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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#161

Lovely.. 👏 Waiting For Next One .. 😳

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#162

The part I lykd most is- "I hav grown selfish. Hwevr, M too ecstatic fr petty mattrs to pull me down cloud nine. She n hr drama cn wait. This is my momnt". Its sumtyms necessary to b selfish for own happiness. It was so cute to c a shy Rk n Seemaji too had a sense of humour.

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: Chandni1996
WOW this was a really nice update... it was a bit confusing though...but nothing that a question cant solve...so...they got married, then went to the back of the church, then lay in the grass all night, then went home and then came back to the church again?

Hey, you did nothing wrong with past comments. You were not offensive. I know you were not forcing me or even suggesting that as such. Its okay. Do not worry about it. You are an awesome reader and your comments are valuable. Do not every get scared to express your opinion on my posts.

As for the timing of the story. They spend their wedding night at the back of the church. Then, Madhu describes what happened following that event in the RK mansion (three weeks after). Halfway, she realizes the reader must be curious about how RK reacted after the wedding night. So, she goes back to the morning after. Hope that helps. I will make it more clear next time with phrases like "three weeks later" in bold or italics. Thanks for the lovely comment.

Edited by iiDona - 12 years ago

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#164

The EX axe

The weather is gorgeous. Its snowing outside. Don't you just love the flurries? Life is good. Yes, I am happy. A wonderful start to an amazing winter ahead. I hope your winter is as cheerful as the first winter snow. Enjoy you hot cocoa and Christmas sweater parties. I have a ton of ugly Christmas sweaters reserved for this time of the year. If you don't, you are missing out on loads of fun. Go on a shopping spree and have fun reading!

To be continued :)

Edited by DonnaHarvey - 12 years ago

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840216

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#165

Loved it, plz update soon.

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Piyali

@love.piyali

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#166

Hehe...loved the update...too good...and quite amusing even...:D

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kirti

@DevilClan

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#167

Biwi ws ryt k pehle use to mile phir wo bantne k bare me soche. So Biwi ws ready to deal wid hr jealousy wit chips n pop can. Luvd to c a jealous Rk. It was aswesum.