KAISI PAHELI new prt12 pg10

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi guys i m new in this forum came here to make lot of friends especially of ADHM forum n i m presenting a new fanfiction of rusty n samay

so here it goes

this storyis about about rusty her change from a carefree girl into a mature women

INTRODUCTION

RUSTY daughter of randhir singh & mathura verry ssssweet mischevious &fun loving can do anything for her family

RANDHIR SINGH a very kind hearted person a good husband & a good father

MATHURA always concerned about her family & always thinks about rusty s marriage

BIJI head of the family mother of randhir singh loves rusty a lot

TARA rustys best freind desperate about finding a boyfreind

n now we come to the most yummy part our hero TANG TADANG OK HE IS 😳

SAMAY he is smart , intense ,passionate (just like the same in the drama)

he has 2 sisters naina & sur and ofcourse also has father n mother

LUCCKY samays best freind a good n sincere person

rest of the characters will be introduced later

ok it starts from here

its 8;30 am in the morning everyone is having breakfast in the deol family except rusty

randhir is reading newspaper annd sayy

randhir : oh god yeh ajj kal kay bacchon ko kya hota ja raha hai just look at it

mathura : haan ji main to khud in ajj kal k bachoon say pareeshan hoon rusty ko hi dekho kitna samjhati hoon ussay aakhir kal ko is ki shaadi honi hai

biji : haan yeh aaj kal k bachay to kuch suntay hi nahi lekin apni rusty bilkul aisi nahi hai wo bohat hi samajh dar hai apna acha bura sab janti hai aur to iski shaadi chinta na kiya ker uskey liye to koi shahzada hi aaye ga

mathura :biji dua to meri bhi yahi hai per ladkiyoun ko sab sikhana padta hai abhi kal hi ki baat dekho main nay rusty say kaha beta zara teil (oil) la day paaoon main lagana hai to kitchen say ja ker cooking oil utha laye k lo muma yeh laga lo ab bolo zara kal ko is ki shaadi ho gi to kya keraaay gi apni saas ko cooking oil day gi kya

every one laughs 😆

randhir : cahlo everyone i m getting latefor office...... ... rusty nahi aaye abhi tak breakfast k liye jao mathura ussay bula k lao college nahi jana hai kya

mthura : haan wahi to kitni der tak sooti rehti hai kal ko is ki shaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

BOTH RANDHIR N BIJI SHOUTS 😡MATHURAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

mathura : ok baba ja rahi hoon

she goes to rustys room n sees.........................

ok guys i hope itts not a good one but i promise that next part will be rocking actually its my first fan fic sooo plz do comment

all criticism will be accepted

thank u

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Posted: 19 years ago
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seems really inetersting... will wait for the second part... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 2
( rusty room is in pink colour with shades of red n she is sleeping with lot of teddeies aroud her )
mathura : rusty uttho beta kitni dair ho gaye ha college k liye late ho jao gi beta
rusty : mamma thodi dair aur
mathura : nahhin beta ab uth jao
russty : bus thodi dair
maathura : no
rusty : acha 10 minute
mathura : 10 min pagal ho gaye ho kya
rusty :;; sonay do na mamma
maathura : nahin beta itni dair tak sona achi baat nahi haikal ko tumhari shaadi ho gi to tum kya sasural main dair tak sooti raho gi kya
rusty : (getting irritated )mumma plz
suddenly she get an idea and says very sweetly
mumma main sasuraal main itni dair tak nahi so sakti na
mathura : haan beta yahi baat main tumhain baar baar batati hoon
rusty :; to mumma mujhay abhi to thodi dair sonay do phir pata nahi kal kya ho (saying emotionally )
mathura : (getting sad ) acha beta jaisi tumhari marzi laikin sirf 10 min
rusty :wat sirf 10 min wo to aap ko patanay main waisay hi waste ho gaye
mathura : (angrily ) kya ....kya kaha tum nay tum mujhay pata rahi thi ............matlab k ab tum apni maa ko hi patao gi ...........sahi keh rahay thay randhir k ajj kal k bachay..........
rusty : (getting scared ) sorry mumma ab main aisa nahin karoon gi
mathura laughs at her innocence
rusty gets confused
mathura : lekin main to her baar aisa hi karoon gi ...........arey patana kya hota hai yeh tum apni mumma say seekho master thi master main is cheez main ....isi liye to tumharay papa aaj meray pass hain
just then randhir enters the room rusty can see him but mathura cant see him as he is at her back he gives a clue to rusty to spoke more so
rusty : acha mumma wo kaisay
mathura : (not knowing that randhir is standing at her back ) wo aisay k roz khadi ho jati in k raastay main kabhi college k bahanay kabhi sabzi lainay k bahanay aur jab yeh saamnay aatay to zor zor say apni chunni udati , choodi khankati , apni notes gira deti , kabhi phool gira deti aur phir jabmain nay dekha k tumharay papa to mujhay koi lift hi nahi kera rahay to phir main nay azmaya plan B
rusty : really mamma wo kya tha
mathura (getting excited) wo...........wo plan b yeh tha k .........per main tumhain q bataon plan b
rusty :oh comon mamma batao na plzzzz
mathura : acha sun lekin yeh secret hai is liye kisi ko bhi mat kehna
rusty : haan mama trust me kisi ko nahin kahoon gi
mathura : acha to sun aik din main bahanay say biji say mili aur aur unko apni baatoon main aisa gheira k unhonn kaha k bus meray randhir ki k bivi to tu hi banaygi gi warna wo saari umar akeila rahey ga


