Virika SS: Love or hate? *AWARDED*- Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi guys!I am glad you all liked the twist. Thank you all for the lovely comments they mean a lot. Here is the next update, I hope you all like it. In case you have any confusion or query regarding the story then feel free to ask. Do give in your suggestions. As my exams are now starting I won't be able to update soon, so I apologize in advance. If you want a Pm then leave a comment stating the same and I will add you. I will send a Pm to only those people who comment on my work. Please leave a comment even if it is only an emoticon. As I said earlier it helps meknow how many people are following the story.Happy Reading!
Chapter 6

"Morning Badi Maa."

"Good Morning, Rahul."

"Where is Jeevika? It is eight and she is still not at the table."

"May be she overslept. Strange even Viren hasn't turned up today."

"Badi Maa I wanted to. Umm.."

"Yes Rahul, go on ."

"I..I was asking what do you guys do on Sundays?"

"So you wanted to ask about our Sundays? Well nothing special but today we all have to go shopping. Hope you will be able to take out time."

"Yea sure." Rahul cursed himself beneath his breath for being so nervous. He took a piece bread and started spreading butter on it. Swamini smiled at him. Finally she decided to put an end to his troubles.

"Rahul I think I will ask Jeevika to join us as well today. It will be nice if you two spend some more time together."

"That will be great! But where is she today. She gets up early everyday for yoga, but I haven't seem her since mornng. Must be tired after yesterday's function."

"She must be tired but where is Viren? I'll go and check his room."

******

The morning sunlight peeped through the heavily curtained windows on to Viren's face. He turned to see Jeevika sleeping soundly besides him. She looked so innocent and pure like a new born baby, lying all curdled up in his arms, her right arm wrapped securely around his body. Viren smiled looking at her sleeping form. He twisted the loose strand of hair from her forehead round his finger and tucked it behind her ear and slowly rubbed his fingers on her soft rosy cheeks

* Flashback *

Tring tring.

"Hello."

"Sir Miss Jeevika wants to meet you."

"Please send her to my room."

"Sure sir."

There was a knock at the door after one minute seventeen seconds. Viren got up and opened the door of the room. Jeevika walked in without any conversation and sat on the sofa taking off her heels.

"Now what? You told me to come to Mumbai and now when I am here you don't even want to talk to me?" He came and sat next to her and held her hand. "Please at least look at me for once."

Jeevika pulled back her hand, she was in no mood to forgive him this time. She continued looking at the other side of the room. Once, twice, thrice, how many time times was she supposed to forgive him?He had forgotten her birthday all over again. Since their childhood he hadn't remembered a single birthday. How can he be so careless. Does he hav amnesia? Every year they have a fight over this yet again he forgets the very next year. So what if he makes up for it later with his expensive gifts and priceless kisses and hugs. This time all this won't work.

"Jeevika what do you want? I don't get it!"

"You."

"So I am with you.You told me to come from Chandigarh today and here I am, then why are you not talking to me?"

Jeevika took a deep breath and looked at Viren. "Are you really that stupid, Viren?"

"Excuse me?"

"Viren you forgot my birthday again."

Viren closed his eyes and ran his hand through his hair as realzation dawned at him. Not again. This time he is doomed. "Your birthday, right... I remember it is your birthday," he stumbled, while his mind worked out a new excuse.

"I know you remember my birthday. And you have planned something for me tomorrow and the gift is on the way, blah blah blah. Don't you dare find another excuse this time. Accept it! You forgot my birthday, that's it!"

"Okay fine I am sorry. Look I am not giving excuses this time Now please smile."

"I am leaving, Viren, I hate you."

"Heyy listen I am sorry. Don't leave." He held her from behind and rested his chin over her shoulder. " I promise I will make up for it. Come on now lets celebrate it is your birthday today."

"I don't want to."

"Okay fine. We will just do what you want all right?"

Jeevika turned to face Viren. She held his hand and said," You promise you will do what I want?"

"Anything for you darling." Viren snaked his hand round her neck and bent down to kiss her forehead.

"Will you marry me? Now."

Viren looked at her stunned. "But.."

"Yes or no?"

"Jeevi.."

"Yes or .."

But before she could complete she sensed his lips seal hers. His arms encaged her waist and pulled her closer. She held his shoulders for support. She felt his hands trail her back to her hair pulling her closer and deepening the kiss. He slowly let her free ,"Yes!" he whispered and kissed her forehead.

Do comment and like! I want at least 4 pages.😊
Edited by Kashy15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi...it's awesome de starting!!! N I don't lk Rahul!!!hmm virka bth r late !!

Aww virka is awesome!!viren is so cute!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was cute!!...
Will Jeevika agree on spending time with Rahul??...
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Virika romance during flashback was superb..😊
your story is getting better by each update👏
Loved it..
Thanks for the PM...
Cant wait for the next update...

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Posted: 13 years ago
I loved this update.
It was really cute!
Continue sooon..
Thanks for the PM and please keep PMing me!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update😊
aww...jeevs proposed 2 viren!!
thanx for pm...continue soon!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...!! totally loved it...!! virika were romantic...!! cant wait for the next part...! thanx for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
cute update continue thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum SS Really Luved it..
Abit Differnt But Really intresting one..
Plz Add me too in ur pm list..


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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update!!! Loved it!!
Impatiently waiting for the next part,plz plz update soon!!
Ur concept is superb!!

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