MN:Once Upon Atime,Love Story Ch:31 PG136//link 2 thrd 2 pg139 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago



Jasay beganay se miltay ho wasy hi sahi

Kuch dair tu bhaito meray moqabil aj

Na mazboon waafa k na jaafa k hoga

Sirf teri qurbat ki taamana hai mjhy aj

Chapter: 6

Life hasn't been easy after when she has made him go away from her.. she just cant concentrate on anything…he feels like a prince charming coming on the white horse n all… she laughed out loud… God is she behaving like Cinderella or feeling life is a fairytale..

She cant concentrate on her work… all of a sudden that she didn't felt from so long she is feeling like going for it.. but than this is life and she has to get back to it… and now she has exactly done that… taking this huge thing that she never did…

In start she said no to the man, a month out is risky.. wht if he is an animal and… but than doesn't she knew how to protect herself… he was sum business man who wants a girl to show off n to have pleasure both… but this one month will make her cum to her life back..soon sooner enough..

And above all he if will cum back that she belive he can or she wants to believe, he wont find her here ..perfect..

But the man she is with this whole month she knew is dam rich…booking a personal suite for the prostitute to travel …. What ever one thing is ..he did care for her comfort… strange nobody does this like for her.. why he will spend double amount for her…. Maybe the crossing of mayank's path with her had made everyone to care for her.. she laughed ….. Whatever stop thinking and just enjoy the comfort.. sleep and dream soon u will have to shut down the heart and start just acting … n stop living…

………

Landing at the Seattle airport it was slightly cold breez clouds.. and amzing feeling around.. a man was already there to escort her and took her things and behave with her as if she was the lady of his boss…

Man: ma'am please.. the driver will take u to the house.. hope u wont have any troubles

Nupur: ya sure… thanks…

OMG did he actually pointed to the black limo that is infront of her… her jaw was about to drop but she has to behave.. please nupur.. OMG this was sumtime my biggest fantasy…. Yet this brought a strange pain in her chest the same un bearable pain… the pain she is over .. completley over… she use to love these huge cars in her childhood… she remembered wht she use to call them.."teen darwazy wali car"… obviously she didn't knew the name… but man today she is gona sit in this as mistress…. Life is not that bad alteast she is sitting in it… even if as a mistresses

Getting inside she look, around and checked ..ya the driver was separated with the black glass… soo she excitedly claps her hands and look around ..OMG… wao..its amzing man… u actually can live here… waoo…

Soon her eyes were diverted to the view outside… it was beautiful amzing… the place they where taking her to was not in the main city area.. the car stoped and she knew.. all the living and enjoying herself was over.. now she is here just for wht sumone wants out of her, how he wants to treat and how he will want to feel.. so the child n the girl needs to die and now she is back as a mistress..

The driver open the door and she moved out side.. n here waited not a huge mansion yet a very beautiful house.. big.. yet seems so cosy…

A man escort her to the house and she moved in… her luggage was placed there and she looked around.. it was classy and amazing… beautiful…

Man: ma'am u please be comfortable… lunch is placed at the kitchen.. ur room is up stairs on left that has been decor for u… but if u want u can chose any of the room for urself…. Please have rest.. sir has said he will came in the evening…

It was the first time nupur heard his man mentioning he will join… but than its good she has all the time to look around have fun… wao she can choose any room… so lets go n have a look…. Knowing mayb it will be only few time when she will be in her only room…

She went to the room the person mention…and it was the most beautiful sight…. Wooden floor, white walls… a huge bed.. with flowers on the beside on both… but what take her breath was ahuge window beside her bed.. the wall that was of glass….showing the view of the back yard.. the poolside… and endless beautiful view… its seems like she is in a dream… OMG

Nupur: yeah ho kya raha hai nupur… aa tu nhi tu yeah sab tu ny pehli baar dkeha hai …is sab k itna asar kyun layrahi hai… har itni bekar chees mein tu itni khubsorti kasay dekhsakti hai… sab kuch ek hi second mein khatam hojay ga… jab woh aker tujhy phir yaad dilay ga k tu kya hai.. aur yaha kyun hai… isalyn jis ny tujhy karida hai..atleast us k liyan pasa fasool tu ban ja….. have lunch and than get ready…. This Sharma has made me crazy.. n is making me human .. I hate him so much.. so get out of him

She did the same… having food and than pampering herself with a long bath.. she wore a nice, not to sexy yet a classy dress and look around the house but indeed the room that she has was the best… plus it doesn't matter… it was evening so she came back inside after having around of the poolside.. and went to her room to check herself….

………..