so guys to know more about plan b log in on tuesday for the nextpart i hope this one isbetter then previous n ppl plz read the next part it will be hillarious i promise i also wanna thank vassantha n maha n wazup for appreciating me thanx guys n also plzz give comments

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Posted: 19 years ago
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love your ff
atleast mathura is nice to rusty
its nice to see rusty so happy
where is samay???

yuks
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Posted: 19 years ago
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WOW nice yeah pla brng SAMAY in da next 1 btw i luv dis fnfc 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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arre i m waiting!!
aage likho na jaan!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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part3
recap mathura is telling rusty how she n randhir get married n randhir is also listening from the back
rusty : really mama wo app ka plan b tha kya
mathura : han haan bata rahi hoon ..........wo yeh tha ka main biji k ghar bahanay say aaye aur un say kaha k main to apni chachi say milnay aaye thi likin main un ka ghar bhool gaye hoon ab main yeh halwa kis ko khilaoon gi aur phir teri biji ko aapnay haath ka gajar ka halwa khilaya
rusty : wat gajar ka halwa .........us say kya hoa
mathura: usi say to saara kamal hoa ..........us ko kha ker teri biji nay na bola k is ghar ki baho to tu hi banay gi
rusty : aur papa maan gaye thay kya
mathura : arrey nahin yeh to pagal hoay thay apni college friend k peechay........kya naam tha uska .............ummmmmmmmmmmm
mathura : haan yaad aaya uska naam tha honda .......nahi munda nahi nahi lunda ........................nahi hmmmmmmm
randhir (who is listening all the conversation )..lunda nahi mathura linda
mathura : haan haan linda .............oops ............app yahan kya ker rahay hain .......hamari baatein sun rahay hain chup chup kay
randhir : haan to kya hoa baatein bhi to meray baray main ho rahin thi q rusty
rustay : yes papa
mathur : chup ker papa ki chamchi
randhir : acha to biji say milna ittefaq nahi tha wo tum nay jhooth bola thak tum apni vasundra chachi say milnaY AAYE THI JIS KA ADDRESS TUM SAY MISS HO GAYA HAI ..............dekha rusty jabhi to main kahoon k shaadi k 22 saal baad bhi main tumhari vasundra chachui say nahi mil paya
mathura : acha bus bus aisi koi baat nahi
rusty : nahi papa batao na app kaisay maanay
mathura : i m warning u
rusty : mamma plzzzzzzzzzzz
randhir : haan to phir aik din teri mamma mera hockey ka match dekhnay aaye aur wahan per mujhay match main goal kernay per congrats kiya aur phir wahi wahi gajar ka halwa khilaya jis ko kha ker main clean bold ho gaya .......aur linda tak ko bhool gaya
rusty : lekin papa app to hockey khailtay thay to phir bold kaisay ho gaye
mathura : rustyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy &n bsp; yeh misaal hai
rusty : ok &nbs p;so moral of the story is k gajar ka halwa can do wonders ...n can make anyone fall in luv with u
randhir : yes mu princess n one thing more i luv u n mathura a lot
rusty : we luv u to papa
randhir : (getting wicked )haan mathura tum her waqt to yeh kehti ho k rusty ki shaadi kerni hai lekin isko halwa banana to tum nay abhi tak sikhaya hi nahi
mathura : haan ji zaroor ajj hi rusty ko halwa banana sikha doongi aakhir is ki shaaaaaaaaaaaa
rusty : mammmmmmmmmmmmmmma
mathura : kya mamma now get up u r getting late 4 college...........aur app (talking to randhir ) app ko manmohan ji invitation dain gay to app office jayen gay
randhir : haan haan ja raha hoon goodbye everyone
rusty : good bye papa
mathura : kya good bye ab uth jao ya tumhain bhi kisi k invitition k intizaar hai .....look at the time
rusty :(looking at her clock )oh god tara to mujhay ajj maar hi daalay gi


