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winter.03

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Posted: 12 years ago

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InvisibleSmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

Now this is my kind of a story!

Reserved, Will be back!
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Khushi is a cop. Wow, i am really liking this girl. She has that stature about her, strong, witty, beautiful. A hell of a combination, right there. And you have written her so beautiful. I could feel the rush, that she feeds on. Her life as it is on standstill. And she wants to cause some damage. The little girl who lost her parents, wants to see the right to the wrong. Very interesting. I am loving this. But at the end, when khushi thought mom. Does that mean her mother is alive? I wonder what is the story here.

And Arnav is like a invincible, very brooding but wicked also. When Khushi thought he was danger, i was like bring it on. And they did 😆 Lethal combination going on here. I wonder what his story is.

Jai seems nice - but i need more. I like his friendship with Khushi, though :)

Wonderful Update. And i definitely want you to continue this. Please & Thank you.

Shiza.

Edited by InvisibleSmile - 12 years ago

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nareshSV

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow...ur back...awesome story..khushi is a cop searching for shyam and the kisss...so hot...

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Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice part.

thanks 4 d pm

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masam

@masam

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Posted: 12 years ago

So, so looking forward to it!
I just love the thrill, the chase and the adrenaline!

Khushi Sharma--a feisty creature, a woman of substance, a daughter seeking justice and revenge while at the same time is like any naive girl out there. I like Jai, but premature to tell. Same goes for Shayam.

Arnav-- The flirt! And so much hidden behind that tease.

I'm so gonna wait for next parts :)

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Veena..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice concept
Continue it and pm me

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phillips_2909

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one
can i get pm

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winter.03

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InvisibleSmile
Now this is my kind of a story!

Reserved, Will be back!
Edit -

Khushi is a cop. Wow, i am really like this girl. She has that stature about her, strong, witty, beautiful. A hell of a combination, right there. And you have written her so beautiful. I could feel the rush, that she feeds on. Her life as it is on standstill. And she wants to cause some damage. The little girl who lost her parents, wants to see the right to the wrong. Very interesting. I am loving this. But at the end, when khushi thought mom. Does that mean her mother is alive? I wonder what is the story here.

And Arnav is like a invincible, very brooding but wicked also. When Khushi thought he was danger, i was like bring it on. And they did 😆 Lethal combination going on here. I wonder what his story is.

Jai seems nice - but i need more. I like his friendship with Khushi, though :)

Wonderful Update. And i definitely want you to continue this. Please & Thank you.

Shiza.

I still haven't decided if i should continue this. But this comment from you, totally made this writing worth it. Thank you. Thank you. And lethal was what i was going for, because it can be explosive in seconds and tranquil as the sea. There are moments, many but you have to pick them.

Edited by throughmirrors - 12 years ago