SS|It's A Dangerous Love Affair|Ch 4.Pg22

Now this is my kind of a story!

Reserved, Will be back!
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Khushi is a cop. Wow, i am really liking this girl. She has that stature about her, strong, witty, beautiful. A hell of a combination, right there. And you have written her so beautiful. I could feel the rush, that she feeds on. Her life as it is on standstill. And she wants to cause some damage. The little girl who lost her parents, wants to see the right to the wrong. Very interesting. I am loving this. But at the end, when khushi thought mom. Does that mean her mother is alive? I wonder what is the story here.

And Arnav is like a invincible, very brooding but wicked also. When Khushi thought he was danger, i was like bring it on. And they did 😆 Lethal combination going on here. I wonder what his story is.

Jai seems nice - but i need more. I like his friendship with Khushi, though :)

Wonderful Update. And i definitely want you to continue this. Please & Thank you.

Shiza.

wow...ur back...awesome story..khushi is a cop searching for shyam and the kisss...so hot...

nice part.

thanks 4 d pm

Nice concept
Continue it and pm me

nice one
can i get pm

Originally posted by: InvisibleSmile

Now this is my kind of a story!

Reserved, Will be back!
Edit -

Khushi is a cop. Wow, i am really like this girl. She has that stature about her, strong, witty, beautiful. A hell of a combination, right there. And you have written her so beautiful. I could feel the rush, that she feeds on. Her life as it is on standstill. And she wants to cause some damage. The little girl who lost her parents, wants to see the right to the wrong. Very interesting. I am loving this. But at the end, when khushi thought mom. Does that mean her mother is alive? I wonder what is the story here.

And Arnav is like a invincible, very brooding but wicked also. When Khushi thought he was danger, i was like bring it on. And they did 😆 Lethal combination going on here. I wonder what his story is.

Jai seems nice - but i need more. I like his friendship with Khushi, though :)

Wonderful Update. And i definitely want you to continue this. Please & Thank you.

Shiza.

I still haven't decided if i should continue this. But this comment from you, totally made this writing worth it. Thank you. Thank you. And lethal was what i was going for, because it can be explosive in seconds and tranquil as the sea. There are moments, many but you have to pick them.

^^ & you call me a writer. Please continue this. Consider this a sincere request. I am very much intrigued. You have a wondrous way with your words.😳