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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

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@Carabelli5

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

RES!

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might I start with this quote

For you see, each day I love you more
Today more than yesterday and less than tomorrow.

FIFTEEN YEARS of lost love. Wait this OS has multiple layers of interpretations for me. You have surprised me so much, I did not know one could write such a serene piece on such a hip song. What i loved most was your choice of word, it made it so real, plausible and imaginable. I could picture it all and could not help but smile along.

My favorite quote that captured me and took me that courtyard was

"They listened to her warm laughter, the tinkling of her payals and the synchronized thumping of their hearts."

I have fallen in love with this piece and I shall cherish that it is dedicated to me. I am going to be reading this again so i might be leaving another commenting higlighting some of my interpretations.

I enjoyed it TOOO MUCH! and the ending is so satisfying yet I can help but wonder what would happen if this was a little longer. I have no words to even begin describing what a wonderful writer you are, and I am proud to be your baby sister <3.

And you wrote it for me your Belli baby

Love

Belli

Edited by Carabelli5 - 12 years ago

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

That really was an amazing OS! I adored it! Thanks for the PM!

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Megha. â¤

@-Megha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

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Titaliya baby.. i owe yu a Bigg Tight Huggg !) Fr writing ths wonderful OS Based on my fav. songg !)
Yur wordz perfectly matched the intensity nd condition of the situation !) Nd now, umm head-over-heels in love wid yur writings :)
*Claps Claps*
FantabulOus Workk, I mst sayy yar !)

Love Ya Babe.!

Edited by megha_arnav - 12 years ago