Luv Shuv..!! A Punjabi Lovestory..!! KR + SS ff - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
I wonder how i missed this ff!!!!
Chalo koi baat nahi...der aye durust aye!!😆 Read all the parts at once
The updates r hilarious🤣, but cute n sweet at the same time😳😊

Waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the updates together!! And it was such a fun read!!Sach main bohut maza aya. I just love all the characters. I just love the fact that everyone is so weird and pagal!! Looking forward to the next update. Im sure it's going to be as mazedar as the previous updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update!!
So Sharon also lyks Swayam yipeee!!
Nd Rey bhi lyks Kriya...matlab shuru to ho hee gya h!
M very excited now!!
update soon nd All d best for d exams...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
SUPER AWSM UPDATE
PLZ. UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 12 years ago
will there be any update on this ????
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yup chahiye...woh bhi jaldi chahiye...
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Posted: 12 years ago
CHAPTER 5

Aaj aap samajh jayenge y dey say??????????
beti toh beti baap re baap …………….. ; after so much of chaos and adla badliwala romance …
There is still lot of crackers yet to burst and lot more dhamaka yet to happen chalo den let's find out what's it all about?????

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At shekhawat's dinning table, everyone's gathered dere except krisha's mom and are staring at each other as some round table conference is going on ….

Rey to swayam ( in low tone ) : beta lagta hai aaj teri baraat nikalne ki puri tayari karke aaye hai yeh log; khush hoja shehzaade jald hi banoge tum ishqzaade . Tere shaadi ka pura program decide karne aaye honge.
Aagey barati, peeche band baaja …
Aaye dulhe raja, khol darwaja ….

Swayam : aap apne khayali pulao apne paas hi rakho bhai , agar aisa hota toh auntyji bhi saath aati ….aur yeh shaadhiwala kam, mujhe barbaadi wala invitation jyada lag raha hai ….pata nahi kyun andar se bali ka bakra wali ki feeling aari hai … jo aapki dharam gf ke kripa se main humesha banta hun…

Swayam suddenly starts dreaming that kriya and uncliji are devils trying to pull him and his angel sharon trying to save him buh fails …
Swayam (shouts): nahi……
Angry Daddy: swayam tum apni mummy ke saath rehke saas bahu serial dekhne lagey ho kya?????Woh din raat roti hain aur tum idhar udhar chilate rehtey ho ….. Yeh ghar hai yah pagalkhaana …
Sharon: diii… uncle ji ko yeh….. Ghar pagalkhaana lagta hai???Sochon aapke dekhke toh unko zoo ki yaad aayegi …

Rey( interrupts): papa to khush hojayenge is zoo ko dekhne ke paise nahi lagenge ……
Swayam: entertainment ………entertainment…….entertainment…….,
Who bhi muft ….muft….muft

