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loved the update

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Came across your Ff.loving it...pls pm once you update...cheers

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part 3
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THANKS FOR ALL THE LOVE SHOWN ON THIS PART...

HAV REPLIED TO ALL THE COMMENTS...

THE NEXT PART IS COMING UP...DO SHOW THE SAME LOVE...

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PART 4 ON THE WAY...WAITING FOR UR RESPONSE EAGERLY...

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PART 4:

arnav and khushi sat in the car that was decorated for them...arnav thought of driving but then he sat back as he wanted to talk to khushi...mohinder pushed the car till it went out of the gate and a ritual for bidaai...all were standing out till the car is out of sight...

slowly mohinder went in followed by payal...last garima went in filled with the guilt that never gives her peace...

in the car arnav thought to start a conversation with khushi...but she was crying and he didn't like it...many time he told her that her tears affect him and he doesnt like them...but she never listened...and cried everytime and he would get frustated...

A:khushi baby y are u crying...

K:sob sob...

A:pls answer me...(getting frustrated but trying to control)

K:...

A:WILL U STOP CRYING AND TELL ME WHAT IS THE MATTER...

K: (started crying loudly...)

A:i am sorry dear...pls dont cry...u knw na that i dont like u crying...then y do u cry???if there is any problem then tell me...i will solve it...

K:woh...sob...woh...

A:yes what woh????

K:actually which promise i wanted to get from u my dad al ready got it...so what promise shall i ask u??

A: (was like "WHAT THE")khushi dont tell me that u were crying for that...

K: (cheeky smile...)else y will i cry...u never give a chance...

this statement touched his heart...he could see only love and sincerity in her eyes for him...this made him proud that this innocent doll belongs only to him and no one else...while arnav was busy in his thoughts he felt a weight on his chest...he saw khushi lying down on his chest...

A:what happened dear???

K:nothing...

A:are u feeling tired???

K:hmm...little...

A:ok...then after going home u go to sleep...

K: (shocked)what sleep???

A:yes baby...when u are tired u must have a nice sleep na...\

K:but how can i sleep today???to is our S...(immediately closed her mouth...)

A: (knew what she was saying but wanted to play along...) dear what S???

K:woh...nothing...(blushing...)

A:no...i want to know what u want...

K:arre leave it na...

in this when they reached home none knew...only when anji came and knocked the door they knew that they were home...

both were red in embaressment with what anji would be thinking...but ignoring everthing they went inside for the GHRAPRAVESH...

Anji did the puja (sisters will do the puja) and appiled tilak on both's forehead...she then said arnav to carry khushi and step inside as a part of the ritual...khushi was blushing beetroot red but arnav was waiitng for this chance...immediately he lifted her in his arms and stepped inside with his right leg...

the couple was then led to the home temple where khushi prayed for the well being of her new family and anji prayed to keep the married life intact...

THAT'S ALL FOR NOW...

PRECAP:some more rituals and their SR...

sry for the spelling mistakes...

HOPE TO HEAR FROM U...

FOR PMS PLS BUDDY "AGpm"

LOADS OF LOVE AG...

Edited by kingofme - 12 years ago