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Originally posted by: Srishti_TanHa
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thank you so much for the comment. it means alot.Even though it was sad, I completely loved the OS !! My favourite part was how you described Sharon's death in both Swayam and Sharon's POV !! The whole OS was beautifully written !!
thank you so much for the comment...i loved it.Originally posted by: AmritaluvSwaRon
Hey Baz 😊...hey Amrita🤗
Nice to see one more beautiful SwaRon OS by you. Love the way you have described Sharon's death..how Swayam felt when he saw her dying in front of him and what Sharon was going thorough. Emotions were penned down beautifully by you. Thnx for the PM and please FF bhi UPDATE karo. 😊
thank you so much for such an amazing comment...loved itOriginally posted by: marauder
It was another incredible work from you Baz! ...thank you...Just loved it. The way you wrote the hospital scene it was beyond awesome...thank you once again😳 First the SwaRon conversation was so heart warming that any one could will be numb and then the way you wrote about death was just heart wrenching. Just fabulous. And yeah I alos liked the way in the how you wrote some of the Sharon dialogue in begining. It was nice touch to this OS...I am really glad u liked it..A super awesome work again from you which I enjoyed reading. 😃
thanks so much for such a lovely comment...loved it.Originally posted by: Anindita91
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unres***bas brilliant os'loved it to the core'brilliantly described by u..he couldn't take the pain any more so thought of giving up his life'but thank god he survived'he fulfilled her dreams'which is actually his own dream'n the way he said now he can say to her that he can never hurt her'its awesome'the hospital part'I just don't know what to say'both their pain..her making him promise her that he will fulfill her dreams..he will be happy'happy for her'he will not hurt her'n then that pain which she has to go through to reach her mother'brilliant baz'I am just speechless'it brought tears in my eyes'what ever u write'u r brilliant in it'anything'be it emotional'comic..romantic'anything'hats off to u dear'brilliant os'great work'...thank you so much😳
thank you so much for commenting i am glad u liked it.Originally posted by: tannu_swayam
Its sooo gud to read an OS of urs...dat ws one unusual concept...d update strtd wit a hr8brkn shattered Swayam...u explained how difficult it ws fr him to cope Sharon's death beautiful..u ptryd his feelins wit perfection...thanks..sharon's departin scene left me speechless😳...nd wen Swayam replied "U r my dream"...it brought tears in my eyes...that really means alot...ur writins have dat srt f impact...nd seriously Luvd how sharon made Swayam promise to continue dancin nd b happy...
Dat soul part of sharon ws seriously unexpected...u depicted dis part vry beautifully..thank you😳...wt happens after death z an unknown thng to evry1 f us...u brought an interestin view of dat...kudos fr dat...nd i absolutely Luvd d part how Swayam kept dancin nd fulfilled sharon's dream who ws his dream...it ws beautiful story of d beautiful feelin love...if u really love sum1 u can face any barrier nd any pain fr dat person...a gr8 os...u shud mre often...a gr8 piece of writin...an awesome story...
thank you so much for the comment...truely loved it.😊Originally posted by: Ananya.SwaRon
Baz,this was a fabulous OS by your side...thank you.. the pain,the grief,the melancholy were written with precise perfection. the mood of the OS though wasn't a jolly one yet it managed to steal my heart away. this was a heart-wrenching OS with some oh-so-awesome nostalgia. Sharon's dialogue at the first were a treat to read while the SwaRon convo was to die for. the Cusp which you presented between Sharon and her mother was nicely penned. there is nothing else to say than a awesome OS. keep up the good work coming.
thank you so much for commenting Surbhi...i really means alot.Originally posted by: surbhimathur
Baz! This was just amazing...you have written it so beautifully! I loved it...the pain could be felt within and the sadness was rightly put by you! Brilliant and a different piece from your side!
Locked Up In the Cupboard!
Rey sighed and massaged his head as he kept listening to swayam who went on and on about how he and Sharon fought again. He wanted to make it up to her but he was still mad at her. Feeling helpless he looked at kriya for help but found her in the same position with Sharon. She looked at him too and they both gave each other I-know-it look. Rey excused himself saying kriya is calling him while kriya also used the same excuse that rey is calling her and outside both of them decided to take care of the problem.
