'A Damsel In Distress' (MG)~~ Part 24 (pg 100) - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ramyayuppy

yaarrr no maan here :(
i thought maaneet ka meeting hogi yaha ;)
chal koi baat nhi
dis is also rocking
par maan hoga tho kuch zyada hi rocking hoti na ;)
wese nyc update :D
geet-nt-dev convo reminds me of my convo wid my czn n jiju hehehe jijus r always shoo sweet ;)
and ye rahul ko b nhi pata abt geets businesss ???
and is dat anu maans distance relative :P
the way she asks geet dat chori ki.kya :P lollzzz
abhi bachi k samne geet ki ye halat hy tho the great cop maan dmsingh khurana k samne no doubt she will faint wid nerves breakdown 🤣
and geet jus uses the car and returns hmm gud gul i thought she wil do aish wid dem n den sell :-P
wese maan ka car return nhi kia :O
no probs i can understand
mein tho kerchief b return nhi krti if it belongs to maan :-P
hehe
bahut bol lia na :-\
pata hy :-P. kya karu mein hu adat se majboor :-P
byeee tc
thnx fr adding me n.pm :-)


i like big big commnts so. jitne lambe hote hen utna maza aata h... 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a unique style to wake up sum1
wow poor girl missing maan from last 4 mnths
and she didnt even return his car back to him 😆

here dev rescued her from naitara's attack
n let her ear allo ki paratha

sum where she still expect that maan will come for her
n buddhu remembered after whole 4 months that he didnt knw her name

now maan came to know abt geet soon
maaneet aamna samna but how 😉
lets wait 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear just read all parts today only...amazing concept and a gr8 and very different story, loved it very much and really very eager tyo see the re-union of maaneet...

plss cont soon and thanks a lot for all ur pm's 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 11
awesome part...
OMG the kid is really so too good...
Geet ki bhi bolti band hogayi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART 12

She saw some movement few meters far. She stopped her car behind a big tree and moved a little closer trying to see them clearly.

She saw two jeeps and 6 men and 3 of them had guns, she gasped and closed her mouth. They were exchanging suitcases and then some papers.

She thought that they could be here for some business deal, but 'why with gunmen?' She was in dilemma whether to call the police or not. But they can be some kind of smugglers or, or,



TERRORISTS!!!!!!!!!

She quickly ran back towards her car and took out her cell phone and called the police hiding herself behind the car.

"Hello! POLICE STATION." Geet asked slowly.

"Kya hai?" a man with a harsh voice replied.

"hello, dekhiye mere samne kuch movements ho rhi hen jo mujhe sahi nhi lg rhi h...hello??... Aap sun rhe hen na meri baat?" Geet asked the man.

"Haan haan madam rukiye," he asked her to hold and then shouted, "Vadmare! Sahab ko bula"

Geet was really scared, 'what if the police don't come on time, what if these people see me, what will they do? Will they kill me?'

Her thoughts came to an end when she heard a voice from the phone, "Hello, hello? Anybody there?" Man asked.

She thought sounds better than the earlier one, he must be intelligent too and will he believe me? Lets try, "Hello, Mein Geet bol rhi hun I am here on a deserted road, some kind of forest on the both sides of the road, its between Sohna road and City Gurgaon." Geet said.

The man started writing the details she was giving and asked her to continue.

"There is some worrying movement here, there are 6 men three of them have guns with them and there are some rifles also in their jeeps, they are exchanging some kind of papers and suitcases. Please come and help me I don't think they will leave me alive if they see me right now." Geet said it trembling with fear.


"Ma'am Ma'am, please calm down our men will be reaching there in no minute okay. Please stay calm and stay inside or behind your vehicle." The man said and disconnected the call.

He ran towards a cabin and smashed inside his cabin and said, "sir emergency!"

A man with stubble and m shaped lips was discussing something with his other colleague immediately looked at the man who interrupted their important conversation and asked, "What ADI?"

And its none another than our MAAN SINGH KHURANA!

"Maan sir there was phone call, a girl called and said that there is some movement near Sohna Road we have to look into the matter quickly sir." He stressed on the quick part.

Maan immediately called Yash and Taruna and ordered them to rush to the site.

Here Geet was sitting behind her car clutching her locket in her hand tight. Naintara had given it to her when she started her dancing professionally at the age of 17.


Though Naintara was not her real sister still she loved Geet more than her sister. Geet was 11 years old when her parents died in 9/11 attacks in New York.

Her Aunt and Naintara's mother brought Geet back to India the very same year. Geet's mother and Naintara's mother both were very close friends. So when Geet's parents died Naintara's mother adopted Geet and took care of her like her own daughter, Geet's eyes reminded her of her friend.

Geet loves her sister more than anything else in this world and her decisions are the final decisions. When Naintara was not here in India for 2 years. Geet stayed here in India playing her game and tricking people.

Naintara don't know anything about all this, but Dev knew it because she cannot hide anything from both of them but she hide it from Naintara because of her pregnancy. Dev supported her but asked her be careful and let me tell you Dev is a lawyer, a very famous one. 😛

Suddenly her phone started ringing and she cut it immediately. No one heard it. She sighed and then checked whose call was it.

