MG *SS* WILL YOU EVER LOVE ME ??? part 3 pg 12

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WILL YOU EVER LOVE ME ???

Guys I am here starting a new ss on maan and geet so please be with me,,

Character sketch***

Maan singh khurana:

27 years old MD of khurana industries,, rude arrogant and lots of attitude,, handsome and hot,,, parents died when he was 12,, loves his daadi and siblings a lot,, currently lives in Delhi,, for all the outside world he is MSK,,


Geet handa:

22 years old beautiful and innocent,, bubbly chirpy and a chatter box,, her beauty is shyness,, completed her graduation,, parents and looking a good groom for her,, lives with her family in hoshiarpur,,


Dev singh khurana:

26 years old Maan's brother,, loves him a lot and married to Nandini two years ago,, currently lives in US handling the khurana industries branch there,,


Nandini khurana:

23 years old,, Dev's wife a lovable lady and loves maan Annie and daadi a lot and dev and she had a love marriage,,


Savithri Devi:

65 years old,, Maan's dear daadi maa and maan loves and respects her a lot after their parents died daadi look after the three siblings,, daadi loves all her grand kids a lot but she loves maan the most,, as he always considered him as her son not grand son,,


Anvesha malhothra:

22 years old,, Maan's sweet younger sister,, married a year back to Arjun malhothra, an arranged marriage,,


Arjun malhothra:

25 years old,, Annie's husband a sweet and caring person,, loves Annie a lot and lives in Mumbai he is a doctor,,


Mohindar handa:

Geet's father had a small business of textiles,, geet is only child of their,, Loves geet a lot,,


Rano handa:

Geet's sweet and adorable mother,, and a little strict and searching a good groom for her,,


Adi Sharma:

Maan's PA,,, manager,,, everything,


Pinky Sharma:

Adi's wife and a good friend of Annie and Nandini and also daadi maa's


Nakul:

Khurana's servant but as a family member,,


The other characters evil and non evil will get through the chapters,,

INDEX

PART 1

PART 2

PART 3








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TEASER:

KM,,

Daadi: Maan beta please my friend gave me the picture of girl you just go through it,,

Maan: Daadi maa please now I don't want to marry so don't force me,,

Daadi: But beta,,

Annie: Bhai only for us,,

Maan: Annie don't start gain,, you go and get ready I will drop you at the airport,,

Annie: No I will go alone I don't need your help,,

Maan: Annie for god sake you are not a kid anymore and you are married now so behave like that,,

Annie: I will behave like that but now you have to agree to see this girl,,

Daadi: Yes beta please,,

Maan: No daadi no way,,

Daadi: Beta its my last wish to see your marriage and your kids please,,

Maan: Daadi I am sorry to say but I cant fulfill your this wish but you just ask me another wish I will full fill everything not this one,,

Daadi: But maan bete I have only this wish left to see,,

Maan: Daadi about my marriage I am not going to marry but about kids you ask to Annie and dev they will give you grand kids ok,,

Annie: Bhai daadi maa want to see your kid first not mine or dev bhai's and we all want to see your wedding please bhai,,

Maan: Annie this discussion about my marriage is over now come I will drop you at airport and I also have meeting to attend,, and I will inform Arjun that you are coming in this flight,,,,

Annie: But,,

Daadi: You know maan bete when everyone will go then your daadi maa is alone here and,,

Maan: Daadi maa Nakul is here,,

Nakul: Maan baba what will I do with daadi,, she wants a bahu not me with her,,

Annie: Yes Nakul kaka aise kaho,,

Maan: Stop it Annie,,

Annie: Bhai you know I have seen the girl's photo she is nice and beautiful you two will look good together,,

Maan: Daadi maa and Annie you two very well know why I don't want to marry then again,,

Daadi: Beta all girls are not alike and,,

Maan: Daadi maa most of the girls I have seen is only after fame and money and,,

Daadi: Beta I will find a good girl,, the one who my friend bought is also good alliance not much rich but,,

Maan: Daadi maa I am leaving,, tell driver to drop Annie at airport,, and Annie when you reach Mumbai call me ok,,

Saying this maan left,,

Annie: But bhai,,

Daadi Annie and Nakul remained in the mansion,,

Daadi maa what will we do now??

