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..Sofia..

@..Sofia..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

greAt start👍🏼
continue soon ..n let me knOw whenever u update😊

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

I would like start to with a big thank you to all of you who have taken the time to read, comment and appreciate my work😲. Now that I am over my initial fear of rejection😳, I welcome any constructive criticism. I will try and reference most of quotes, etc. from sources other than Madhubala. If I miss anything, feel free to let me know. Here it goes'..

TAKEN DOWN

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Udhay only

@Udhay

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Thanks for this update, I loved it.. Loved the way u portrayed the inner-turmoils of Madhubala.! Eagerly awaiting for the Next part.. Update soon and PM me..

Edited by --Udhay-- - 12 years ago

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MuneebaSheikh

@MuneebaSheikh

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

great update
Pm me nxt update

Edited by hifzaa - 12 years ago

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Moumita

@-SmexyGhost-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Again a lovely update. Now i m w8ing fr the moment when RK suddenly come in front of MB & break her fast. Update soon.

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840216

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

great update frnd. plz continue and i hate whirney houston lol

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: deepak148
great update frnd. plz continue and i hate whirney houston lol

I do not know how I feel about Whitney. To be honest, this is the only song I know by her. Thank you for your kind works.

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ironwitch

@ironwitch

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: iiDona

*Kya hua, dar gayi kya Madhubala? Are abhi toh chand nikalne main vakt hai aur tum ne abhi se haar maan li? Chalo accha hai. RK mera he vrat todta aur tum bekaar mein he bhookhi mar jaati. Ab mehndi dho hi li hai toh, paani bhi pee lo.*

Wonderful update! But can you please tell me who is saying/thinking the above lines- I'm a little confused😳

Thanks a lot for the quick update

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: ranitha

Wonderful update! But can you please tell me who is saying/thinking the above lines- I'm a little confused😳
Thanks a lot for the quick update

Sorry, those were supposed to be Deepali's lines. Hope that helps.