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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

i liked the story di.. Practical but you know what, I read the first comment on the OS and seriously laughed out loud! Moon! You're tooo cute! :*

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cooljaya11

@cooljaya11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Varshu_Karthik
i liked the story di.. Practical but you know what, I read the first comment on the OS and seriously laughed out loud! Moon! You're tooo cute! :*

Even me too varshu hehehehe

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zoya_naziya

@zoya_naziya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

AGAR KUCH PREM KAHANI ADDHURI REH JAYE TO ISKA MATLAB YE NAHI KI USME KABHI MOHABBAT NAHI THI , KYUNKI USKA DARD HAMESHA MOHBBAT KA GHAV BAN KE DIL ME DARD DETA REHTA HE "

For the above line👍🏼

Nice story Di:):)

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KaranKittu4eva

@KaranKittu4eva

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I think this is the first time I'm reading your work jaya di😳

Aww, I really enjoyed this story it's realistic no matter how much we want not every story has a perfect end and sometimes we need to awknowledge the truth and move on it's not a perfect world. It's sad what a huge impact these characters leave on us but that's reality for you especially in todays fast-paced world..

Btw, I really liked how you tied the song Kya hua Tera Vaada is the story and in the end again. 😊The last lines were amazing! 👍🏼

"YE JARURI NAHI HAR KAHANI KA ANT HAAPY HO , KUCH KAHANI AESI BHI HOTI HE JO UNKAHI HOTI HE , PAR AGAR KUCH PREM KAHANI ADDHURI REH JAYE TO ISKA MATLAB YE NAHI KI USME KABHI MOHABBAT NAHI THI , KYUNKI USKA DARD HAMESHA MOHBBAT KA GHAV BAN KE DIL ME DARD DETA REHTA HE "

Edited by KaranKittu4eva - 13 years ago

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dishdirection

@dishdirection

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

nice one really real is real

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pari_15

@pari_15

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

U wrote it beautifully..n its So true..bt u should've changed the name..coz as madhu said..ye humara arjun nhi hai..balki uska hamshakal fraud wala version hai..

Next time do make sum on arohi finding her real prince charming..

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pravallika

@prava55663

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

awesome os...great

thanks a lot for pm..

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Archana

@mysticlover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

i love this os!!

but i agree with madhu and pari! i am not naming anyone but i would rather have it if the guy was some 'aman, aryan or whatever names we used to give arohi's boyfriends other than arjun!'

and my arohi should have her real prince charming 'arjun'!

or better let this be arjun and her real prince charming be someone named 'arjun' too!

and again i am not naming anyone!