ansh os: MAHANTA KI TUTIONS

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Shiv brought back jagiya frm the jail after requesting hard from governor'whole of the singh family was happy to get their son back' anandi thanked shiv through her teary eyes' shiv smiled and nods his head.. after all singhs thanked shiv for his ehsaan , he asked everyone for their leave'.he came outside and was about to get into car when somebody kept a hand on his back'he turned around'anandi was standing right in front of her '

Shiv: arey anandi ji ap ? kya hua kuch kaam ttha kya?

Anandi: ji.. wo thank you bolna tha apse' apne aj jo dadisa ke liye kiya, wo main kabhi nahi bhool sakti' main janti thi ki dadisa jagiya ke karan dukhi thi, lekin ap ne use chudake, '..(she got chocked) thank you.

Shiv cups her face '.

Shiv: anandi ji ye sab maine isliye kiya kyunki main nahi chahta ki hamari shadi ke time kisi ke mann mein bhi koi gila shikwa, ya dukh ho' aur kal jab dadiji behoshi ki halat main bar bar jagdish ka naam le rahi thi , to mujhe pata chala ki wo kitni bechain hai'aur hongi bhi.. akhir jagdish unka pota hai'aur main janta tha ki agar dadiji dukhi hongi to apko bhi dukh hoga' bas isiliye maine ye sab kiya' main nahi chahta ki apki shadi main apko koi bhi takleef ho'.main chahta hoon ki ap jab mere saath ek naye jeevan ki shuruat kare to ap par kisi bhi tarah ka koi tanav na ho.. ap khush ho

Anandi was completely in tears: ap itne acche kyun hai collector sahab'mere bina kahe mere mann ki baate kaise jaan lete hai ap' apko meri ha choti si choti khushi ka khyal kaise rehta hai??????

Saying that she immediately hug shiv 'shiv was shocked at this' but happy to find her this close' he took her tightly in his embrace'

Shiv: anandi ji , ye sab apne hi mujhe sikhaya hai .ap hi se sikha hai ki kisi ke liye achha karne mein kitni khushi milti hai.. and sach mein aj mujhe bahut achi feeling ho rahi hai'apki tution classes ka hi asar hai..

Anandi smiled listening to this'.she breaks the hug..

Shiv wipes the tears still in her eyes: ye kya ? ap abhi bhi ro rahi hai? Maine ye sab isliye kiya taki apke chehre pe muskaan dekh saku , par ap abhi bhi' chaliye muskuraiye..

Anandi laughs at his cuteness.. shiv smiles seeing her smiling .. it always brings a sense of peace in his mind'

Shiv: chaliye ab main chalta hoon

Anandi nods her head..shiv turned to get into car when annadi's eyes fell on the broken head light and scratches on bonett of the car'

Anandi:arey collector sahib ye apki gadi ko kya hua?

Shiv saw where she was pointing..

Shiv: arey ye ? kuch nahi .. bas aise hi..

Anandi: arey kuch nahi kya? bataiye na kya hua'

Shiv: arey maine kaha na anandi ji kuch nahi hua' bas wo..

Shiv hesitates a little'

Anandi: ap mujhse kuch chupa rahe hai na collector sahib

Shiv: arey nahi anandi ji aisi koi baat nahi hai' bas wo jab mein kal raat ko jagdish ko chud wane ke liye jaipur ke liye nikla tha , to bas minor sa accident ho gaya tha?

He couldnot hide anything from her..

Anandi was shocked: kya?

Shiv: ha wo mujhe thodi thakawat ki wajah se halki si ankh si lagi.. samne se truck a raha tha.. maine dhyaan nahi diya.. but koi darne ki baat nahi hai, maine time pe steering ghuma liya tha' bas wo gadi pe thode se scratches a gae'

Anandi comes and immediately hold his hand and start inspecting for any injury'

Anandi : apko kahi koi chot to nahi ai na.. dikhaiye mujhe'

Shiv held her hand: arey anandi ji maine kaha na ki mujhe kuch nahi hua' bas wo gadi ko hi lagi hai'ap tension mat lijiye ' kuch nahi hua

"aur kuch ho jata to" she said with tears forming in eyes '..but anger shining on he face" ap koi kaam soch samajh ke nahi kar sakte kya? Kya zarurat thi itni raat ko jane ki.. "

Shiv startled to see her like this but contolled himself : par anandi ji .. aj sham ko shadi hai.. main aj kaise jata' aur dadisa ke chehre pe wo khushi kaise dekh pata

Anandi : collector sahib apne jo kiya uske liye bahut thank you.. par iska matlab ye nahi ki uske liye ap apni jaan ko jo khim mein dale'.. kam se kam mujhe to ek baar bata hi sakte the na ki ap aisa kuch karne wale hai'par nahi'.. ap zaroor gadi bhi tez chala rahe honge'hai na?

Shiv nodes like a cutte boy being scolded by his teacher for not completing his home work' anandi's anger at shiv increases.

Anandi: pata tha mujhe..apne ek baar bhi socha ki agar apko kuch ho jata to apke parivaar ka kya haal hota? Dadu ka kya hota..ma , choti ma , papaji ka kya hota? Mera kya hota?

Shiv looked into her eyes which were now had tears of pain only'.he was feeling guilty to hurt her again..he comes forward to wipe her tears but she steps backward ..

Anandi: ap mere paas mat aiye' mujhe ap se koi baat nahi karni' kya samajhte hai ap apne apko' har bar pehle mujhe rulate hai phir akar mere ansoo ponchte hai' is baar mujhe apse koi baat nahi karni'

She turned around to leave when shiv held her hand from back'

Anandi: collector sahib chodiye mera haath.. maine kaha na mujhe nahi baat karni apse..