It was Dev's call and she thought, 'Jiju inhe kya kaam aa gya voh bhi tab jab mere samne mauth khadi h.'

but then the thought struck her, 'kahin didu ko kuch'.' she left it incomplete and quickly call Dev, "hello" a nervous voice came from other the side.

"Hello!, jiju" Geet asked in a slow volume.

"Hello, Geet Naintara ke stomach mein bahut dard ho rha h I am taking her to hospital okay. You either come to hospital or go home I will call you and tell you her status, okay I gotta go now Geet doctor is calling me inside. Bye take care." Dev said it all in a hurry leaving Geet's world shattered.

"Didu is not well!" Geet said it to herself.

One of the men saw her and took out his gun and slowly moves towards her. One by one, all of them circled around her. She was sitting on the ground lost, she didn't notice them coming towards her.

One of them said, " Need help miss?"

She startled from sudden voice and stood up and saw 6 of them around her and she is trapped.

She said meekly, "No"

He slowly stared to close the distance between her and him. She started to move backward but stopped as she hit one of the buys behind her.

"Dekho, don't come near me okay, Varna acha nhi hoga!" Geet said it strong-mindedly.

"Ohh really, lets see what you can do?"the man said.

Geet gathered some courage and put her hands forward in a karate position.

The man laughed and came in front to grab her hand, but she twisted his hand and grabbed him by his elbow and makes him fall on the ground. Others saw this in shock.

They all nudged one another to attack first; she was standing there in between all of them and waiting for another one to come.

One guy came in front with knife with she dodged and hit him on his hand and fall down and she hit him badly on his stomach, two more of them came in front to hit her but she managed to dodge them also and hit them with her leg one by one.

They all came one by one and she manages to fight with all of them. Few punches, few kicks and few lafaas 😉. Now she was tired, she was gasping heavily.

But one of the men stood up on his feet and pointed his gun on her head. Geet stood still when she felt a cold metal on her head.

HE was going to shoot and Geet closed her eyes tight remembering all her sweet memories with her family and her

Maan.

Dhoosh!!!!!

(guys i dnt know the real sound of a gunshot so plzz tell me haan ki theek thi ya nhi 😛)

There was a loud sound of gunshot but Geet opened her eyes, to find a man and a girl with guns in their hands and the man who pointed his gun on her was on the floor with the bullet on his leg and he was screaming with pain.

They ran towards her and Yash asked, "You fine?"

Geet just nodded her head.

"Lets go Yash." Taruna said.

Yash and Taruna saw that all of the men were on the ground with holding their hands and legs and head.

"Woah!! You manage then alone." Yash asked.

Geet said, "Yes, I am a black belt in karate and know shaolin kung fu and taekwondo."

Yash opened his mouth to praise but Taruna said, "Look forward."

They saw three cars coming towards them with men with big guns shooting at them. They back towards their car Geet sat inside her car with her head down.

Taruna and Yash manage to shoot back and kill few of them.

They get back to her car and Geet started the car and drove hastily.

Taruna told the directions while Yash was keeping his eye back to see if they were following them or not, luckily not.

They came inside the police headquarters premises and sighed.

Taruna asked her get out of the car and follow. Geet tried to reason that she have an emergency at home and got to go.

But Taruna didn't nudged a little and grabbed her by elbow and dragged her inside. She was little rude to Geet.

Yash's nature was very friendly he asked her to leave her elbow but she glared at him in anger. That was enough to shut him up. She took her inside the interrogation room and left her there alone. But, before going out she took Geet's cell phone with her.

Geet was getting hell worried thinking about Naintara. She was regretting the minute she said yes to Rahul to drop Anu home.

Maan and Adi were informed that the girl is here and sitting in the interrogation room.

Yash told them that it is not safe for her now going out her house alone.

Maan was thinking about the terrorists who escaped from there hand but they captured few of them. He send Adi to look into the girl's matter, he has some other more important tasks to do.

Adi went inside the interrogation room and saw her resting her hands on the table and her head between her palms, sitting on the chair.

Adi sighed and said, "Geet, hi my name is Adi"

She looked up at the man in his 20's with geek spectacles, she was worried right now, and otherwise she would have laughed seeing his face. She thought she had heard his voice before but when and where.

"Mene aapki awaaz suni h kahin, but yaad nhi aa rha kahan." Geet said.

"Tumne abhi kuch der pehle mujhse phone par baat kri thi." Adi said smiling at her. She felt like she talking to Rahul or Dev, she felt comfortable.

She said, " Adi, I have to go home right now. I have an emergency. Please, my sister is in hospital, she is pregnant. I don't know what to do." She said it emotionally.

Adi said helplessly, "sorry Geet you can not go anywhere. Please try to understand. We have to do our work na! " He gave her water and she took it sipped it but the water didn't go inside due to the lump in her throat. She was on the verge of crying but tried not to.