Sharon received a text from kriya saying meet me within 15 and she got up from her bed thinking what happened as to why she is calling her. It was an advantage that she lived next door to her so she just had to go to the house next door to hers and upon entering her room she saw no one there. She had been standing for five minutes when swayam entered the room and she said "YOU!" swayam gave her a bored look and replied "yeah I know I am pretty handsome no need to shout out loud." She glared at him and replied "oh pul-eez sorry to burst your bubble but you are not handsome at all" he looked at her with a mischievous glint in his eyes and said "I know u think I am pretty handsome why don't admit it?" Sharon felt more and more annoyed by every passing second and the way his eyes shone made her feel that he was up to something and that made her even more annoyed so she increased the intensity of her glare and replied back with anger "YOU R RIGHT I DO THINK SOMETHING AND THAT IS THAT U R THE UGLIEST PERSON ON THE PLANET EARTH" swayam smirked at her and took a step towards her who involuntarily took a step backwards which made him smirk even more. He said while advancing towards her "so u don't find me handsome han?" Sharon kept moving backwards and replied in a nervous voice "No" the more he stepped closer the more she could smell his cologne which was her favorite one and it played havoc on her senses. He finally had her trapped between the cupboards and there were inches left between them when he once again asked her "u don't find me handsome then why can't u take ur eyes off me?" she quickly looked away and replied with nervousness still in her voice the intimacy they were sharing was teasing "I….I…" swayam "you…you" Sharon "I am not drooling over you" swayam "unhun…admit it…..why does you breathing stops when I come near you" Sharon "i..it does not" swayam "it sure does….say it once Sharon" Sharon "u r not handsome at all" swayam stepped even more close and she closed her eyes stopping her breath while he placed his both hands on either sides of her against the cupboard and suddenly the cupboard doors which were not properly closed opened due to pressure and both of them fell in as it was one huge cupboard for kriya had loads as in LOADS of clothes. Sharon was under swayam and they both were in a very uncomfortable position. The cupboard no matter how huge was still small for the both of them. It was such a huge relief that there was nothing in it as kriya had emptied it in order to replace it with a new cupboard. Then before Sharon could hurl curses at swayam they heard someone giggle and then lock the cupboard. They looked horrified at each other and then yelled at the same time "KRIYA"
Sharon glared at him and said "u moron, idiot, jerk why did you threw me in the cupboard" swayam gave her an annoyed look and tried to untangle them but they just got in even more uncomfortable position. Sharon had not even noticed the position they were in yet and only god knows what she would do when finally she would notice it. Sharon "u monkey how dare u throw me in a cupboard" swayam "I did not throw u in a cupboard Sharon….if u would have noticed then let me remind u that we fell" Sharon moved a little in order to strangle him but he said "for the love of lord Sharon please don't move ur leg" and that's when she noticed how close they were. She was under him and he was practically lying on top of her. His one hand was trapped under her while he was supporting his torso from the other one in order to prevent crushing her underneath him. Her one hand was trapped at her side between their bodies and the stupid cupboard and her hand other was clutching his shirt scared from the fall and the sudden darkness while their legs were folded and her one leg was between his legs. She blushed as she took in their position and when it dawned upon her that she could not even move unless he allowed her to do so. Their faces were just inches away and she could feel his breath on her face which sent a tickling sensation in the pit of her stomach. she lowered her eyes and he said "u look so beautiful when u blush like that" she looked at him and found him grinning which annoyed her and she said "mind getting off of me" swayam "no" her eyes widen in shock and she replied "what? Get off of me!" swayam "no what u gonna do? Hit me? Kick me?...do it without coming more close to me" he smirked at her and she blushed and felt like breaking his teeth at the same time. she tried moving back but she couldn't there was no space and in doing so she hit his hand by her shoulder through which he was supporting his torso which made him lose his balance and he fell on her making his lips against her collar bone and she in turn went stiff as more heat flooded to her cheeks. He finally moved upwards a little and she removed her legs from between his legs. Then he freed his hand which was trapped underneath her and then finally stood up but hit his head was the cupboard was short in length for him. A second later Sharon also stood up and in doing so she also hit her head.