Daadi: I don't know beta but will do something because I don't want my maan to suffer because of something in which he is no where at fault,,

Annie: Yes daadi maa,,

If I will get good comments and encouragement I will continue it today itself,, so guys read and comment,,

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice concept bt i would have loved it if there wil b part 1
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting..Why Maan don't want to marry? How Dadi going to bring girl front of Maan..
Waiting for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wonderful and interesting start...

please update soon...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wowww...dil khush ho gayaaa...got to read a new script on Maneeet...the first couple whom i totallly was mad at...but felt sad when it ended...and now u made me remember those scenes and i have started watching the maneet scenes now...thnx for giving this superb script...
continue soooner,,
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interesting update👏update the next one soon dear😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice concept n nice teaser
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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INTERESTING
WHY DOES MAAN NOT WANT TO MARRY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys read and comment,, you will get more information about geet and the reason of maan doesn't want to marry in next few chapters,,

After maan left,,

Annie: Daadi maa I am leaving for airport ok,,

Daadi: Ok beta,,

Annie: I will call you once I reach Mumbai,,

Daadi: Ok beta,, and take care of yourself and Arjun and your in laws,, ok,,

Annie: Yes daadi,, and you too care and Nakul kaka please make sure daadi have her medicines ok,,

Kaka: Ok beta you go with out any tension kaka is here Na will handle everything,,

Annie: Ok kaka,, daadi bye,,

Daadi: Bye beta,,

Then Annie left for airport,,

IN AIRPORT,, [after sometime,,]

Annie's cell started ringing,, and she picked the call and it was daadi,,

ON PHONE,,

Annie: Hello daadi kya hua?? Sab teek hai??

Kaka: Hello annie beta its Nakul kaka,,

Annie: Haan kaka why did you call me?? One minute why are you calling me form daadi's cell??

Kaka: Wo beta daadi is not well and she is fainted and is now in CITY hospital,,

Annie: What??

Kaka: Yes beta,,

Annie: Kaka how is daadi now,, did you call maan bhai dev bhai and what did the doctor said??

Kaka: Beta doctor didn't tell anything they are checking daadi,, she is in ICU,, now,, and I called maan baba but he didn't answer my call,,

Annie: Ok kaka I am coming,, you don't worry,,

Kaka: Ok beta,,

Then annie cancelled her tickets and called Arjun and informed him about daadi,, and she took a taxi and went to city hospital,, and on the way she called Adi and pinky and told them about daadi and man was in an important meeting,,

IN HOSPITAL,,

Annie reached the hospital and saw Nakul,,

Annie: Kaka how is daadi now??

Kaka: Beta doctor didn't came out till now,,

Annie: Ok,,

Just then doctor came out from ICU,, Nakul and annie ran to him,,

Annie: Doctor how is daadi maa,,

Kaka: Kya hua tha unhe??

Doctor: Annie you know I am her doctor for years and you all know she is suffering from heart problems also,,

Annie: Doctor what are you saying??
Doctor: I am sorry to say that she had an attack,,

Maan: What??
They saw maan adi and pinky were coming to them,,

Maan: What did you say doctor??


Doctor: Maan calm down,, I am saying the truth,, daadi had an attack and as Nakul kaka took her here on time so we saved her,,

She is,,

Doctor: Maan she is fine now,, and taking rest don't worry ok,,

Adi: But doctor how didi this happened??

Doctor: Adi daadi was heart patient and I prescribed her some medicines yoga and told her to avoid any type of stress and tension,, but she had a high BP when Nakul kaka bought her here,,

Annie: High bp,,

Doctor: Yes and tension also,,

Kaka: It is all because of maan baba's marriage,,

Annie: Kaka,,

Kaka: Yes doctor saab daadi maa is very much worried fro maan baba and they two have daily fight over this and then daadi will be depressed and then will cry in front of maan baba's parents photo,,

Annie: Kaka you didn't tell us before,,

Kaka: Annie beta daadi ma doesn't wanted to anyone know about her suffering,, but today it's the limit so I am telling this,,

Doctor: Maan, annie, as a doctor I only wanted to say is keep her happy and don't allow her to go any depression ok,,

Adi: Ji doctor,,

Doctor: And you can see her when we shift her to the private room,,

Maan: Thanks doctor,,

After doctor left,,

Annie: Maan bhai its because of your anger daadi,,

Maan: Annie you too,,

Annie: No we all wont say anything,, but want to say one thing last she was the only one left for us when we were alone and now because of your anger and ego you are making her alone,,

Kaka: Yes maan baba annie beta is right if something happens to daadi maa then you wont get any peace in whole your life,,

Adi: Maan sir,, don't worry daadi will be fine,, after that we will talk to her ok,,

Maan: Hmm,

Pinky: Annie did you called dev veer ji,,

Annie: Yes pinky I have called them,, bhai told me he ill took and urgency tickets and it will take at least two to three days,,

Just then a nurse came,,

Nurse: Mr. Khurana Mrs. Khurana is shifted to the private room you can meet her,,

Maan: Ok thanks,,

Then they all went to meet daadi maa who was in the hospital bed connected to various wires,,

Seeing her maan was the first one to break down,, because he always considered her as his everything,, and if something had happened to her then,,

Maan: Daadi maa,,

He softly called,,

Annie: Daadi maa,,

Annie also called with teary eyes,,

Then daadi maa slowly opened her eyes,,

Maan: Daadi maa how are you feeling??

