KRIYANSH REUNION (PART 2) CHAP 4 UPDATED - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for lovely coments and next update will be on monday and this time iam sure...and pakka a bada wala update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update

plz pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was a cute and adorable upd8
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super awesome..
pm me too wheneve updated..had sent u da buddy req😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys iam really sorry...iam tuck in some family function and writing this from phone. i have written the update but will post it in 2-3 days..
please forgive me. but i promise the lngth of the next update will surely fill it up...
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awesum update
do cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nyce updates . . . . 😊

u continued it very well 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SORRY GUYS FOR THE LATE UPDATE. I WAS STUCK. EVEN TODAY WAS A HECTIC DAY. COLLEGE KA FORM SUBMIT AND MY DANCE CLASSES. BUT I REALLY FELT TODAY TO I WILL UPDATE. SO HERE THE UPDATE. HOPE IT'S GOOD.


UPDATE 3

AUTHOR'S NOTE

In present in st.Louis swaron are not together till now. But Sharon has started realizing her feelings towards swayam. Only viha are officially couple. Baki sab (chup chup ke) will become official soon.

Now the update

Rey reached kriya's house at 3:00pm and their flight was at 7:00pm in the evening.

kriya's mom has informed Rey that she is leaving 4 office due to some urgent work and will not be able to come to airport to see off them.

Taking this as an (poutingopportunity to spend some sweet time with his baatcutter he went to her home.

At kriya's house she was still packing her stuff. Just den she heard the doorbell. She went down and opned the door she was shocked on seeing as she expected him to come late.

Rey(smiling) : hey! Kriya'

Kriya: r...Re'Rey'

Rey: wat happened? Surprise accha nahi laga.

Kriya: nahi aisie baat nahi hai'

She was sut in btw by rey

Rey: to phir mujhe andar nahi anne dogi.

She realized dat she had made him stand outside the door. She welcomed him and dey both sat on the couch.kriya gave water to rey. Then she realsisd dat her packing is not yet done.(he went to her hyper active mood)

Kriya: hey!!universe ji!! Meine to abhi packing bhi nahi ( to rey) aur rey aap itna jaldi kyu aa gae'ab mein kya karu

Due to her sudden reaction rey was starteled and straightned himself.

Rey: arre to kya hua abhi tum packing karlo and in btw I'll make coffee for both of us.

After sometime. Kriya was almost done with packing when rey came holding two coffee mugs in his hands.

Rey: so here's the coffee

They both sat on the bed in a position like rey hugging kriya from back

.they both took one sip

Kriya: very tasty

Rey: what

Kriya: coffee'Rey

Rey: anything for u "my sweet baatcutter".

They finished their coffee. Kriya took the cups and went to kitchen to put them. Rey came from behind and hold her from her waist. He put his chin on her shoulder.

Kriya: rey kya karr rahe ho chodo mujhe'

Rey: ssshhh'then he kissed her shoulder.Then he moved the hairs which were falling on her left shoulder to other side and kissed her beside her ear. This action of him sent shivers down her spine. Her stomach was doing somer saults. Then he turned her towards him. He held her by the waist. She has her hands on his shoulder. He then kissd her nect, bit her collarbone leaving a mark. This made her moan his name. She was going weak in her knees and hold rey more tightly do as to take support. Rey knew the effect he has on her so he tightened his grip around her. Tight yet possessively. Now her hands were brushinh his hairs. They both were having a desire to get each other but at the same time they knew their limits. He bent towards her. Their lips meet and they have a lip lock. They parted away when they lacked breadth. He made his way towards her cheeks. She had her eyes closed. He started planting wet kisses on her bare back ,neck'making her feel dizzy. She was getting goosebumps all over her body. They were baclk to reality when doorbell rang.

Kriya felt awkward and adjusted her dress. Rey went to see who it was. It was a courier boy he signed and took the parcel. It was for smriti. So he kept it on the sofa and went to kitchen and saw kriya standind threr he pulled her again and kissed her on her forehead. She blushed at this. He wishpered in her ears. "Baatcutter sharmate hue bahut acchi lagti ho" to this she blushed even harder

Rey then went forward to clean the coffee mugs in btw this time kriya was sitting on the kitchen slab watching him. Rey was done with his work.

Rey: chale'

Kriya (childlesley): kha'

Rey: to pure time yahi baite rahana hai kya

Kriya (pouting): aise nahi "DHAN KI BORI"

REY gave a confused look to kriya as he didn't understood wat she meant. To thais she called rey near her. Rer came near her and she turned his back towards her and climbed on rey. Rey now understood wat she want and pick her up on his back and carried her to the living room.

Rey: u know wat?

Kriya: wat'

Rey (cutely): u r such a kid

Listening this kriya chuckled and he placed her on the couch and he sat beside her. They chit-chatted for some time. In short they had galla time before they left for MUMBAI. This strengthened their bond of love 4 each other, trust on each other and above all they were two best friends who end up making love and too a very cute couple.

