Fanaa Hum Mohobbat Mein Teri-#4,Thrd 5 link added - Page 39

part-48

Toasty-tej, I told you na, , I am having a bad feeling, , see, , our geet…. Words were not coming out from our mouth….. I didn't said anything, , i immediately called to travel agent and booked three tickets to delhi, ,

Delhi

Rep-we are here inside the AIMS hospital, , we are trying to gather all the information about Mrs. Khurana, , as you can see The Maan Singh Khurana is sitting outside of the ICU on floor , , he is not in his sense, , we are trying to ask some questions about his wife but he is mum, , not speaking any word……

After an hour, , geet has been shifted to private room, , and maan was sitting beside her while dadi was coming to the hospital, , Vedanta was at home with nakul, , he will take proper care of his….. dadi had called to annie and informed her about geet's condition, , she panicked hearing this and They all are coming back to delhi….

Inside the geet's room…..

Maan was sitting beside her bed and kept staring at her face…. The words of doctor still ringing in his ears…. He can't imagine that anything like that could be happen and but it happened in real but it is real worst thing that is happened….. he was cursing himself and made up his mind that he will never tell this to anyone…. He doesn't want that anyone will snatch geet from him…..

Teri baazuon mein meri chahatein samaaye
Teri dhadkano ko meri dhadkane sunaaye

Maan held her hand and placed it near his heart, , telling her that this heart is beating for her, , please wake up… please come back from this unconscious state…..

Where did you go leaving me alone,

giving me the pains which I do not own.

Please geet, , yours maan telling you to come back to me, , I am waiting for you, , see near you…..

Dadi come at the hospital and standing maan, , she is crying literally seeing geet like this, , she is not doing any activity which she used to do…. She is not giggling like she used to do with dadi while cracking jokes with annie, , and passing comments, , she is not playing with Vedanta or telling him stories, , she is not doing any effort to regaining conscious….. why? Why she is not doing any effort? Why she is lying like that?

Maan-dadi, see na geet ko kya ho gaya hai? Please say to her for wake up, , open her eyes, , please tell na…. she listen your every word na, , please if you'll tell her then she will surely open her eyes….

Dadi turned her face, , she can't see maan like this, , the situation of her both loving grand children, , she can't see…..

Dadi-maan bte, , what did doctor said? Dadi asked to maan, , she wants to know about her progress…. Hearing these words maan went back before 2-3 hours, , when he talked with the doctor and when he was told by the doctor those painful words…. No, I can't tell anyone, , no…. not even to geet, , I can't give more pain to geet, , I have already given lots of pain to her, not now….

Maan was mum and kept thinking what doctor had said to him….. no, maa? no, what are you thinking? How can you hide this from her? She has the right to know everything, , after all it's was her baby…. No, I can't hide this from her, , mujhe geet ko batana hi hoga…..

Flashback

Maan-doctor, , how is geet now? Please tell me, , ….. doctor was thinking that how to tell him and he has to, , and they say that doctor has not heart when they operate any patient and their duty is to tell everything about the patient to their relatives…..

Doctor-mr. khurana, , your wife's condition is not normal, ,we can't say anything right now….

Maan-what do you mean doctor? How can you say that you can't say anything right now? You have operated her right now, you supposed to know about her then why are you not telling me anything? She is my wife, my life dam it…. Maan was screaming, shouting, , threatening the doctor, , the doctor was trying to console him as much as he can do..

Doctor-please mr. khurana, , hold on, calm down…. We are not saying that anything bad will happen, , I am saying that your wife will be under observation for next 24 hours till then she will not regain her consciousness, , then we can say that how fast she can progress…… hearing this maan sighed in little relief…. But the next set of words snatch the land under his feet…. He was stunned hearing that news., , no, it can't be true… how it can be true, , oh no…. ye kya ho gaya? Kaise ho gaya?

Kya sukoon kya junoon humnawa
Abhi abhi dil ki suni hai

Doctor-but mr. khurana, there is a bad news also…. Maan at once looked at doctor's face, , what it can be? He was shaking with fear from inside, ,

Maan-w-w-h-aa-t doctor? Stammered maan with fear and confusion….

Doctor-we are sorry mr. khurana, , we didn't get success in saving the baby… sorry, , you have lost your baby….. doctor looked down first at the floor then patted maan's shoulder and went away leaving him alone, , maan was stunned, , he lost his baby that means geet was pregnant…. Oh god! Maan was thumped down on the floor, tears fell down from his eyes, ,

Why did you broke my heart into two,

without caring about me and listening me too.

Why did not you try to understand my feelings, my love,

just left me dumb with thousands of unsaid words.

He never knew that geet was pregnant but suddenly he is feeling the strong attachment with the baby, the sudden love he felt for the baby, for whom he never knew that he is exist in this world , , this is all just because of me, , only because of me, , the first night of our wedding, ,please god, don't punish me like this for those sins i have done…. Please god, don't punish geet for my sins, , what was her fault? why she will suffer? Why god? why?

Flashback ends….

Maan came out from his thoughts when he heard dadi is calling him…..

