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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely dear
nice work
thanx for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great update.Loving all d natkhat behaviour of Geet and Anie.And in midst Maan's maturity at dis age is also remarkable.

And d sheni Geet's fight with anita,babaji !!!!!

Now only Maan can save d day.
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

OMG!!!! geet pulled anits hairs out...🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh oh...maan has to come to make her stop...


continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update... My Angel is in sheri mood...hehehehe loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 8



Both geet and anita are very angry on each other, none of them is backing off. Other students are watching them as this is some entertainment to them. Vicky too tried but no use. They both are fighting with each other. As it is a lunch time none of the teachers are there. And maan is also busy in practicing.

Vicky and meer finding no other option ran towards ground to call maan, only he can control her now. They ran to the towards ground saw maan still practicing. He will get angry if any one disturbs him while practicing but they have no other option now except to call him. Geet is going totally wild there, they even don't know the reason why she is hyper for such a small thing. She never cares if any of her dress gets spoiled but today its totally different.

"Bro.." shouted Vicky tensed. But maan didn't listen. Vicky called him again little raising his voice. Maan turned back and saw them. Vicky signaled him to come there. Maan throwed the ball towards others, went towards Vicky and meer.

"What Vicky?" asked maan. "Bro wo.. geet" "What happened to geet?" asked maan instantly listening her name. "Don't know bro what happened to her because of the mere dress geet is fighting with that anita. She is getting so hyper" told Vicky nervously fearing of maan's reaction. Maan closed his eyes trying to control his anger. Maan ran to the dance hall and the scene in front of him angered him more. Geet is really acting like a mad. He marched towards her and pulled her back from anita. Geet looked back angrily, but when she saw maan she turned her face aside don't want to face his anger now.

Maan dragged geet away from there but not giving a deadly glare to anita for fighting with his mishty. Maan took geet to one of the class room which is empty as all the students are busy in one or the other program. Vicky and meer looked at them going and didn't dare to follow them. Both are in anger and they will be bali ke bakre if they interfere in their fight or ruthna manana.

In the class room:

"What the hell was that geet? Do you know what you are doing?" asked maan angrily. "She spoiled my dress" told geet meekly. "So? For that simple reason you will fight like that. Cant you buy a new one ha? Is the way to behave with others geet?" shouted maan getting more frustrated with her behaviour. "That was my favorite dress" told geet again.

"Stop it geet, stop it with silly reasons of yours. Really I am fed up with your roz roz drama" told maan in anger. He didn't realize what he is speaking. But geet who listened maan is hurt, tears formed in her eyes. She looked at maan with teary eyes. Seeing her tears maan melted, he went to her and cupped her face.

"Geet I didn't mean those words. I am so sorry mishty, but what you did is wrong na mishty" tried maan to convince her. But geet is too much hurt. She jerked his hands away and looked at him angrily. "I know you don't like me, that's why you always scold me. You never talk with me nicely like you did with annie and Vicky. I am alone that's why you behave with me like that na. I don't have anyone other than papa and you all. But you never loved me I know" by now geet is crying bitterly.

"I don't want to talk to you, I don't want to talk to you. Mujhe mama ke paas jaana hain. I miss you mama" cried geet. Maan is shocked to listen this. What she is speaking all rubbish. Yes he scolds her because he don't want geet to be stubborn. How can she tell that he don't like or love her. He cant even live a minute without seeing her. He will be always worried about her and here she is saying he don't love her.

Maan tried to go close to geet but geet moved back not allowing maan to come near her. "Geet I am really sorry. You are right I am very bad" told maan. "Yes you are bad and you don't love me. You remember that dress its you only gifted me for my last birthday. And that girl spoiled my dress. If it was any other dress I would not have reacted this way. But no you will be always ready to scold me and show your big big eyes" told geet wiping her tears.

Now maan is more guilty for scolding her. Yes she loves that dress very much. Its gifted by maan but geet after that geet never allowed anyone to touch that dress. Its so precious for her. "Geet.." tried maan to talk with her. But geet didn't allow him to talk, she ran out of the room crying.