They both headed towards airport. They had new happiness in their heart. They both were having a genuine smile plastered on their faces during their whole drive and it was due many reasons first one being they were together others being they were going to meet their friends and kriya was going back to her dream city to fulfill her dreams'they were quite but their hearts spoke in silence it was wonder full feeling for them sitting beside their "love of life".

They reached airport on time and boarded their flight. In the flight Rey told kriya that their friends know about their relationship and their breakup. She didn't overreact as she expected and gave him a look that she is ok with it. Rest of the journey was quite when ray felt kriya's head his shoulder. She still has her headphones on her ears from which she was listening songs. He felt her shivering because her blanket has fallen from her shoulders to the right. He then removed the headphones carefully without disturbing her sleep and moved his left hand over her waist and bend down so as to pick up the blanket during this time he was so close to her that he can hear her heart beat which was beating evenly. He then picked up the blanket and tugged it to her and made himself lay in a comfortable pose.

It was 11:00pm when they landed for Mumbai.rey wake her up as he has not slept coz he was busy admiring his "sleeping beauty".

She woke up and rubbed her eyes ans they passed each other smile.

Kriya (sleepy): kya hua rey'kyu jagaya mujhe

Rey (cutely): kyoki hum MUMBAI pauch gae

Kriya opened her eyes wide and all the sleep was gone and a ting of happiness was clearly visible. They both moved out of the airport. Rey called someone and then their hired a cab and headed towards kriya's home.( despite of kriya's several pleadings Rey was adamant on leaving kriya safe till her home coz it was night time and she had luggage with her.)

They reached kriya's home. Rey advised her not to unpack her bags right now coz it was late.

Rey: baatcutter abhi apna room mat set karna. Abhi soo jao coz it's late and do it tomorrow morning.

But kriya was thinking something else. She had not eaten anything since morning in the excitement of oming to Mumbai. She moved her hands on tummy and our rey sensed thar she was feeling hungury.

Kriya (coming back to reality): haan.. kk.. I'll sleep. Rey aap jao it's getting late.

Rey: ok then'bye..goodnight J

Kriya: bye!!... rey

Rey went outside and his driver was waiting for him whom he called at airport and directed him towards the restaurant. After 10 minutes Rey went back to kriya;s house and this while kriya was thinking of the simplest thing which she can cook (loll she don't know cooking). Just then doorbell rang she thougft to herself who can be at this time and poned the door and was surprised to see rey.

Kriya: r...re'rey 'aap yaha kyo..

Rey: baatcutter kya tumhe sach mein lgta hai kit um mujhse chupka pai ki u are hungry.

Kriya was surprised to see that he noticed each and every movement of her. She just nodded

Kriya: Rey bas mein aapo itni raat ko pareshan nai karna chati thi'

Rey: kriya' don't be fool. Aaj ke baad aisa kabhi mat karna is u ever need anything just straight away say to me without thinking.

Then went to kitchen and opened the packed food and served it in the plates and brought it to dining table where kriya was already sitting waiting impatiently. Rey smiled seeing her. He was surprised to see her favorite dish and without thinking started eating. She was glad to have Rey in her life. Rey just adored her eating then she realized that Rey was also hungry and served him with her hands. They both had their dinner around 12:30 in the midnight. After having their meal kriya was feeling sleepy and so dis Rey and their bid bye to each other. Before going Rey informed her about the party and told her to be ready till 6:0pm as he will come top pick her.

Next morning

Sun was shining beautifully giving all it's light to he world. Rey and kriya were sleeping in their rooms. They wake up bye sun's rays falling on them. Rey wake up and called kriya.

Rey: good morning baatcutterJ

Kriya: good morning Rey (still closing her eyes)

Rey: ab apni aankhe kholo aur tayyar hi jao. Iam coming to ur home. Breakfast saath mein karenge.

Before kriya could tell him that she don't know cooking. He disconnected the phone and went to washroom to get ready. Kriya got ready and was pacing to and fro in the kitchen looking at various things so as to find out what should be made or what is the easiest thing which she can cook fast then idea struck her mind she opened her freeze and took out orange juice and poured it in two glass and went towards cupboard and took out magi from as this was the only thing she knew to cook. She cooked magi and put it on the dinning table when doorbell rang she opened the room. Rey smelled in air.

Rey: baatcutter tumne magii banai hai'woooh it's my favourite let's goo..

Kriya thanked her universe ji! For saving her. They both eat their breakfast and did some lovely- dovey talks. After half an rey bid bye to kriya and went outside and called swayam.

in the college

swayam 's phone ring.

Swayam: haa rey bol

Rey: dude tu abhi aa ja party ke kuch arrangements karne hai..

Swayam excused himself saying that he has some work at home. While at kriya's house she was arranging her home and remembering all the incidents that she spend with Rey, her friends and her mom.

FINALLY the most awaited evening came. THE PARTY NIGHT. Rey came to pick kriya whereas swayam reached the party venue with others. They wer continuously asking him about the surprise. They were making him mad fromtheir questions.

