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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: psp.pari

read all the updates in one go

its awesome, loved it to the core
do continue soon
please pm me if possible


hey have sent u buddy request accept it so that i can pm u...thnks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Nice , sweet & cute update. Very lovely Mahi!!!

Really good plan by the siblings of making Anya stay with them.
Loved the dialogues at the dinner table.
Please update the next part soon.
Thanx for the PM.


thannks lot and gonna update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

plzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz...ab jldi se nxt part update krdo...plzzz

yup gonna update today...
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Posted: 12 years ago

WITHOUT PAIN NO LOVE

PART 11: MANVEER:::::::: <3 :::::::

She was twisting and twirling on the bed but wasn't able to sleep…..

Suddenly she heard the sound of door being opened…

It was 2 am as she glanced at the clock….

Who is it ??? and what is he/she doing so late in my room…

She closes her eyes in fear wondering who it was…

Suddenly feels a hand caress her hair and cheek….

She is really worried now….

She opens her eyes a bit and is shocked to see the person….

She quickly closes her eyes again…

Girl's POV….

Haye rabba ye yaha kya kar raha hai??agar ise pata chala ki mein jagi hui hu to….

Par yeh yaha kar kya raha hai…

End of POV…

Girl was busy with her thoughts when suddenly she feels some hard lips place a soft kiss on her forehead…she was shocked….

Slowly the face slids down and kisses her on her cheek….

The person thought she was asleep but well he was wrong….

His hands move on her face….

She is scared…

His finger tips touch her lips caressing them with his thumb….

He bends down…slides his nose on her cheek….lost in his sleeping angel…

He whispers in her ear…

SWEET DREAMS PRINCESS…

Anya's POv…

Ye sab kya tha?? Usne mujhe kiss kyun di??

Aur mujhe use koi problem bhi nahi hai…??

Wat the hellz happening??

Kahi who bhi mujhse pyaa…nahi anya ye kya soch rahi hai??

Aj to usne khud tujhse kaha ki use pyaar is shabd se nafrat hai phir ye….

End of POV…

She then falls asleep thinkin about him…

The kiss had a magical effect on her…

She slept a beautiful pleasant night…thinking about him…..

Its morning…..

The sun rays were disturbing anya's sleep…

She turns on her bed….calling her mom to close the curtains….

Someone does close the curtains…

She says thank you mama half consciously and then the thought strikes her mind….

She wasn't at her home…no chance mama was here…who is it then….

She gets up quickly rubs her eyes to see who it was….

Uday sitting on the bed staring at her with a huge smile…

She remembers last night moments and smiles nervously…

did he really think I was asleep…she thought….

Uday: good morning princess…

Anya thought she was still dreaming so she pinches him on his cheek….he shouts in pain….

Uday: princess ye kya kar rahi ho???

He says rubbing his cheek….

Anya: tu yaha kya kar raha hai??

Uday: oh cmon princess kitni saari ladkiya tadapti hai…hume ese subah subah unke kamre me pane ke liye….and tumhe dekho….pyaar se wish bhi nahi kar rahi….

Anya: ab toh mujhe sachme pata chal gaya ki tum sach mein yahi ho…..

Uday smirks..: kya baat hai hamari dosti ko do din bhi nahi hue…aur tum abhi se hamare sapne dekhne lagi….

Anya: chal hat halkat vede….tu ye bata ki subah subah yaha kya kar raha hai??aur kal rat…

She bits her tongue becoming silent immediately…

Are use laga tha ki you were sleeping anya…ye kya bol rahi hai…she thought…

Uday confused: kal rat??

She blushes touching her cheek while he is still confused….

Uday: oh ho princess kaha kho gai??

Anya was unable to speak…

He knew he kissed her but she was asleep that time…so there was no chance she knew anything about it he thought….

Suddenly niks enters her room…at first she is shocked Uday ko anya ke room mein dekhkar…

Anya gets up from the bed and hugs her….

Thankfull she came on right time….

Niks: hi guyz…

Both together : hey,…

Anya yawns….

She turns to Uday as she knew he had come behind her…

Anya still yawning…: Uday college kitne baje janna hai…

Uday: abhi 2 ghante hai princess….

Acha tum taiyar ho jao hum neeche tumhara intezaar karenge….

He moves down towards her face…completely forgetting about niks standing there watching the two….

Uday seductively moves his finger on her face…

His nose on her cheeks….

Anya straightens…

She breathes heavily….

He then whispers in her ear enough loud so that niks could also hear….

His lips touching her ear…

Sending shivers through out her body….

Uday: princess humne tumhare liye wardrobe mein ek dress rakhi hai…ajj use pehen lena plz….hum tumhara neeche intezaar karenge…

Anya smiles and he is about to move more close but niks coughs…

Niks: ahem ahem….guys mujhe bhul mat jana….i doubt tum dono sach mein sirf dost hi ho na???

Anya: shut up niks…vese bata tu sara saman le ayi??

Niks: han baba leayi mein…

Anya to Uday: tujhe kya pura din yahi khada rehna hai??

Uday then suddenly holds her waist and pulls her towards him…

Uday moves finger on her face….

Uday: agar tum kaho toh…yahi ruk sakte hai…hum tum ek kamre mein band ho aur chabi khone ki actually jaroorat nahi hai…hume koi disturb karne nahi ayega…

Anya is all hypnotized…by his deep chocolate brown coloured eyes…

Niks coughs….

As soon as she gains her senses back…she hits him on his chest….

Freeing herself from her grip….

Anya: chal hat halkat veda…din ba din beshram hote jaa rahe ho…besharam gadhe…

Uday : sochlo princess hume gadha bulake tum khud ko bhi gadhi bula rahi ho…

Anya doesn't understand but niks does….

They both start laughing…

Anya irritated: tum dono has kyun rahe ho??

Uday ab bahar jao hume taiyar hona hai…

Uday as usual use pareshan karta hai…

She pushes him out…

Jate waqt…he peeps again…

Anya turns…

Uday: princess sir pe chidiya ka ghosala bada cute hai….

Anya's mouth fell open while niks was laughing…

Anya throwing her arms up in air…

Says unbelievable…

He then goes from there laughing…

~mahi~

note:guyz last epi ko jyada ache response nahi mile kya hua acha nahi lag raha??

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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg that's was a great update
Uday is so funny
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Posted: 12 years ago
bht bht bht bht bht bht bht acha tha...mahi u r a fab writer...m lvng it...nd last one ws olso vry gud...dnt thnk like dis silly grl :p
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherry.parul0

bht bht bht bht bht bht bht acha tha...mahi u r a fab writer...m lvng it...nd last one ws olso vry gud...dnt thnk like dis silly grl :p

OK OK THANKS NAHI BOLUNGI...BAS ESE HI MERE UPDATES PAR APNE RANGE BE RANGI CUMMMENTS DARSHAYA KARO... HEHEHEHE😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsomeee...very nice...update soon thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
😆 LLUUURRRVVVEED IIITTT!
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Posted: 12 years ago
gr8 update dear👏 but it was too short...do continue soon...😊

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