rusty came downstairs to take bleesings from bg ..............n tells her to eat breakfast
rusty : nahi biji ajj nahi ajj bohat late ho gaya hai
suddenly tara comes in shouting rusty & nbsp;rusty.............rusty says goodbye to biji n comes out
rusty : hello itna cheekh q rahi haiu
tara : time dekha hai late ho gaye to
rusty : toooooooooooo
tara : to main raj say kaisay miloon gi stop pey
rusty : let me correct u tum us say milti nahi balkay sirf ussay ghoor ghoor ker dekhti ho &nbs p; ....ikdum awaara ladkoon ki tarah
tara : kya hoa ajj ghoorti hoon kal baat bhi ker loon gi
rusty : baat to tum us say tab kero gi jab wo tumhain lift keraye ga
tara :getting sad wahi to meri samajh main nahi aata k main ussay kaisay impress keroon
rusty :ohhhhh........comeon tara .......dont be sad ....dr rusty the luv guru hain na tumhaeri help k liye now smile

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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 4
rrecap rusty is telling tara that she will help her in finding a boyfriend 4 her
tara : really rusty u will help me ofcourse baby now smile
rusty : meray paas aisi secret hai jis say tera paas boyfriends ki line lagi hogi
tara : to phir batao na
rusty : batati hoon ....lekin pehlay yeh to batao k mujhay return main kya milay ga
tara : (thinking ) ummmmm aisa kerna k meray paas jab boyfriends ki line lagi hogi to tu un may say apni pasand ka ladka chun laina
rusty : wat &n bsp; ..........that was not funny
tara : acha baba tu bool tujhay kya chaiye
rusty : mujhay ummmmmmmmmmm tara main nay na aik ghar dekha hai
tara : acha to tumhain ghar chayie...... sorry yaar rusty teray liye jaan bhi qurban per rusty itnay paisay to nahin hai meray paas k tujhay aik ghar khareed kerdoon
rusty : pagal hoi ho main nay kab kaha mujhay ghar chahiye
tara : to pphir
rusty : to phir yeh k us ghar main aik garden hai
tara : to tumhain garden chahiye lekin rusty meray paas itnay bhi paisay nahin k tujhay garden khreed ker doon
rusty : taraaaaaaaaaaaa stop it or i will slap u aur sun na mujhay ghar chahiye na garden
tara : to phir tumhain chahiye kya
rusty : mujhay us garden k fruits khanay hain
taara : haan to tum un say ja ker maang lo tumhain koun inkaar keray ga ......ur randhir singh deols daughter
rusty : nahin mujhay apnay haathoon say tood ker khanay hain
tara : to tum unsay kehna iii m sure woh tumhain manna nahi kerain gay
rusty :nahi nahi mujhay chup ker ......apnay haathoon say tood ker khanay hauin
tara : u mean choori
rusty : nahi chori nahin main baad main un ko paisay day doon gi ........bolo meri help kero gi
tara : ok &nbs p; per yeh to batao k wo secret kya hai jis say meray paas boyfriends ki line ho gi
rusty : wo secret hai gajar ka halwa
tara : wat now i will slap u
rusty: no tara trust me it really do wonders pata hai meri mamma aur papa ki shaadi bhi isi wajah say hoi thi
tara : wo kaisay
rusty wo aisay k jab papa nay mamma k haath ka bana hoa halwa khayaaaa to he falls for mamma immediately
tara : really rusty tu kya yeh halwa kha ker raj bhi mujhay pasand kernay klagay ga
rusty : of course tara sirf raj hi nahin bulkay her wo ladka jo is ko khaaye ga ..........bus tum mujhy yeh batao k tumhain halwa banana aata hai
tara : nahin halwa bana to nahi aata
rusty : waaaaaaaaaat phir ab halwa kahan say laayen
tara : i have lots of recipe book main us main say dekh ker bana loon gi
rusty : ok aik problem to solve ab yeh batao k tumhain raj ka ghar pata hai
tara :;; nahin mujhy to raj ka ghar nahin pata
rusty : kya tara tum aikdum baikaar ladki ho ab aisa kero k tum aaj raj k peecha kero aur dekho k wo kahan rehta hai us k baad its action time ok
tara :ok