Vicky: abe swayam bta na kyo bulya hai yah ape.

Bharat: yaar mero ko lagta hai ye swayam apan ko mamu bna raha hai

Amar: meleko ko bhi aecha hi lagta hai ( mereko bhi aisa hi lagta hai)

Neha: swayam please telling na wat surprise it is. Neha can't wait.

Nil whispers' to Vicky: lagta hai apni nai girlfriend se milwane wala hai. Sharon ke piche bhag bhag ke frustrate ho gya hoga.

Swayam was getting mad. So he called rey.

Rey: haan dude bol watt happened'sab kuch thik hai na.

Swyam: abhi tk to sab thik hai'agar tum dono jaldi nahi aye to bahit kuch ho jayega.

Rey: chill yarr aa rahe hai just on our way..tu piche wale gate pea aaja.

Call disconnected. Rey and kriya were in car.they reached the venue. Swayam was standing there. As soon as kriya saw her bestiee couldn't control herself and ran to him and gave him a bone crushing hug followed by tears. Till then rey got down the car and saw both of them and smiled. Swayam seprated her and wiped her tears. She was about to say sorry just then he vput his finger on her lips.

Swayam: kriya iski koi jaroorat nahi hai.. I understand it was not ur fault.situatin hi aise thi. Don't blame urself. Koi aur hota to wo bhi yahi karta. Ab sabs acchi bat ye hai hum sab saath mein.

Kriya smiled btw her tears. Rey came their.

Rey: I think humme chalna chahiye. Sab intzarr kar rahe hai.

Three of them went inside.rey and swayam were in front of kriya so as to hide her.

Bharat: abe bahut ho gya tera bta ab nahi to'

Swayam: chill bharat surprise saath mein laya hun'

Everybody saw rey and

All: what!!!! Yeh hai tera surprise

Sharon: this is your surprise. Ae you..

Before Sharon could complete both of them moved aside revealing kriya and shouted in unison

Both: SURPRISE!!!!!!!!!

All were shocked to see kriya. It was silence for few minutes. Their jaws dropped. Their faces were having many emotions. They were happy seeing their best friend, their motivator, the one who changed things in their college. But they were angry on her for leaving them like this without even informing. They had much to say and much more to ask from her. Thy had many questions and wanted each and every answer from her.

Just then Neha ran to her. Firstly she slapped her tightly to which she lost her balance and fall on Rey but balanced herself and straightened herself now she has tears in her eyes. Then to everyone's surprise Neha hugged kriya. Kriya was taken aback by sudden change in her reaction. but leaving all thoughts behind she responded the hug wholeheartedly. After all she was meeting her bestiee and first friend in the college. Neha broke the hug.

Neha: kriya why coming you again in our life. Why?? Kriya why?? Tell us.

Kriya was about to speak but cut in btw.

Shaon: what will she say. She has nothing to say. She came here changed everything. And when her aim fulfilled leave us all. And to height she betrayed my best friend rey. You broke his trust. You are a stalker. JUST GO FROM HERE. WHY THE HELL DID YOU COME IN OUR LIFE!!!

Kriya on listening all this brusted in tears. Rey can not see all this so he went outside.

Bharat: haan kriya mein to apni garage mein kush tha phir tum ayi aur muje team mein liya to muje laga ki ab mere bhi sapne pure honge. Jb sab sahi chal raha tha to tu humsab ko chod ke chalii gyi'aur ab jb hum move on karne ki kosish karr rahe hai ti kyu ayi ho'

Swayam: guys listen to me ek bar uski baat to sun lo shayad tum logo ko lage job hi usne kiya wo hum sab ke liye kiya. Ek bar use bolne to do.

He looked at kriya to speak but she was sitting on the and crying hard on listening all this from her friends for whom she made soo much sacrifices. She left hr dance, her rey for them. She was shocked that they all think this about her. Neha was standing in corner and crying and even vishaka was criying.

Then swayam called rey from outside and decided that now they will tell them the whole truth.

THAT'S IT GUYS'IAM TIRED OF WRITING. I WANTED TO GIVE WHOLE PARTY UPDATE IN THIS IAM HELL TIRED TODAY...JHOOTAS, CHAPPLAS ALL WELCOMED PLEASE DO LEAVE UR PRECIOUS COMMENTS

PRECAP: PARTY CONTINUED'AND MUCH MORE FUN TO COME.

PLESE LIKE AND COMMENT AND NEXT UPDATE ON PG 10.

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Edited by Meesocute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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all parts r amazing..
kriyansh romance... woww😳
loved it...
sabko kya zarut thi bakwas karne ki
kriya ne unke liye kitna kuch kia aur woh sab usse kitna kuch suna rahe the😡
waiting 4 nxt part
plz do pm..
Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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all parts r just oossoommm...!!!! Loved d bonding btw kr...!!! Jst woww...!!!! Kriyam r choo chweettt...!!!! I m sending u buddy rqst...plzz pm me nxt tym whn u update...nd update soon...!!!

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