Dadi-maan bte, , boliye na, doctor ne kya kaha? Maan looked at dadi and then geet….. he swallowed hard, ,

Maan-wo dadi, doctor is saying that they will keep geet under observation for next 24 hours till then she will not regain her consciousness…. When maan was telling this to dadi, , he saw tej , toasty , geet's father , alka and Vicky, all were standing at the door and listening to him…. Maan looked at them with his guilty eyes , , he doesn't know how to meet his eyes with them, , but the truth is that they don't know anything about the baby…..

They all come towards geet's bed and looked at her with their teary eyes, , mohinder was completely broke down, , he is so soft by his heart, , he can never see anyone in this condition and here his doctor in this condition… tej was consoling his dad, , holding him by his shoulder while dadi was trying to say something to maan….

Maan looked at mohinder, , he felt guilty, ,

Maan- I am sorry papa, , I am failed in saving geet, , I am responsible for all this,,,, maan was cursing himself again, , but he never knew that he said papa to geet's father, , whom he never talked with, , not even at phone… he doesn't know why the papa word come out from his mouth….

Mohinder-no maan bte, there is no fault of yours, , you are with her, that's enough for us….

Tej-maan ji, doctor ne kya kaha? Before maan could say something, dadi spoke in mid, she knew maan's state of mind….

Dadi-they are saying that they will keep geet under observation for next 24 hours…. Now 20 hours left….

Maan-dadi, you go home, I am here near geet… please all of you, take rest, , you all must be tired after traveling….

Tej-but maan ji, , hum kaise?

Dadi-haan maan, hum aapko akele chhodkar kaise chalein jaaye?

Maan-seems you don't trust me, that's why you are saying like this, , , saying so maan looked at geet….

Mohinder-no, maan bte, , nothing is like that…. Chalo tej, toasty, , we all will come in morning but promise me maan that in morning you'll go at home and will take some rest….. maan nodded in yes and , , dadi kissed on geet's forehead so mohinder , tej and toasty also….. they all took leave from there…..

Then nurse come on round and wrote the progress on re notepad and gave an injection to geet….. she went and maan slipped beside geet on her bed, , that bed was big in size, , he wants to hold geet near his heart…..

I feel so incomplete as you are not beside me,

Just like the heart without the heart beats,

Just like the body without soul,

Just like the night without stars and moon.,

Just like a ship with a hole.

In reality, you are beside of me but in real sense you are not, , I can't feel soft caress on my chest, , the soft music of your breath, , it's like I am here without soul, my body is here, , I also can't breath properly because I can't hear your normal breath….. I am nothing you geet, , please come back….

Maan took her in his embrace and hold her properly, not to hurt her anymore, ,

he had done everything already, , just before some days I have realized that I have some feelings for you and now you went in this state, , please don't do this to me, , He placed a kiss on her forehead and held her close to his heart, , doesn't know when the sleep took over his eyes and both went in deep slumber, , one was unconscious and other one is dreaming about his life….

Abhi abhi tham jaane ki baat
Woh subah toh bewajah ho
Ke guzre bin tumhare jiski raat
Woh subah toh bewajah ho
Ke guzre bin tumhare jiski raat

Our life has been started now and today you are lying in my arms like a lifeless body, , why geet? Please wake up and tell me that you are still mine….

It is early morning now, , he opened his eyes, , looked at her pale face, , she is still unconscious, , lying in his arms like a lifeless body, , every morning when he opened his eyes, , the glowing face of geet come in front of his eyes and today she is so pale, , if morning like this, then he doesn't want any morning, , he will be in illusion that this is night and will always held geet in his embrace, , he doesn't know what is happening with him, , but he is going insane for geet, , every minute, every second is looking like ages….

H is feeling so empty this morning because he can't her cuddles in his arms, , he remember one night when Vedanta didn't sleep with them in their room, , that night was the best night ever,, geet was sleeping so calmly in maan's embrace, , and next morning she was cuddling in his arms like a baby hiding her face in his neck because of sun rays….

A smile crept on maan's lips regaining that night but soon it vanish from his face when his sight fell on her face and regain the words of doctor….

Please come back in my life,

i have forgotten to live it without you.

Come and hold my hand my beloved,

as i am dying to meet you and love you.

Precap

Piya's reaction and geet regaining consciousness…..

Ok, so hows it??????? Jhatka or not? Everyone was thinking that geet will slip in coma, , but here is nothing like that….

Ok, , as you all remember may be or may be not, , geet had took a pill after her SR but sometimes pills doesn't work (waise I don't know much about all this), take this as writer's story only, please don't find logics here…. Because I don't know that pills works properly or not? , , you'll get to know about her pregnancy I mean why geet didn't realize that she was pregnant… ok, till then wait…

Ok now tell me, you want little dhamaka in 50^th part or not? Means a Kiss or maan knowing the connection of geet's almond eyes with him??? Means maan knowing geet's past,,,,,,,,,, Tell me fast…

I have started a new ff, , please have a look and let me know that should i continue this or not?


Winter Moonlight
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3284176/mg-ff-winter-moonlight-leaving-note-sorry-pg-31

yeh kya

mindblowing part... geet lost d baby :-(
feeling so bad 4 maan...
n yaa want a dhamakedar 50th part.

haila ye kaisa hua...she took the pills na ...mmm baby😭...do continue soon...

That was yet another shocking update..!!
geet lost her baby b4 she cud hear the news that she s carrying..
that was so painful..

huh!!!!!😲

awesome one

update they couldn't save baby maan numb waiting for next