New ways; New paths: Fanfiction

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Posted: 20 years ago
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guys i have been roaming around and read trillion of fanfiction which really admire me of writing something; well my fanfiction is the opposite of all fanfiction; its something that may be no one has ever think of or in other word it hasn't being written till now so let me begin.... lets rock oh lalal................... HOPE U LIKE IT........

So the story start from the beginning but its will turn out to a different path so here i go.... Its something new just its very filmi and i will bring a great twist which would rock my fiction

So let me introduce my character

ITS THE SAME CHARACTER FOR NOW BUT LATER I WOULD ADD SOME MORE CHARACTER

Disha the lead character

Dk , rano , shuhas, azbua, gutam , vijinder disha's dad and her kaki sukaniya and anil and ofcourse the trouble make sanya huh

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A background information:

Disha is being adopted by shuhas and vijinder and she the oldest daughter but (like in the serial she found out that she isn't there real daughter very late but in this she already new this that she is an adopted daughter and ranu know that too but they still have a great sisters relationship they believe in making relationships by heart) disha has being treated good so far and shuhas is treating her like a great mother, no doubt on that. They are living a happy family life. Even sukaniya is nice to disha and the whole family.

Story:

its spring time, a little breezy out there. Its last day of college, ever one is excited and just chilling around a punch of girl came over to the teacher staff room and hand a bunch of flower to the favourite teachers. and girl left the staff room but except one girl; flowers are still in hand of that girl. One of the teacher asked whose are these beautiful flowers for; than the camere focus on the on lips and a smile spread off and she spoke;

the girl: yeh ush insaan keh liya jis nah humein zindagi ka matlab sumjahyea, humari ungali pakar ker humein sapnoo ki woh duniya dekayi jis se hum injaan aur bakabar teh. aur humara sapnoo koh ek nayi umang aur ek nayi hosla diya and she walk toward the teacher and bend toward her knees and hand the flower to Mrs. Roy and Mrs. Roy spread her arms and hold the girl and hug her for a while and kiss her forehand and soon the girl gets up from the knees and her hair slid back and we can see the face and its non other the disha ; disha bhosla (she was wearing a jean and t-shirt says disha on it.

Its was the annual day of the school so there was a little function and parents were invited also.

As disha was a student of college; she really act like a college girl, she had fun and laugh and she was the host for annual day

(A little note as its disha late day in college but ranu still goes to college and disha and ranu are best buddies i mean in college sometimes ranu call disha not just her dee but she do call her dish too and they do have a gang)

the scene shift to the stage now:

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A girl wearing a blue jean and a top which says PAARI

a girl facing back stage the audience could only see her back and is holding a mike and says: ladies and gentlemen a son is a son till he get him self a wife but a daughter is a daugher for all her life.

(Every one clapped and the song starts)

Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main
Aayi Main Aayi Neele Gagan Se
Laayi Main Laayi Taaron Ke Chun Ke
Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai
Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai
Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai
Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai
Aakar Dekhle
Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main

Mummy Ke Dil Mein Ek Baat Aayi
Jaldi Se Ladki Ki Kar Do Sagayi
Ladke Ka Pehla Photo Dikhaya
Phir Mujhe Poocha
Pasand Aaya
Main Ne Kaha Na Re
Na Na Na Na

Ladka Jo Dekhne Aaya Mujhe
Na Main Sharamaungi Palke Jhukaungi
Na Muskuraungi Na Main Rhijhaungi
Na Main Usko Chalke Dekhaungi
Chaahe Kahe Woh Mujhse
Wah Wah Wah Wah
Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai
Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai
Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai
Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai
Aakar Dekhle
Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main

Its Our World
Its Our Life
Sab Ki Sunungi Dil Ki Karoongi
Aise Waise Ko Main Na Chunungi
Maine Yeh Kab Se Soch Liya Hai
Parkhungi Usko Phir Haan Karungi
Warna Kahungi Use
Ja Ja Ja Ja

Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai
Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai
Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai
Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai
Aakar Dekhle
Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main
Haan Haan Haan Haan
Mere Liye Jo Bana Hai
Sun Le Jahan Tu Chupa Hai
Paana Mujhe Mushkil Hai
Phoolon Jaisa Mera Dil Hai
Aakar Dekhle
Papa Ki Pari Hoon Main

the song end and the curtains comes off

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Posted: 20 years ago
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when the function got over Disha, ranu, shuhas and vijinder came back home and headed to their rooms.

