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Posted: 19 years ago
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UNPREDICTABLE FUTURE OF A GIRL


She is a girl who is in a dark world
Which provides fears.
Though she has eyesight
She cant view her future.
Her destiny is veiled.
Tears fall from her eyes
Like the sky pours rain drops
.The mist makes her cold,
That gives anxiety
About her unpredictable future
Nightmares are really painful
That destroys her sleep.
She's unaware of everything
That holds her life.
Ignorance pushes her into pain
Which causes darkness everywhere

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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
OMG tht is so Beautiful yaar

loved it 👏 👏 😳

Very Apt , awsome


PS: i made a new siggy but there was a power failure since i didnt saved it i gotta work on it all over again 😭

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

UNPREDICTABLE FUTURE OF A GIRL


She is a girl who is in a dark world
Which provides fears.
Though she has eyesight
She cant view her future.
Her destiny is veiled.
Tears fall from her eyes
Like the sky pours rain drops
.The mist makes her cold,
That gives anxiety
About her unpredictable future
Nightmares are really painful
That destroys her sleep.
She's unaware of everything
That holds her life.
Ignorance pushes her into pain
Which causes darkness everywhere

😭 omg i am touched!!😳! It is such a wonderful poem!👏! You should write more hun!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
#4

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

UNPREDICTABLE FUTURE OF A GIRL


She is a girl who is in a dark world
Which provides fears.
Though she has eyesight
She cant view her future.
Her destiny is veiled.
Tears fall from her eyes
Like the sky pours rain drops
.The mist makes her cold,
That gives anxiety
About her unpredictable future
Nightmares are really painful
That destroys her sleep.
She's unaware of everything
That holds her life.
Ignorance pushes her into pain
Which causes darkness everywhere

its great, very touching!!

thnx alot for sharing😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
wah kya poem hain!lajawaab! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
Its a REALLY touching poem! So nicely written 👏 👏 👏 Excellent job jasmine...this is a really good poem 😳

Naina
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
wonderfull poem!!
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
aww...What a lovely poem! loved it 😉

Shagun: ohhh..it was sad hearing about the power failure 😭
Edited by Mano786 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#9
so strong..........i got goosebumps 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#10
great job dear the words are so sensible and touchy reallly nice 👏

devi

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