriya holding his shirt tightly. He didn't want to disturb her sleep so he lie beside her on her bed and caressed her head. He don't know when he drifted to sleep admiring and adoring his baatcutter.

PLEASE LET ME KNOW WHETHER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT. THE STARTING IS DONE BY MY FRIEND KRIYANSH24 SO PLEASE APPRECIATE HER.

INDEX
NOTE: PG 2
UPDATE 2: PG 2
UPDATE 3: PG 4
UPDATE4: PG10


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Vaish24 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was sweet...

looking good...

waiting for further update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update... Cont next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hmm nyc continuation

hope you match up vaishu's writes up in ur future update

bt dis was sweet

continue plzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow Happy to see the conti9nuation of the story..
Hope Vaishus charm of the SS remains intack here..
Give it a try and pm me on updates buddy!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Since its a continuation of Vaishu's story, do PM me as well. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its very cute ..!
Continew..!
Update soon..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow. . .
Awsome start. . . .
Vaishu di ka ss was brilliant,
and m realy suprisd tat u matchd to tat level. . . . . . . .
Awsome. . . .
M loving it. . . .
Update nxt part soon. . .
And do pm me wen u update. . . . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u 4 continuing this ff...pls update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks guys 4 ur coments it really means a lot to me...and i agree wth all of u dat vashali di is mind blowing writer i really hpoe i match her level and ur expectations...in btw those who want pm pls send me buddy request...iam thinking of some twists (tabhi to mazza ayega).
I think i will update on monday.

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