Arsha SS-ch.4 updated pg7

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ArSha SS

Hey guys I'm writing any kind of stories for the first time so please excuse me as I may not be as good as many people here'.but I would like to try my hand on writing for the very first time on my most favourite couple ever that is none other than our very own ARSHA!!!!!😊😳😳 Which other better couple to start my writing "career" with'????Right'???😆😉

Anyways'..few things I wanna say regarding this write up is that I don't know how long it will be'.also don't know how and when I will give the updates'.😉

Secondly guys you'll are free to give me all sorts of appreciations or criticisms or even suggestions as to what story line you'll want or are expecting'.

Thirdly as the name goes it's a story about ArSha and not KriYaansh'. It is how I would want their personal life to be as an ardent ArSha fan'..there is absolutely no offence to any person or relationship they are in their personal lives whatsoever'.. It is just my imagination so there may be some imaginary characters or real incidents which I may turn it the way I would have wanted it to be'.'

So the background is such that there may be some imaginary characters or real incidents which I may turn it the way I would have wanted it to be'.'

So now enough of my bakk bakk and let me get to the story coz I'm sure you'll must have understood what I wanna say'..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great I love stories about Arsha :)
Plz continue soon nd pm me :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So the background is such that its Diwali and Kunwar and Charlie are in a relationship (or should I say 'SHE' is in a relationship!!) and Sneha and Shakti have left D3 and Sneha.G has entered and they are searching for a replacement for Sharon. Also since its Diwali Kunwar has got few days of holidays so he has gone to Indore to visit his parents and Charlie is in Shimla. Shakti is in Mumbai busy with photo-shoots and other stuffs but she has got a few days holiday from work since its Diwali…..my story starts from the time Kunwar reaches home…..

Ting-tong the bell rings…..a lady who was cooking in the kitchen for her beloved son came running to open the door with a pooja ki thali in her hand….as soon as she opened the door her eyes were filled with tears of happiness as she saw her son standing in front of her for what seemed after ages…..

He could see the longing in his mother's eyes for him and also the love for him…..he saw her perform the aarti with tear filled eyes…as soon as she finished her aarti they both hugged each other with love and he could feel the pain her mother felt by the distance they had for sooo many days…..

They went in and He greeted his Dad and his brothers….

After what seemed an hour of chatting he looked at his Mom and said, "Ma, I'm very hungry what's for lunch…????"

His mom replied, " your favourite things. Go freshen up aur main tumhare liye khana lagati hun…!!!"

K-"Ji Ma. Main abhi aaya"

And he went to his room and freshened up. As he came out from the washroom his eyes fell on the frame that was hung behind his bed. A collage which his DID friends had given when he got eliminated. He went near and saw the collage intently. Then his eyes fell on the corner of the collage. He went even more closer and caressed the face in the picture and a lump formed in his throat. Just then his mom came from behind calling out his name. He brushed the tears of his eyes and brought a fake smile and asked his mom to sit for lunch. However those tears didn't go unnoticed by his mom. But she thought she would talk to him later in the afternoon when everyone would be catching their afternoon sleep.

Soon they had a great family time where they all joked and laughed and remembered their childhood memories. Kunwar's mom particularly fed him with his hands as they met after ages.

By afternoon he had unpacked his stuff and was lying down on his bed just looking up at the ceiling and trying to find some answers or trying to sort out the confusion in his head. Just then his phone rang. He saw the caller's name and a weird expression crept up on his face. He picked up the call.

Charlie- Hi baby!! How are you?? You reached home safely?? I' already missing you…!!!

Kunwar- Hi Charls! Yaa I reached long tie back. How are you and everybody home??

C- All is well over here…why are you sounding low..?? tumhari tabiyat toh theek hai na??

K- haan main theek hun…kuch nai hua mujh…

C- Jhooth mat bolo….sach sach batao…

K- (Now he was getting a lil irritated) Maine ek baar kaha na Charlie main theek hunt oh theek hun…kuch hoga toh main bol dunga…abhi mujhe sona hai… main thak gaya hun….we'll talk later…bye….And he hung up…

He didn't notice that his mom was standing at the door and listening to the entire conversation….then his eyes fell on her…

K- Are MA aap wahan kyun khadi hai…aaye na andar aaye…

His mom came inside and sat on the bed….he kept his head on her lap…she started caressing it softly and said..

K's Mom(KM)- kaun tha beta?? Charlie..??

K- ji ma…

KM- kya tum mujhse kuch share karna chahoge…??

K- nai ma aisa kuch nai hai…who main bas thoda thak gaya tha isiliye gussa aa gaya…

KM- beta main tumhari Ma hun aur tumhe ache se jaanti hun…main dekh rahi hun jabse tum aaye ho bahut khoye khoye ho….tumhari hasi mein bhi dard chupa hai par tum who dard apni Ma se nai chupa sakte….

A tear slipped down from his eyes…He knew he couldn't hide anything from her….She was the one who was aware of all the things going on in his mind and heart and life…even though they stayed far he would call her everyday and share everything with her…

K- Ma woh….

Just as he was going to say something His Mom's phone rang…..

Precap- Keep guessing who's call can it be…and ya do tell me if you liked what I wrote so far….!!!!!

Appreciations and Criticisms And Suggestions all welcomed…

If anybody wants PM's please add me in your buddy list….

Lots of love- Aabha

And ya guys WISH YOU ALL AND YOUR FAMILIES A VERY HAPPY DIWALI AND A HEALTHY WEALTHY AND PROSPEROUS NEW YEAR….BE HAPPY AND STAY SAFE….GOD BLESS….

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Index-
Ch1- Page 1
Ch2-Page3
Ch3-Page6
Ch4-Page 7
Edited by Sweetheart17 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update
Awww kunwar :(
Very excited to know wats gna happen
Thnx 4 da pm :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice strt dear...!!!

Do continue soon n pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start...pls continue and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Start.. Continue Soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start
loved it..
continue soon n pm me pkz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start. Plz do pm me when u update the next one 👍🏼

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