So then both of them were half standing and swayam was more uncomfortable as he was having more problems because of his tall height. Sharon felt like pulling her hair out they were still standing too close and their bodies were pressed against each other as if packed together in a cupboard. She growled in anger and then said "I am going to strangle you to death once we get of this thing" swayam "you just get your hands on me once and then he will count the places they will travel" she felt herself blush a deep shade of red upon hearing his reply. She could even feel heat radiate from her face and was so glad that it was dark in here and he could not see her. After taking a moment she replied back "u r a pervert!" swayam "if u say so" Sharon "don't come close to me jerk" and he took another step towards her so that now he was standing even more close to her. she dig the heel of her sandal in his foot and said "stop practicing being a pervert we all know u r expert in it" while he groaned in pain and replied "ahh Sharon…that hurt" he bent over and rested his head on her shoulder and waited for the pain to settle down. She could feel his soft hair brush against her neck and bottom of her face which tickled her and made her want to run her fingers in his smooth and silky hair. She took a deep breath and bit her lower lip in order to control her ragging desires. Finally after a few minutes he raised his head and said "by back hurts…why don't we sit down" she just nodded her head and he continued "let me sit first" Sharon "okay" she moved as back as the cupboard allowed to give him some space and he sat down stretching his back. He also stretched his legs which barely fitted in the cupboard when stretched then he signaled her to sit who looked at him with narrowed eyes and said "where? Make some space for me!" swayam gave her a dumb look and said "I think u can SEE that we BOTH cannot sit together in such a small space" Sharon "then where should I sit?" swayam sighed and replied "in my lap angel" she glared angrily at him as a slight blush crept on her cheeks and replied "I am NOT sitting in YOUR LAP" swayam "fine then keep standing….or should I say half bending" she looked away and said "moron" a few minutes passed and she looked at him who just smiled at her and asked for her hand. She gave it to him and he helped her sit in his lap. A few more minutes passed and she was cuddled against his chest and was playing with the buttons of his shirt while his one arm was wrapped around her waist. Her head was resting upon his chest and she could hear the rhythmic sound of his heart beat which seemed like the most beautiful melody she had ever listened. She was in her own peaceful world when he said "you know I am not ue mattress….and u r so heavy!" Sharon "shut-up…u r the one who suggested that I should sit in ur lap so u don't get to complain" swayam "aye aye captain" Sharon "swayam?" swayam "yeah" Sharon "what if we suffocate in here? I don't wanna die in this cupboard" he took a deep breath and replied "we r not gonna suffocate Sharon….there r loads of holes in the cupboards and the right door is not even of proper size so there is a narrow slit at the bottom plus I don't think they will lock us in here for long" she nodded but then suddenly stopped and went stiff and the next moment she was shouting "Ohmygod there is something on me…take it off…take it off plz" swayam "stop moving u r sitting on my legs…it hurts and where it what?" Sharon "SWAYAM take it off its moving upwards" swayam "where is it? What is it? and stop moving plz" Sharon "oh god it went inside!" with this she took off the jacket she was wearing and threw it away revealing the back colored tank top she was wearing which was strapless and went mid way up to her stomach. Then she turned her back towards him and said "take it off plz" he held her by her shoulders to make her sit still and then looked at for a moment before saying "there is nothing on your back Sharon except ur own hair" she mouthed "oh" understanding it must have been her hair and then turned to face him saying "sorry I thought that I was an insect or something" he smirked at her and replied "its okay I don't mind….r u gonna take that off too?" he said pointing towards her tank top. She blushed and glared at him saying "u r so shameless swayam" swayam "u r the one who is stripping and I am the one who is shameless?" she smacked him and replied "behave urself!" he pulled her closer to him by her waist and said "u have no idea how much I am BEHAVING actually right now" she blushed and looked down. He raised her face by placing a hand under her chin and then looked in her eyes. They were so deep and filled with so much love for him. He felt like drowning in them at that moment and said "I am sorry I shouldn't have fought with you" she replied "I am sorry too I should not have dragged the fight" he smiled at her and cupped her face while she wrapped her arms around his neck. Then he slowly brought his face close to her and placed his lips on top of hers. He slowly moved his lips against her and she responded back and after a few moments gave him entrance in her mouth. She had always been like this he gave her time to gain confidence and over come her shyness and she would eventually allow him in and after that it was the feeling of pure love and pleasure which ran in her body. Her hands went in his hair and he continued to explore the hidden corners of her mouth and then finally broke apart allowing her to breath but didn't stop. He left a trail of feather soft kisses from her jaw line down to her neck while she moved her head backwards giving him move space and moaned his name which just encouraged him more. When he reached her collarbone the door flew opened and shocked as well as embarrassed rey and kriya stood there.
He moved back and looked at them with an embarrassed and goofy expression on his face while sharon's head remained lowered and she moved as far away from him as she could in the cupboard. Kriya "I thought that u were gonna make her admit that u r handsome...guess u r still working on that" swayam for the first time in his life felt himself blush while Sharon almost hid her face with her hands. Then rey said "carry on guys…sorry to disturb ur little cupboard romance…hehheheh" then they closed the door again but didn't lock it and went away giggling and saying "u guys r so not gonna live this one down easily" once they were gone Sharon grabbed her jacket and moved out of the cupboard ready to run away from him but he grabbed her wrist and pulled her towards him. She bumped in his chest and shook her head in negative silently telling him to let her go now. He smiled at her then let go off her who ran downstairs smiling and blushing like an idiot while he stood there thinking that they should get locked in a cupboard more often.
P.S: yes, I know i have to update my FF's but i have written so much rona dhona in last few updates so wanted to write something romantic...I will try to give u guys an update this weekend. u all tell me which one do u want me to update enigma or hostage? and one name plz😛 and plz do leave ur feedback and hit the button. It really means alot. So guys where did u enjoyed them being locked up more bathroom or cup board?😆 or both?😆 and where should I lock them up in next time🤣😉.
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