Annie: Daadi should I call the doctor,,

Daadi: Beta I am fine,,

Hearing this maan got emotional,,

Maan: No daadi you are not fine,, I,, I am sorry for everything,,

Daadi: No maan bete,, I am sorry,,

Maan: Daadi maa please don't made me guilty,, I know you did everything for us after mom and dad left us,,

Daadi: Bete you are my kid and will do anything for you, annie and dev,, and don't ever call it as ehsaan,,

Annie: Daadi maa,,

Daadi: Annie bete you were left for airport and,,

Annie: Daadi I cancelled my trip and informed Arjun also ok,, and dev bhai will also come here soon,,

Daadi: Beta I am fine na then,,

Annie: No daadi you are not fine,, and now you will do whatever doctor will say ok,,

Daadi: Hmm,

After sometime doctor again came to them,,

Doctor: Daadi here is your medicines and foods have these two,

Daadi: No bete I am fine now then,,

Maan: Daadi do as doctor says,,


Daadi: What will I get from these bete,, why should I live long??

Adi: Daadi maa please don't stress you again,,

Maan: Daadi you don't want to live with me anymore at km,,

Daadi: Maan bete,,

Maan: Daadi I know I never said no to you for anything but,,

Daadi: Maan beta I know and I don't want to add any burden to you,, and if you don't want then ok,, Beta aap please give the meds,, I will have it with juice ok,,

Maan: Hmm,,

Then doctor left from the room and signaled maan to come to him,,

Maan: Doctor daadi maa,,

Doctor: Maan I think her wish to live also decreasing,, I mean see how she is speaking,,

Maan: Yes,, I know it was because of me, I,,

Doctor: Whatever it is,, its your family matter but as a doctor I want to say don't do this to her she may be get depressed and will,,

Maan: No,, I will do anything for her,,

Doctor: Ok maan and now its up to you,,

Maan: Ok doctor,,

Then maan again came to daadi maa,,

Maan: Daadi maa how are you feeling now??

Daadi: Fine beta,, when will you take me to Km back,,

Maan: In two days daadi maa, you need some rest so if you are here then doctors can take care of you very well,,

Daadi: Yes and in KM I will feel loneliness too,,

Hmm,, [maan thought for something,,]

Annie: Bhai you go I will be here with daadi,,

Maan: Its ok annie I am here na,,

Daadi: No bete annie is right she will be with me you go,, you have work in office,,

Maan: Daadi maa,,

Daadi: Its ok bete I can understand,, you go and don't worry I am really fine,,

Maan: Ok,,

Then he left for office,,

AFTER TWO DAYS,,

Maan was in a dilemma that what will he do for his daadi maa so that she will be happy,, and he knew what she wanted,,

It was the day daadi maa coming back to KM again, and in hospital maan annie everyone was making the discharging arrangements,,

Maan: Ok daadi now you can go home,, and please take rest,, don't take stress your health will be affect ok,,

Daadi: Ok bete,,

Then maan came forward and held daadi maa's hand,,

Daadi: No bete I will walk,, you don't worry,,

Maan: Daadi are you angry on me,,

Daadi: Yeh aap kya kah rahi hai maan bete,, why would I will be angry on you,,

Maan: I know daadi ki I made you sad but now I am ready to fulfill your all wish,,

Daadi: No bete I don't have any wishes,, [daadi looked away]

Maan: Daadi please look at me,, lease I am ready to get married ok,,

Daadi: What??

Maan: Yes daadi I am ready for marriage whom ever you want,, I am ready you just tell me to marry I am ready,,

Daadi: But maan bete,,

Maan: Daadi you are my mother tome after mom and I will do anything for your happiness and I know your happiness is to see my marriage,, and I am ready for that,,

Annie: Really bhai you are agreeing for wedding,,

Maan: Yes annie and daadi you can say yes to your friend,, and but by this I don't your health to get spoiled ok,,

Daadi: You agreed for marriage is a good news for me,, I am really happy maan bete,,

Daadi was really happy hearing this and she hugged maan and blessed him..

Daadi: Nakul did you hear maan agreed fro marriage,,

Nakul: Yes daadi,, and now you will get a bahu,,

Daadi: Yes,, I am so happy, I will inform everyone this Arjun, Dev, Nandini,, and beeji,, and will tell them to show maan's photo to the girl,,

Annie: Daadi you are going too fast you know,,

Daadi: But,,

Maan: annie is right first you have to be alright then everything,,

Daadi: But maan I am ok,, we will arrange the as soon as possible,,

Maan: Ok whatever you wish but now you will take good rest then dev Nandini and Arjun also will come then will discus about and will do further ok,,

Daadi: But,,

Maan: Now its over come we have to go home,,

Daadi: Yes maan bete hume bahut kaam hai,,

Maan: Ok,,

For everyone it was a shock that maan agreed for marriage but maan did it only for daadi,, adi annie and pinky went with daadi,, maan and doctor were left,,

Doctor: I didn't expect you to agree so soon,,

Maan: Doctor I have only my daadi left for me and I will do anything for her,, and this marriage is a small thing for me,,

Doctor: Hmm I hope everything gets ok,,

Maan: Yes doctor,,

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