Life was hectic.. it sucks.. this work in no way will finishing early he cant wind up things early.. noway.. there is a huge mess… the thought that he will do all this quickly and will go back is now no where in his mind… it has been 3 days he has been here yet things are mess here…. And he is working day n night .. and finally the picture is appearing a bit clear… so he thought to go back to have sum rest.. he hasn't slpet last night to.. this work is goig hell for him… plus he has been thinking about her a lot, lot more than he want to..

More the feeling that he finally knew wht he wants n no matter wht the mess it will lead to, he wants this and he will have it..

And finally he did reached to the house he has here.. to have sum peace… to get sum rest.. most importantly he just need a place and he will sleep… losing his tie he thre it with his blazer on the sofa… and poured sum water for himself…. And went upstairs..

………..

As soon as she opened the door of her room she was stunted no she was horrified…. A bouquet of white Chrysanthemum

was lying on her bed… she looked at it ..this cant happen … no this shouldn't happen….

She took it in her hand and touched them with an expressionless face.. but her lips whispered her biggest fear…

Nupur: mayank…

Mayank: I thought u must have even forgotten my name…..

She turn around to find him.. him standing there with his hand in his pocket.. sleeves carelessly folded till his elbow…with a praise n smile in his face…the moment he saw her infront of him…he took a deep breath… he knew this is exactly wht he wants … she…

Mayank: u like white Chrysanthemum

right or I got to know worng…

He moved towards her..

Nupur: u shouldn't have done this mayank

Mayank: nah cum on.. there just flowers and I kinda start like it…

Nupur: not this mayank…. All of this…OMGi should have known this… I should have asked all about it…. U cant do this no way.. why ur being so stubborn.. mayank this all wrong…

Mayank: nupur listen to me..please… if u would have said no to this I would have done sumthing else… n yes I m stubborn… and there is nothing worng in all this…

Nupur: u have lost it mayank sharam… completely… wht do u want from me

Mayank: I just want u…

Nupur: maynk please… be in ur sense damit… why the hell ur doing this…

Mayank: listen to me first… nupur ur here I hired u … for a month have already payed u…ur oblige to stay here with me… the way I want… u cant back out u signed the contract remember… so stop it…

Nupur: ya u bought me… so where u want to do here or..

Mayank: shutup… I didn't bought u….sigh.. I .. I donot want to but u didn't left any choise for me… I know its wrong ..ur scary… ur wrong person… its not a movie …its all fake n all.. whatever it is.. when I have u around me I feel everything alright…. He cupped her face…. Nupur u make me feel good… right… the thing nobody has ever done…or had made me feel…. I know u want to save me… u donot want me to get in all …. And I m not getting in it all…

U change my life in a night.. u gave me back my belives.. u gave me back myself… myself who always trusted on his rights n wrong.. who always was proud of his principles… u made me see that I should be proud still… u only u did that.. when people all around me..including my loved ones… my family… laugh on me for being such….

That night I saw so much respect n pride in ur eyes for me.. that it took my breath away.. and I want to breath.. I m tired torn damage scare and what not… im not asking anything from u..antyhing… just give me this month with u please … just give me this month… its just a month from u I am asking for sumthing that I feel is right… forgoting every if or but… I know this is only a month and after that there is maybe no chance for all this … I m a practical person I know the consequences

Ur not the one to be questioned on this… com on is it to big to ask a friend when I really need one

She was looking at him and he was saying this all as if his life demand on her.. and it does but last line made her laugh at him

Nupur: she chuckled sarcastically… a friend.. and than she looked at his hand who were making patternes on her cheeks,..

Mayank: yup no not exactly … I kinda feel alone get scared in night.. this huge window lightening n all… so mind if I share this room with you…

Nupur: u r gonna regert it..

Mayank: I don't think so… but even if I do.. atleast I know this was my choice.. so no hard feelings.. he said removing his hand .. so I am going to freshen up and we will have dinner.. I ma actually starving…

he moved towards the wardrobe and she was still wasn't sure whts going on.. he can see this.. did he did more by directly saying he is gonna stay tht close to her….just before he enetered the washroom to freshen up… he stoped

Mayank: nupur if I mean ur not comfortable with me…in this room…

Nupur: she looked back at him…. A S***

He closed his eyes and than spoke

Mayank: nupur for my comfort will u please stop using such words atleas when ur with me….

Nupur: why MR Sharam… u need to be knowing the reality evr mine….

Mayank: no I donot need to… I wana live in delusion….

Nupur: and soon u will wake up… empty handed….

Mayank: let see… btw I though when I will cum back home I will fine u in Cinderella top and maybe a beast track…. Wht say... he said teasingly referring to the day when he say her like that…

Nupur: Get lost mayank…

He chuckled finally he got a reaction from her…n disappeared and she droped herself n the bed, placing her head in her hands… its not him she is worried for… this time its her she is worried for…. She is feeling…. And feelings are not part of her n her life… they shouldn't be… any in her life…

But than she did whatever she can do to avoid all this, this mess yet maybe this isnt a mess, maybe he is right, just a month from there lifes for what they feel for… its just a month and maybe its for good…

Taking the flowers with her, she went down to arrange the diner for him for them….