After a while its dinner time disha came down wearing a loose pajama and a loose t-shirt and when straight to the dinning table.

Through out the whole scene suhas was a bit mad the ways disha performed of getting married to a person and she is kind a traditional. And she wanted disha to act mature but disha is just like other teen age girl . For now ranu is young she suhas doesn't really both about her.

Suhas to disha: disha enough of ur imaturity; now ur college life is over stay home and learn some thing like cooking and that would help u in ur futher. Disha is just neglecting her but when she saw suhas getting serious so, she gets up came over to suhas, she was siting on a chair disha bend over to her, put her hand on her lap and said: aye mein janti hoon ap kiya sochti hain, kiya kahna chahti hain, aur hain app apna dil se pochan keh kiya mein asha kohi be kaam karoon gi jis se app ko dukh yah dakleef hoe gi. Agar ap jati hain keh mein ghar rah ker woh sub kaam sikoon aur ek adarsh beti banoon tu yeh mera vaada hai app se aur apna app se keh mein aj kah bad apna bacpana, aur apni adatoon ko badalna ki pori kohshuh karoon gi and she left without completing her dinner.

Rano to suhas: mamma app bhi nah dee ko wahsah he dant dahti haain. dee nah ahsa kiya kya hai joh appp.... (she also left without completing her sentence)

Suhas to herself: ranu yeh tum nahi sumjoo ghi, per mein yeh tumhari dee ki balahi kah liya he kah rahi hoon. ek waqt ahey gah jab tum sumjoo ghi.

its next morning every one was having there breakfast sukaniya, anil suhas and vijinder

Ranu was still sleeping in her bed, just moving from one side of the bed to another its was sunday extually. so no big fuss about that getting late up from bed.

But in the other side of the house, its breezy out there, wind was blowing, windows were open, A hand is searching for something through the window and a beautiful churidar kurta slid out through the cupboard, its light blue, very simple pattern but too cute. a girl dressing up wearing some bangles with matching ear rings tighting her hair sliding her dapatta throught her neck and running downstair and while passing the stair.

Vijinder saw a sight of the girl and shout out wowwwwwwwwwww.

Everyone turned over and is surprised to see disha. suhas was impressed to first move of disha . everyone was prasing disha and soon ranu came down the steps still wearing her night suit and yawning and calling out for her morning tea. and soon she was about to ask for the tea and she was shocked to see disha in such state and just yell out: deeeeeeee, is this really you. Unfortunately disha never wore those kind of clothes before she just wore jean and tops.

disha to suhas: aye if u don't mind could i help u prepare todays lunch.

Suhas was amazed but had no respose, but it was yes from the expression she had.

and ranu just walked back to her room just saying: WHAT EVER

Edited by lucky-moon - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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lucky moon...

main prem ki deewani hoon😉...good one girl...very good...keep them coming....songs ke saath😛

Bomby!
Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Haha..very good 😆 Sounds very familiar..😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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hey Luckymoon😉

a beautiful story..👏....👏.

love the PAPA KI PARI song sequence...😉..😃.

well keep it up👏👏

love KP

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Posted: 20 years ago
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great start lucky moon!!!!!👏
cont soon😉!!!!!
please
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Posted: 20 years ago
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don't worry guys but my turing point would probably shock u all i am pretty sure about that coz my creation is different in other word my whole imagination is different believe me u would find something different this is just the starting just wait and watch what stored next for u all

love lucky-moon

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Posted: 20 years ago
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moving on guys>>>>>>>>>>>>>

disha and suhas are having great time, while cooking ranu just passed by and saw them chatting and decided to join them.

Rano: mamma mujhee lagta hai keh ab dee perfect biwi banna ka liya tiyar hain.