"Geet, we just need your help in this case a main suspect of this case fled and you have seen his face, he is very dangerous and now you are in his bad lists so, you need police protection. Aur abhi bahar nikalna safe nhi h. Sir have sent few officers to check the that area'"

She didn't let him complete and shouted in frustration, "What do you mean? Mein ghar nhi jaa sakti. I said I have emergency at home. Do you understand! EMERGENCY!"

Adi understood she is emotionally tensed. He asks her to calm down.

She calmed and said, "look please let me'. Okay don't let me go just let me make a call. Just one call, I will call my family member and ask him about her okay?" she asked and hoped that he agrees.

He sighed and said, "I have to ask Sir Geet. But don't worry I will try my best okay."

She sighs and nods her head, he rushes out before she grab his hairs pull them out.

He knocks his cabin door and a voice came from inside, "come in."

"Sir, the girl she is saying she wants to make a call home. She is having am emergency at home."

"Adi you know that it is not allowed right. Then you waste time coming here." Maan said in irritation.

"Sir, she is really having problem at home, a serious one. Her sister is pregnant and is in hospital she wants to make a call to check whether she is fine or not." Adi tried to reason.

Maan sighed and said, "Go on. Do what you feel is good."

Meaning a yes.

Adi smiled and said, "thank you sir, you're the best, we love you sir..."

"Adi go from here now." Maan said it sternly.

Adi rushed to her and shouted, "Geet aao call krlo jldi."

She ran towards the door grabbed her cell from the counter and called Dev.

Adi was standing by her side.

"Hello!, jiju how's didu? Voh theek toh h na? Kuch hua toh nhi na?" Geet asked one question after another, didn't give time to Dev to say anything.

"Geet Geet relax bacha, kuch nhi hua it was just false alarm you know. Doctor said that she is fine aur kal tak ghar aa sakti h abhi vaise bhi she is sleeping." Dev said.

Geet sighed in relief and said, "hmmm" she was noiselessly crying so that Dev or Adi don't know that she is weeping.

"Geet you are home na?" Dev asked.

Geet gulped and said, "Voh, nhi I am in police station." She wiped her tears.

She heard him say or rather shouted, "POLICE STATION!!, but why, how kahin pataa toh nhi chal gya ?? Pakdi gayi na Geet kaha tha na mene aise kaam mat kiya kr." Dev said it panicking.

Geet turned around to see if Adi heard it or not, but he was busy with someone.

She sighed and said, "chill jiju, its not for that. Baaki baat ghar aakr btaungi."

"fir kyun? Ab kya kia tune fir koi galat kaam shuru kar dia na tune?" Dev said it angrily.

"uff, bye will tell you everything tomorrow." Geet said it hastily.

"Okay bye but tell me everything in detail." Dev said.

"Haan haan bye now take care of her." Geet said this and cut the call.

She rested herself on the sidewall and sighed.

"Everything fine?" Adi asked.

"Hmm, she is fine. Thanks Adi." She said it genuinely.

"Geet please sit inside, we have to ask few questions and the whole incident. Are you okay with it?" Adi asked her.

"Yes I am." Geet said going inside.

She sat on the chair and asked Adi who was closing the door, "Who will come to interrogate Adi?"

He smiled and said, "Our Sir is coming Geet, and he is handling this case so he will personally interrogate you."

She smiled and sat there waiting for THE SIR TO COME!

Maan on the other side was finding it very strange in the office. He himself doesn't know why but he felt her presence. How is it possible Maan? He was questioning himself again and again. Adi came and broke his chain of thoughts by saying, "Sir Geet is ready for the interrogation. You may go."

Maan nodded and said, "coming"

He stood up from his chair and walked towards the interrogation room where she was sitting.

It was not a group interrogation so it was in a personal cabin room type with two chairs and one table and a light and was centrally air-conditioned so no ceiling fan.

He holds the doorknob and opened the door and saw a girl in white velour tracksuit sitting with head on the table like a student in school who is not willing to study and wants to sleep and tells the teacher that "I am not well". (Like me 😛)

He came inside with his heartbeats increasing each second he felt some strong bond with this white track suit girl. He tried to recall her name and said, "Geet?"



Precap~~~MAANEET ... Talking talking 😃 😉

Yaar GUys now i need big big comments poooleeezzz.. mein bhi toh aap logon ko kitni badi badi updates deti hun na 😭 plzzz... leave a big long comment... 😃
❤️ luv u all...

Edited by Harshitabedi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me 1st again yayyy😆
awesome update,finally maaneet met hmmm god eagerly waiting for next part yar.😃
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me 1st again yayyy😆
awesome update,finally maaneet met hmmm god eagerly waiting for next part yar.😃
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😉 thanxxx... 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
fab
maaneet met
plz update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: lovesia

fab

maaneet met
plz update next part soon


😛 surelyy... and thanxxx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Kya yaar... Sare writers na aisa he karte hai... Mai point par stop kar dete hai...
Not fair...
Waise nice part...
Omg geet ne sabko dho dala... Superb... Geet hs so many talents...
So dev ko pata tha geet k business k bare mai...hmmm...
Nw waiting for maaneet talk...

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