Shiv comes and stood in front of her'he lifts her chin up ..

Shiv: I m sorry anandi ji.. ' wo bas kal mein itna pareshan tha ki bas kuch suja hi nahi ' maine bas gadi nikali aur chala gaya'I m sorry ki maine ye apko nahi bataya'I m sorry ki maine apko fir se hurt kar diya' thik keh rahi hai ap.. har baar sochta hoon ki is kuch aisa karoonga jis se apke chehre ki muskaan apko de saku, par hamesha apko hurt kar deta hoon' kya karoon ''. kya hai na ki apki tution classes ka syllabus itna saara hai ki main confuse ho jata hoon '.ek ko khush karne jata hoon to dusra naraaz ho jaata hai' mujhse iska syllabus handle nahi ho raha hai..

Anandi looks into his eyes and saw a naughty smile on his face..she burst into laughter and hit him on his chest'

Shiv: ek kam kijyega anandi ji.. shadi ke baad ap mujhe ache se training de dijiye ga taki age se koi galti na ho'.ab to waise bhi main apka most important student ban ne wala hoon.. to apko mujh pe zyaada dhyaan dena padega.. kahin aisa na ho ki apka student fail ho jae''.

Anandi: apko lagta hai ki main apko fail hone dungi?(she says cutely)

Shiv: attention nahi dengi to ho bhi sakta hoon( shiv says naughtily)

Anandi blushes at his statement'.

Shiv:aur waise bhi mujhe aj ye to pata chal gaya hai ki meri shadi ke baad kitni classes lagne wali hai ... itni strict teacher mil rhi hai..''..

Anandi's mouth opened wide seeing shiv making fun of her..

Anandi: ap mera mazak uda rahe hai..?

Shiv: arey nahi nahi.. main aur sarpanch ji ka mazak udau' gaon se nikal na hai kya mujhe? main to bas ye keh raha tha ki' ab mujhe chalna chahiye' ghar mein sab wait kar rahe honge'

Anandi smiles: thik hai jaiye.

Shiv goes and sits in his car..

Anandi comes near his window

Shiv: so see you.. ab bas sham ka intezaar hai.. jab apko dulhan ke roop main dekhunga aur ap hamesha hamesha ke liye meri ho jaengi'

Anandi blushes..

Shiv: bye

Before shiv gould start his car anandi holds his hand on car steering..shiv looks at her

Shiv: kya hua?

Anandi: apne raat bhar gadi chalai hai na? ap thak gae honge'. Jakar thoda aram kar lijiyega'

Shiv: nahi nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai anandi ji' main thik hoon.. aur apse baat karke to aur bhi zyada fresh feel kar raha hoon'

Anandi: main kuch nahi sun ne wali' ap abhi jaenge aur soenge.. ghar mein aur sab bhi hai kaam karne ke liye' ap aram kijiyega'.kahi aisa nahi ho ki apki shadi ke samay tabiyat kharab ho jae'..

Shiv smiles: thik hai .. so jaunga'

Anandi: pakka na? main choti ma se khabar le lungi agar ap nahi soe to'

Shiv:acha sarpanch ji ' pakka aram karoonga'. Chahe to choti ma se puch lijiyega'ab khush

Anandi smiles andnods her head cutely

Shiv: aur koi hukum

Anandi: nahi..

Shiv: to ab mein chalta hoon'sham ko band baje ke saath aunga

Anandi laughs at his statement'.

Shiv: bye

Anandi: bye'..

Shiv leaves..

Anandi waves him goodbye smiling' she kept on looking at his car ' how lucky is she to find a man like him.. and he is going to become his life partner in just few hours.. she blushed at thought of that and turns to go back into haveli'..

the end

hope u like it... plz do comment(both positive and negative comments are welcomed)

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ananhita thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tooo Goood, I just Loved your OS, you should be a story writer man, I was laughing throughout, this was hilarious, wish they would show this on the show, what an imagination
...shaadi ke bad mujhe ache se training de dijiye, take koi galti na ho..
...apke tuition classes ka hi Asar hai...
Funny, really one of the best OS I have read...write more, at least these are better than what is being shown in the serial...
Edited by ananhita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananhita

Tooo Goood, I just Loved your OS, you should be a story writer man, I was laughing throughout, this was hilarious, wish they would show this on the show, what an imagination

...shaadi ke bad mujhe ache se training de dijiye, take koi galti na ho..
...apke tuition classes ka hi Asar hai...
Funny, really one of the best OS I have read...write more, at least these are better than what is being shown in the serial...

THANKS 😛😛😛..i m glad u liked it... but i think kuch zyada tarif kar di coz i think i m a pathetic writer... ye to bas i was a little frustrated by today's episode .. so thought of lighten my mood a little.. isliye ye likh diya...anyways thanks a lot for your appreciation...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very cute OS! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it. Really sweet. Want to see this in the serial...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wish cv aisa hi kuch asli me bhi dikha de
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very cute and so real!
Loved it!
Kudos!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely.. so very hope that we get to see dis in the epi.. very well written.. completely loved it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey... I just love the Title 'Mahanta ki tutions' 😆 😆 😆 , U perfactly potried Ansh character, they r exectly Mahan nd I some how feel they react similer to ur os in actual..., pata nahi sadi ke bad bichare Shivji ka kya hoga,uski teacher to bahot jyada streect he roj bhichare ki class lagegi, hi...hi...hi...,btw very nice os, I love their care for eachother nd sweet-sweet talk. 👏
Edited by Manshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanxxx a lot and lovely too... yaar kam se kam yeha to hur epi ke baad ek romantic OS parhne ko mil jata hai...warna to show me to romance jaise lapata hai...next update ASAP

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