Edited by drfizaahmed - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
loved it lods
Beautifully written
loved it to d coreee
OMG!!!!!!!!! it was actually like a dream..
i mean i thought hw will meet her there bt nvr evr imagined that he will do something like this
i mean one Whole Month they will be together!!!!!!!!! Wow!!!!!!!!!!
n Gosh!!! this had to be a Fairy Tale...By God!!!
n API uff!!! sach mein yaar ap kese itneee sare variations of Mayank lati hoon wo bhi ek se behter ek...hayeee
i just loveee all ur Mayanks of ur stories!!! 😆
bt srsly!!! yeh Mayank itnaaa sweet kyun hain..aww
the way he papered her n make sure only for sometimes bt still she should feel she is a normal girl...n i loved hw d way that lil girl in her came out...sigh!
loved it n even felt bad too...sigh!
bt m sooo glad...
it was such a Beauitufl part n sooo Beauitfully written...
i loved it to d coreee
n even d scenario u create i was sooo can imagine everything in it...Sigh!
Gosh!!! srsly!!! bilkul mere nazar ke samne hain asa hi lag raha tha...n btw iss floer ka nam maine pehli dafa suna..waise maine dekha toh tha 😆 again white..😉 apki fav flower hain kya??? 😛😉😳
n hayeee...Mayank will stay in the very same room...srsly!!!!
god!!! m gonna love it sooo much!!!!
want an update asap!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzz!!!!!!!!
loved it lodsss
i sooo hope ke they will fall in love for sure bt i also hope that Mayank deny d fact abt her reality though it wud b btr if it doesn't matter to Him to his Love in Future...😳 IA!
loved it lodsss
waiting eagerly for the next part
love u lodsss API..🤗🤗🤗
Edited by -Anila- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh...my My...What a UpdatE...

Fiza Di..
You Rock..
you know... when you told about the Nupur's P.O.v...
that she has been hired for a month...and she has ben treating like princess for a moment i thought that coudl be Mayank..
but again..
Mayank aisa kyu karega...
But i am very Happy that he is None other than Mayank..
else..
atleast She is protected from the evil persons atleast for a month...


Mayank is really a gem..
a gem person...
ye character kahan se aaya aapke dimaag mein..
bygod...
Itna sweet ..aur itna.. cute..
he is such a gem..
no not a jem..
he is a diamond.. vo bhi 200 carat diamond...

bygod...
he hired her or bought her just want to be close with her,just want to share a cute friendship with her..
knowing who she is...

chalo Gunjan ki baaton ka kuch to agar hua...
Ek baat hain..
jab bhi Nupur apni reality usse batati hain
he says don't use these type of words..
kyu..Why does e want to live in illusion...???

Loved Mayank and Nupur convo...

THE FACT IS...
nUPUR IS AFRAID SHE IS SCARED BECAUSE..mAYANK makes her to feel the small gestures ..
he is waking up that cute girl in her who also have dremas , hopes and most importantly..wanna have a prince charming in her life..
but the reality is..
Nupur ...ka jo profession hain vo usse...feelings ko mehssos unko ehsaas karne ki permission nahi deta..
and here Mayank forcing her to feel the presence of being alive...

awesome.....

mein bahut sochti hoon..
aage jaake kya hoga aise rishte ka..
they can't even have a simple friendship in front of the society...

chalo let's see...
well i am really looking forward for their dinner...
and later their night...

kuch unkahee jazbaat honge jo shayad vo hi sakh sakte hain...
well...
that's really a very good update..
Love you Fiza Di...
Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww that wa cute part
mayank is really behaving like a child while nupur is quite mature and sensible..
continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
that's really a very good update
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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing updt fiza
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fiza apu, the update was simply awesome...
You know what for a moment I also felt that the man who hired Nupur for a month may be is Mayank.. Because who else can treat her like a princess.. And I'm very happy that it's none other then our hero Mayu..
Awww...Mayu wants to fulfill Nupur's dream... He wants her to live like a respectful normal person not an emotionless person because of her profession.. Gunjan's words has made a great effect on Mayank..
Loved mayUr's conversation specially in the last about Nupur's outfit..
Update soon and thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update i loved it

this story is my top favourite
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Posted: 12 years ago
that's really a very good update
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Posted: 12 years ago
its beautiful ..

the way maynk did all this for nupur uff awsome... he desperatly wnt her to be wid him for a month hmmm.. i hope this 1 month will be unforgettable for both of thm ...


loved it...:)

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