DADDY –R IS VERY BUSY EATING HIS PAKODAS .
DADDY-R : BHABHIJI PAKODE TO BADE SWAAD BANE HAI …… DON'T MIND THODE AUR MILENGE
KRIYA : PAPAJI HUM BAAKI KE PAKODE PARCEL KARWATE HAI ; AND SUDDENLY SHOUTS LOUDLY ( PAR AAP KE UNCLE JI SE BAAT KARNE KE BAAD )…..
WHERE EVERYONE IS STARING SHOCKINGLY AT KRIYA ; DADDY-R IS SCARED .
DADDY-R : OYE … THAND PAO … BETAJI…. TUSSI DARADITTA MANU ….
ANGRY- DADDY TRYING TO PACIFY DADRY-R : KOI NAHI OYE KOI NAHI
DADDY –R : RUK JAA MUJHE LAST BITE KHAANE DE , FIR KARTA HUN NA TERI BAAT MAIN …
ANGRY MOM : KRIYA BETA TU TOH PAAP CHADAEYGI HUMARE SAR PE …. BETA MEHMAAN BHAGWAN DA ROOP HONDE HAI AUR TU HUMARE BHAGWAN NU NARAAZ MAT KAR …HUM APNE BHAGWAN KO BHUKHE PET NAHI BHEJTE . TERI BAAT TO HOTI RAHEGI PUTAR .
ANGRY DADDY IS NOW TRYING TO PACIFY KRIYA : AISE NARAZ NAHI HOTE BETA ,,,, TU JAISE KAHEGI UNCLE JI WAISA HI KARENGE
SWAYAM : BHAI PAPA AGAR AISA HI SATYA VACHAN DETE RAHEY TO MUJHE TOH AAP BALI KE BAKRE BANTE HUE DIKHAYI DE RAHEY HO …. WADHAIYAN JI WADHIYAN
REY SLAPS SWAYAM GENTLY : OYE SHUBH SHUBH BOLA KAR
ANGRY DADDY TO KRIYA : GHUSSA THUK DE PUTAR ….
REY TRYING TO TEASE KRIYA : YAHA THUKNA MANA HAI …
SHARON : LOJI INHI KI KAMI THI AAG MAIN GHEE DAALNE KE LIYE ….
BY DEN DADDY-R IS ABOUT TO PULL HIS GOLU (REY'S CHEEKS ) SWAYAM STARTS SINGING
JOH WADA KIYA WHO NIBHANA PADEGA ….. ( REMEMBER SHARON PROMISED TO PROTECT REY AND SWAYAM FROM UNCLE JI )
SHARON THE PROTECTOR : PAPAJI AAJ REY KE DAATH MAIN DARD HAI
KRIYA ( MEANLY ): WHO TO HOGA HI ……. INKE TOOTHPASTE MAIN NAMAK JO NAHI HAI …
SWARON : SCORE BOARD 1 ALL
ANGRY MOM WHO ACCIDENTLY NOTICED REY AND KRIYA'S FIGHT SUDDENLY AND ACCIDENTLY SAYS
ANGRY MOMMY : PATA HAI MUJHE NA IS KRIYA AUR REY KO LADTE HUE DEKHAR NA WHO SWAYAM KE BACHPAN WALA CARTOON YAAD AATA HAI JOH WHO ROZ BINA KHAYE PIYE DEKHTA THA …WHO CHUHE BILLI WALA …… NAAM KYA THA USKA SWAYAM ????????
SHARON : TOM AND JERRY
THERE IS A PIN DROP SILENCE AND EVERYONE STARES AT KRIYA AND REY AND DEN LAUGH LOUDLY …BOTH GET EMBARRRESED BUT GIVE A HEARTY SMILE .
KRIYA WHISPERS IN DADY-R'S EARS
KRIYA : PAPAJI , AGAR AB AAP NE NAHI PUCHA NA … TO SACH MAIN MAINE NA ISS TABLE PAR CHADKE NAACHNA SHURU KARNA HAI BY –GOD …….. AAP BOL RAHE HO YA MAIN ……
DADDY-R : TU TOH SIDDHA TRIGGER DABATI HAI ; RUKJA MUJHE THODA TYM DE CHARACTER MAIN AANE KE LIYE ……. AISE HI NAHI MAANEGA YEH KHADUS ……

DADDY – R CLOSES HIS EYES AND REVISES HIS DIALOGUES AND SHARON PRAYS FOR HER DADDY
SHARON : BABAJI PAPAJI KI MADAD KARNA ……
DADDY-R IS IN FULL CHARACTER AND HE ANGRILY BANGS AT THE TABLE : KYA YAAR ; MAIN YAHA ITNI IMPORTANT BAAT KARAN WAASTE AAYA HUN AUR AAP LOG PAKODE SHAKODE MAIN BUSY KARARE HO ?????? AUR MUJHE PATA HAI KI JO MAIN TUJHSE MAANGNE WAALA HUN WHO TU MUJHE NAHI DE PAYEGA ??????? HUME MAAF KARO HUM NIKALTE HAI …..
ANGRY MOMMY : KHATIRDAARI MAIN KOI KAMI REH GAYI KYA ????
ANGRY DADDY : KOI GALTI HO GAYI KYA HUMSE YAAR ??? MAAF KARDE YAAR HUMARI DOSTI KI KASAM TU JOH KAHEGA ….WAISA HI HOGA …….
SWAYAM : AAJ SE AAP PARAYA DHAN HOGAYE BHAI …. AAJ SE AAP US GHAR KE ….
REY FRUSTRATED : YEH UNCLE JI KO TOH BADE ACCHE LAGTE HAI KE RAM KAPOOR KO PEECHEY chod denge..!!