Maan looked at her with guilt. "Maan what the hell you did? She never cried but today, I am so sorry geet. But I know how to manofy my mishty" thought maan with a smile on his face. Vicky and meer are waiting for them to come out but is shocked to see geet coming out crying. Meer followed geet. Geet went near washroom and closed the door. Meer waited for her outside. Geet inside washed her face and came out.

She smiled weakly at meer. "What happened? Why you are so dull? Dekho meri geet aisi dull dull achi nahi lagti" tried meer to cheer her up. But geet silently left from there didn't talk with anyone much. "I am really fed up with you geet" maan's are ringing.

Fresh tears formed in her eyes but she wiped them immediately. Today she is missing her mom terribly. "Meer, I want to go home. Please call mama na?" asked geet. Meer nodded, geet left to her class and sat quietly. Maan saw meer coming and ran to her.

"Meer where is geet?" asked maan. "Bhai she want to go home" told meer. "Ok I will call mom" told maan sadly. "Meer take care of her, now she wont listen to anyone" told maan and left from there. Seeing his mishty crying because of him a layer of tears formed in his eyes. He composed himself and called to pooja to come to school immediately to pick up geet. Pooja got worried thinking what happened to geet. Without wasting a minute pooja left KC and came to school. She saw geet waiting for her. Her face is pale and looking tired. She hugged her and asked "Geet beta, what happened?" asked pooja. "Nothing mama, I want to go home. I am having head ache" told geet. "First we will go to doctor and go home" told pooja.

"No mama, we will go home" told geet. Looking at her pale face pooja don't want to argue with her more. She said ok and they both headed to home. Maan who saw all this felt bad for hurting his geet. That day he didn't concentrate on match and didn't practice much. He kept on thinking about geet, her teary eyes are haunting him. Even seeing his bro and friend sad vicky's day was also all gloomy.

In the evening when they went home, they saw geet is sleeping on pooja's lap. She is caressing her hair. "Maa, how is geet?" asked maan. "First tell me what happened. She cried after coming home. Due to all this she is having temperature. Did anyone scolded her?" asked pooja. But no one answered her, maan left from there.

Annie too sat beside geet, but geet is so dull. She has taken maan's words to her heart. Maan peeked in to the room and saw geet silent. He sighed, entered into the room silently. He kept a packet infront of geet. But geet turned her face aside. Maan opened the packet asked annie to show it to geet.

When geet saw her eyes twinkled it is the same dress which anita spoiled. "I don't want any dress" told geet and laid on the bed. Maan and annie looked at each other not knowing how to make geet normal. "Annie you go and do home work dear, I will be with geet" told maan. Annie nodded and left from there.

Maan brought food for geet and asked her to eat. But geet nodded in a no and didn't get up. she have to take medicines too, her temperature is not reducing. Maan made geet get up. He took a piece of roti and took it near geet's lips but geet turned her face.

"Geet please yaar, you are angry on me na then scold me and beat me but don't do this. If you don't eat how will your fever will come down. So please have some thing" told maan. Geet didn't talk anything. She is not angry on maan but hurt with his words.

"You are really fed up with me?" asked geet innocently while her tears made their way down. Maan immediately wiped her tears and nodded in a no.


Gals, let me ask you some thing. I am free for few days. I am thinking to give update of this FF daily night by 10pm. As i will be updating daily will you be able to manage without PMS.Pls do reply me, if you cant manage i will update weekly twice. If you can manage without PM only for this FF then i will update daily night. Reply me so that i can start typing the updates fast.

Precap: 😈


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Ok friends, here is part 8. How is it?? 😕


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Love

Chinni.



Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me first yiiippppeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
loved the update
its little bit emotional..
by seeing geet missing her mom....
nd geet hurted wid maan wordings...
feeling bad nd sorry for her....
but maan is here to manofy her
nd gifted her new dress,,,
loving it
nd plus geet not well....
nd now maan more guilty

u devil
precap nai diya
update soon
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it 😳
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