FF: Ishq Wala Love(LAST PART) 10.10.13 pg-136 - Page 9

Dear Rosie,

Ummh, before this sounds like a letter, Hammie hastens to add, read chapter 3, of IWL.. It is an absolute delight to read, for reasons mentioned below:

~ I have to say that I have fallen badly for this outrageously brazen hussy Nakusha! She is totally unaffected by feminine graces and propriety of manners, and that's what makes her stand out for me in this chapter. In fact, her abject disregard of the brood king , quite amused me to the point of a laugh.. well written Rose.

~ for me the highlight of the chapter was the fantastic use of dialogues, that simply flow, true to the characters portrayed, such credibility. A, strength you obviously have, writing great dialogues.

~ you managed to show a contrast, between the devil may care Nakusha in the start of the chapter, and a rather pensive Nakusha in the mid chapter ,where she much to her dislike becomes an awkward spectator between a husband and wife discussion. However, as much as she wishes to be detached , you show in this chapter ,that Nakusha begins to develop a certain sympathy and understanding towards the couple. It shows a peculiar maturity in her despite being a woman of the night.

~ Nakusha's scenes with the couple were very well thought out and written.

~ the last scene , that states the inevitable act , yet is brought about effortlessly and most definitely leaves me as the reader with a feeling that surely there is something common between the two, two lost souls..

Thank you Rosie , for a beautiful chapter, please continue .. with much love ,as ever yours xhammie.

Originally posted by: aishwish

"Ishq wala love" ''.song personally not a favorite of mine,..I know its not one of the best of songs but it gives me a very feel good feeling (bt the lyrics is impressive..yup the lyrics are very soothing) though am aware of urs inclination towards this song''.so I couldn't figure the central idea of the story by merely the title..actually i was thinking of keeping the title 'WOH HUMSAFAR THA' it was perfect for the story but then i felt that it comes across as a sad n intense title so dropped it., it was only after reading the first chapter'''..meri dimaag ki batti jail!!!!!!!!

Rosie''''seriously I love this fact that this tome you have decided to explore something a little..little ? it is so different from my previous ffs ..thanks for appreciating it more gothic than your previous ffs''''did I told you hw much I liked your "Guns and Roses"?..yeah u told me ..to tell u 'guns n roses' is my fav OS till date..To know what happens when the man finds his true love is definitely interesting bt what will happen if a "HUSBAND" finds his true love!!!!..EXACTLY For me this is the primary aspect of the story,..I know you are only concerned to know what happens in your sweetu's love life ..to me everything else including the female lead is secondary. Seriously''''..lets see how you handle naah convincingly handle this..i am already nervous and u r making me more"True love after marriage"'''''.even karan Johar had such a hard time handling such issue..oh plzz KANK was a very poor attempt ..didn't find it convincing at all '.lol. How exactly tasha's relationship will remain in the boundary of "love" and nt transcend itself to an extra marital affair!!!! And to top of it how much intact the" divine" feature of this couple will be, when prostitution and surrogacy involved...sighing deeply ..main kahan phas gayi I know you'll keep mum..i'll have to coz the story line is still not so clear in my mind ..lol..hopefully it will clear up with time.. and even I'm not expecting an answer''''just looking forward to some mind blowing updates! Lets see how well you do dealing with such topics with the famous (read infamous innocence..excuse me i m very innocent when it comes to writing 😉 of yours)

Chapter 1:

Bas ab jaan le lo..na na ff has just started 😡''''I always win "Mishal mera hai contest"..hain? how when n where did this happen ?????????? but this doesn't mean that you'll try to kill me..now that you are making such false claims then I SHOULD do something about you 😡'aur kuch nahin toh hamare sautan..eeks suatan ..sounds so much like some ekta kapoor show 'kabhi sautan kabhi saheli' lol..lets just remain 'friends'hone lihaaz kiya hota''''..Dutta married'''first heart attack''.to supriya''.second heart attack'''.nakusha''..third attack!!!!!!!!..must say u have a very strong heart ..you survived 3 attacks in a row 👏Poor sweetu how much will he suffer😭, five years''for whole five years he has to bear sups, now to compensate it I'll have to marry him for 14 births😃😃.very funny Poor guy he always gets a drama queen''who survives after having sleeping pills?😲

Chalo ab kuch kaam ki baat''''the whole first chapter was the general narration, a very clear announcement from the writer's side that the focus is gonna be only and only the central character and central idea, nothing not concerned with them shall be entertained!..bingo I liked the way you incorporated the basic info the story in one single update! The first makes me curious how exactly dutta's temperament gonna be''exactly the way in the show or a little toned down''lets see!..hmm interesting observation Loved the mention of how with each passing day not only many were killed by him but also a part of innocent and vulnerable dutta was brutally butchered. Yeah it's hard to accept sups as her wife but hadn't we wondered quite often that what if dutta would have been married supriya..see i always give u what u desire without you asking for it ..still you get mad at me , so a part of me is also looking forward to it! But still he kissing on her forhead..look she is his wife for 5 yrs so showing some affection is natural ..but i understand your pov ..ignore it ..don't think about it ''imagining myself in naku's place is still easy bt for sups ut I've to do it for sweetu's sake'''see yeh hota hai ishq wala love😆..such a huge sacrifice you've to make 👏

Personally I don't sympathize those people who reject the adaptation option on grounds of "apna khoon apna hota hai..same here" and I loved the fact that dutta didn't gave up until it became a matter of life and death''..that's where sups is lacking as a wife, all the dedication and loyalty that dutta has invested in the relationship she's taking them for granted,..wow must say you are the only one who has understood sups so quickly n not sympathised with her ..i am impressed ..whatever the reason may be you can't force someone to sleep with anybody out of his/her desire if as a life partner you are unable to ensure your partner's basic rights then you are a soul mate just for name sake..now aish is in her full standing up for the right mood 👍🏼..go baby go ..i am with u '''she's is only looking at her pain, coz even after living with dutta she hasn't realized that for this man sex..omg how easily you've used this word which i have been trying hard to avoid 😉 is where two soul meets followed by the body! She is not meant for dutta...of course ..with u being around nobody else stands a chance 😆Dutta needs someone who could spread positivity around him and supriya is definitely not one,she not at all acknowledges the fact that his husband is not blaming her for not being fertile enough to provide a heir, rather he took the entire blame on him!!!Nakusha's appearance is quite appropriate'''..it made me remember the praises I showered at you for prescribing the attire for your leads'lol..thanks again

The best part he combing his wet hairs'''right ..somethings are hard to forget ..we are still not over with it and don't know why but when that dialogue came that "ab itne saal se koshish''''."..you know i wrote this dialogue in 3-4 ways and every time i would myself burst out laughing but couldn't you ignore this part ?It's a really good dialogue but still that made me laugh'lol!😆

A good start rose''.the kickass part was naku's entry, with AS too out of picture seems the focus will be only only these three!!!..yes you are right as always