FINALLY DADDY-R SAYING WHAT HE ACTUALLY WANTS TO SAY ….
DADDY-R : OYE TERE DONO PUTAR ……
EK NUMBER KI KHOTE HAI ……..
REY TO SWAYAM : IS OFFER MAIN TU BHI INCLUDED HAI
DADDY-R : OYE DISTURB NAH KARO YAAR ….MAIN KEH RAHA THA …. TERE PUTTAR JO EK NUMBER KE KHOTE HAI ……..FIR BHI …… CLASS MAIN AWAL AATE HAI …….
AUR DUSRI TARAF MERI HUNHAAR AUR SANSKAAR KRIYA JOH RAAT BHAR PADHAI KARTI HAI WOH MUSHKIL SE PAAS HOTI HAI …… NAAAINSAAFI HAI BAHUT BADI NAAINSAAFI HAI … ISLIYE MAIN CHAHTA HUN SWAYAM HUMARE GHAR AAKE KRIYA KO PADHAYE .
ANGRY MOMMY : AAPKI KAHAANI SUNKE MERI AAKHON MAIN AASUN AAGAYE PRAJI ….. MAIN PADHAUNGI KRIYA KO ???? ( BG MUSIC)
NAH JUDA HONGE HUM KABHI KHUSHI KABHI GUMM
SHARON TO DADDY : DEKHA OVER ACTING KA NATIJAAA…..
KRIYA : GAYI BHAIS PAANI MAIN
ANGRY DADDY : DEKH MITRA TU JAANTA HAI MAIN APNE BETO KO RAAT KE WAQT AKELE KAHI NAHI BHEJTA …….. YEH HUMARE GHAR KA AHEM NIYAM KE KHILAAF HAI …… AUR AB SHRIMATIJI KEH RAHI HAI WHO KRIYA KO PADHA DENGI … TOH KYA DIKAT HAI
DADDY –R : PAR KRIYA TOH RAAT MAIN PADHTI HAI AUR BHABHIJI KI NEEND KHARAB KARKE MUJHE NARK BHI NASEEB NAH HO …. TOH TUM SSSWSSWAYM KO BHEJTE TO ACCHA HOTA …….
ANGRY – DADDY : AREY MAINE TOH APNE WAQT PADHAI NAHI KI WARNA MAIN PADHA DETA LEKIN MERI NAZAR MAIN EK HUNAAR LADKA HAI JOH PADHA SAKTAA HAI ????/
HE IS ABOUT TO TAKE REY'S NAME ……
SHARON SAYS : SWAYAM , AREY UNCLE JI POORE CLASS KO KYA PADHATE HAI YEH …..
ANGRY – DADDY : MUFT MAIN ????? AND LOOKS AT SWAYAM WHO IS NOT ABLE TO FACE HIS DAD …
REY CANNOT CONTROL HIS LAUGHTER …..
DADDY-R : AREY ISSKE WAJAH SE FAIL HONEWALE BACCHE BHI PASS HUYE …..
ANGRY – DADDY : JAISE TUJHE THIK LAGEY MITRA ; TERI KHUSHI MAIN MERI KHUSHI …
DADDY –R : TO AAJ RAAT KO BHEJ DENA SWAYAM KO YAAD SE …. BETA TUMHE KHAANE MAIN KYA PASAND HAI SHARON TUMHARE LIYE BANA DEGI …..
KRIYA : DADDYJI MUJHE PATA HAI AAPKO BAHUT BHUKH LAGI HAI PAR DIALOGUES TO MAT KHAO …. AMAR AUR NILESH KI BAAT KI HI NAHI
DADDY-R : SHER KE MUH MAIN HAATH DAAL NE KO BOLTI HAI BAAP KO ???? KUCH TO TARAS KHAA AREY WOH KRIYA KEHRI THI AGAR WHO SWAYM KE DOST NILESH AUR AMAR BHI SAATH PADHATE TOH USSE AWAL AANE SE KOI NAHI ROK SAKTA ???
ANGRY- DADDY : THIK HAI SWAYAM APNE DOSTON KE SAATH TYM PE PAHUCH JAANA ,LATE MAT HONA VARNA USKE PADHASI KA NUKSAAN HOGA AND IS LOST IN DEEP THINKING
DADDY-R AND HIS DAUGHTER TRYING TO ESCAPE BEFORE ANGRY-DADDY CHANGES HIS MIND . DEY REACH THE DOOR AND
ANGRY DADDY : AREY EK BAAT PUCHNA TOH MAIN BHUL GAYA … ITNI SAARI LADKIYAN HONGI GHAR MAIN UNKA DHYAN KAUN RAKHEGA ????? BHABHI JI HAI NAHI …
DADDY-R : MAIN HUN NAA GABRU JAWAN
SHARON( SILENTLY ) : KHARATE MAARKE SOTE HAI
KRIYA ADDS : NEEND MAIN CHALTE HAI
ANGRY – DADDY : MAIN SOCH RAHA THA REY BHI SAATH JAYEGA VARNA PLAN CANCEL ………… PROBLEM SOLVED CASE DISMISSS
REY : PAPA BHI ADALAT KE RONIT ROY KI TARAH BEHAVE KARTE … BAND HUI CASE KO FIRSE KHOLTE HAI

SWAYAM : BHAI RAAT BAAKI BAAT BAAKI HONA HAI JO HO JAANE DO ..

AND DADDY-R LEAVES WITH HIS DAUGHTER AND KRIYA IS WAITING FOR NITE FULL OF FUN PAR KYA REY USSE FUN KARNE DEGA ?????? KAISA HOGA INKA UNPLANNED NITEOUT ……….. U WILL FIND OUT SOON .
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love nj & sneha..!!😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
WOW...

Mast update yar...

I am loving Swaron and KR here...

Jo wada kiya wo nibhana padega...lol

Ek ke saath ek package deal...

Ram kapoor and Ronit Roy wale line...

My god...I was smiling throughout...

Shy Sharon...tikhi mirchi Kriya...

WOWOWOW...lovely update dear...

Hope ur exams went welll..update soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update...
dialogues r hilarious 🤣
full on entertainment
luvd it a lottt

Edited by shukti_19 - 12 years ago

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