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Posted: 19 years ago
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part 5
recap rusty tells tara to go n find rajs address

its sunday rusty randhir bg n mathura all r watching cricket match n besides that rusty is crazy about m s dhoni( u will ask me why it is bcuz i m also crazy about him all u who r reading can replace it by ur favourite cricketer )
randhir : wow wat an interesting match i wonder who will goona win
rusty : oh common papa jis team main ms dhoni jaisa player ho wo team kabhie haar sakti hai
randhir : ofcooourse not beta
just then mathura shouts : GOAL
randhir : mathurrraaaaaaaaaa its cricket not hockey jis main goal ho that was a sixer
rusty : ya mom is main goal nahi hota ...................by the way papa have u noticed ms dhonis complexion he is getting tanned day by day
randhir : haan beta its may be bcuz of non stop cricket he is playing
rusty : aap sahi keh raho ho papa main kal he indian cricket council ko letter likhti hoon aur un say kahoon gi k woh fair n handsome cream ko apna spponcor bana lein aik teer say do shikaar un ko naya sponsor bhi mil jaye ga aur meray dhoni ka complexion bhi better ho jaye ga
mathura : nahi tum apnay letter main saath main yeh bhi likhna k wo day n night matches k bajaye sirf nighht matches khaila kerain saara din dhoop main khaday rahay ga to goray say gorrrrrrraa aadmi bhi kaala padh jaye ga
bioji : rusty mathura chp ker jao tum dono aur khbardar jo koi letter wetter likha aikdum hi pagal ho gaye ho tum dono
rusty : per bj mera dhoni
biji : bus khamosh ab chup chap match dekho
rusty remain silent for 5 mins then speaks
rusty : papa main nay aik faisla kiya hai
biji : rabba khair keray
randhir : bolo
rusty: papa agar main kisi bihari ladkay say shaadi karoon to app ko koi objection
mathura shouts: hai rabba suna biji
randhir who knew rusty was talkking about dhoni says wickedly
randhir : of course not beta .............bulkay main to kud tumhara rishta lay ker us kay paas jaoon ga
mathura :hai rabba s.............suna biji mein to lut gaye............... barbad ho gaye ..........haye haye............... ab main kisi ko kya munh dikhaaoongi .................hai hai rusty to nay to meray armaanoon ka khoon ker diya
now mathura turns toward randheer
mathura : aur app bajaye beti ko roknay k mana kernay k bajaye khud is ka rishta lay ker jaa rahay hain app ki aqal ko kya ho gaya hai ....................aur rusty tu kaan khol ker sun ley teri shaadi to main kisi punjabi say he keraaoon gi samjhi tu ................kahan tu aikdum gori chitti aur klahan yeh kaala kalota munda
rusty : mammaaaaaaaa.............khabardar jo meray dhoni ko kuch kaha
mathura :chup ker
rusty :chill mom ................abhi sirf decision liya hai ................propose to nahi kiya
biji : to kya tum ussay propose kernay wali thi
rusty b: of course mamma
biji : hai rabba to hi issay akal day
just then her cell rings its taras call

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