Disha(remember guys disha is exactly like ranu, chatty but never felt beyond her limits) interepted< ohemmohemm well ranu mujhee tu larka mil he jahae gah per tumhara kiya haal hoe gah, najanaa kis ki kimat phodath ghi, oh well well

Rano; made a baby face and yelled: mamma dee ko koho apna kaam se kaam rakhaan

suhas: ab bachoon ke tarahan larnah mat choro ker dina aur aj wahse bhi ghar per mehmaan ahnah wala hain tu zara shelikah se rahna.

Rano and Disha: what per kaun

Suhas: woh papa ke dhost hain nah woh aur unk ki family.

(right now inder is stranger for disha and ranu they haven't meet eachother yet)

Rano: sorry mamma per mein tu nahi ah pahoon ghi kyoon keh meri dhost ke birthparty hai so dee would manage.

Disha: Excuse me, well yahaan tak mujhee yaad hai woh birthday party meri dhost ke hai aur agar janna bhi chahiya tu mujhee nah ke tumhein.

Rano: oh my sweet inocent bawakof sister mein jahoon yah tum baat tu ek he hai, hai nah.

Disha: what ever any ways i don't feel like atending parties anymore i am just too bore.(but disha just didn't go coz of suhas coz she didn't wanted to hurt ayee)

Ranu and disha in room
Ranu: dee sach batahoo tum party mein kyoon nahi jarahi. sach dee

Disha: ranu mein apni zindigi jee joki hoon, mein apni manmani ker joki hoon per zindigi mein phele bar ayee neh mujhee se kuch mangae aur woh bhi meri balhaii keh liya tu mein unh koh mana kahse ker sakti hoon .

(through the whole time suhas was listen to thier converstion and was proud to have disha as their daughter)

its evening the ghosla family has arrived

Inder dad's (sorry guys don't know his name) came and greet the bhosla family and introduce them to his family. Inder's dad was really impressed by disha, her simplicity and her atitude.

Inder dad : disha why don't u show inder around the house (as its his first time in his house and also in india)

through out the whole time inder was staring at disha (i guess coz of her beauty) but disha didn't notice that yet.

they have a light conversation< (i don't feel like adding their conversation coz i don't give a damn for inder i just hate him so sorry guys if i offense any one which i am sure i didn't😆 in my storry inder does play a role but hmm just wait and watch i can't just spill the beans, yaar samjaa karu i know the story is getting boring so now the introduction of dk the tacoon hmmm so how should i introduce him hmmm, let see well it would take all more time so let do it this way its just exact same inder's dad and disha dad work as in the same business and are trying to tie up with kanaka empire and its just the same story how dk searching for a model and had snap of disha in a jewellery store and ask her for modeling but she refused him first than the threat about ruining her father business.

this whole thing would take alot of process so the story was same tell now so now i should write my own ............ so wait till the next part so my last part is dk calling disha if she refused to come and meet him tonight she would have to pay for the consequeses

end of scene

Edited by lucky-moon - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
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A massive building, with great interior and exterior decoration. A man walking toward the door... two men already at the door each men standing on each side of the door and opened the door the stunning man with great personality. Enter

Every person in the building stood up with in a second and lowering thier heads down just to wish him good morning coz there are around 40 people all can not say good morning at the same time so lowering ur head is their way of giving some kind of respect to thier boss.

a guy rushing throw the main lobby holding a walky talky in his hand and just saying : Mr. Dk is already entered

Dk. is everything ready under my instrustion

Guy; little hessitated but said yes coz they were no other option😆

and the guy is non other than ....................................... Taj

wohooooooooooooooooooooo

while walking toward the cabin, taj asked: sir jab humarah paas achi se achi model hai tu why.... (stopped) Dk turned< taj spoke: sir kiya woh modeling kera ghi , Dk raised his eyebrowes< Taj : i mean sirrrrrr. and stopped right there and the said: sir i guess u are early . (coz he was to affair to say dk u lost this turn)

BHOSALA HOUSE

a notice has being send out to them in which their house is on action

disha was shocked, and remember the words from dk

Its late at night get dressed and went right to kanaka house, where dk was waiting for him.... (i know in the serial vijinder died and disha had no other option so she had to go to dk but in mine vijinder is alive but still disha go to kanaka house)

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Posted: 20 years ago
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keep it up

lekin un dono kho jaldi se milao yaar😉

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