Jaane dil mein kbse hai tu...- Maaneet Ff - Page 25

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priyanshi15 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 7(a)



She banged with someone and says sorry to him and moving backward and suddenly hit with him.

She lost the balance due to sudden hit and her foot slips'

She closed the eyes due to fear of fall. Before she reaches the floor two strong arms held her by waist.

She encircled the arm around his neck and another arm rest on his cheek.

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Man: open your eyes.

She feels his voice was familiar, she slowly ' 2 open the eyes''

She look into his eyes, want feel this moment. Both lost into each other eyes'


"itne waqt ke baad , apko khudke itne karib mahsoos kiya

Na jane kitne pal bit gye'..tumhe khud se dur dekhti huye''..

In aankho ko aaj jitna sakoon mila''.

Is pal ko jeene mein

Itna to tb bhi nhi mila

Jb tumhe saalo ke baad dekha'''..

Aaj tumhari season ki khusbi jo bikhr gyi'''.in bejaan season mein''.."

listen this music for feeling the moment

https://link1.songspk.pk/song1.php?songid=9489

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KARUsrJqDsM

tumko dekh ke yoon lagta hai
koi bichhda khwab aaya hai..
barson lambi raat se guzre,
subaha ka jhonka laut aaya hai

looking at you, I feel,
as if some dream, separated from me, has come back..
as if we've passed through a years long night,
and now the morning gust has arrived back..


bahot der jaagi,
bahot door aayi,
khwab ne chhodi na meri kalai..
kab se meri saans ruki thi
mujhe saans aayi..

I kept awake for very long,
I came too far away..
but this dream didn't let me go (lit: didn't leave my wrist)
since so long was my breath stuck,
I breathed again..



"ase mt dekho geet''..

Mein tumse kuch bhi nhi kh payunga"

saans mein teri saans mili to,
mujhe saans aayi,
mujhe saans aayi..

He lightly turns the face.

"yu nazre na churaiye humse''..

Hum to khudko apki aankho mein dekhna chahte hai''"

when your breath mixed with my breath,
I was able to breathe again..

"Us pal asa laga maan ko jaise wo geet ki hr baat ko '''uski khamosiyo ko sun sakta hai'''"

He again sees in her eyes.

"geet bhut si baatein hai jo tumse khni hai'..

Meri muskilo ko aur mt bdayo''.."

"hum aapki mushkil kaise bda sakte hai'''

Wo to hum khwabo mein bhi nhi soch sakte'''"

Sorry for short update ... i also give update tomorrow...please hit like button and do comment...please...

i don't get time this week...but now u give update regularly...


precap same as teaser.....

Boy: dono ek dujhe mein kaise khoye huye hai

Girl: how romantic?

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daadi: ye maan kha rh gye

rano: aur ye geet bhi

annie: mein dekhke aati hu

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annie: yha itni bheed kyun lagi hai

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annie: wow what a pose?

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daadi: aa gye aap dono

annie: daadi wo bhi ek sath


part 7 (b) on page 61

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 12 years ago
shri12 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome ek dusre se ankhon mein khogaye hain
-Gemini- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Read all the parts now ,loving it.
Thanks for the pm
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what an encounter of maneet na
but will it remain so and for how long
looking forward to the actual meet as well
what i mean is their meet with them saying something as well
cheers for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
original posted by
hermoso
awesome going


shri12
Awesome ek dusre se ankhon mein khogaye hain

geetsrir.maan
lovely dear...👏

tamanna1391
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-padma-
Read all the parts now ,loving it.
Thanks for the pm


chavvi16
wow what an encounter of maneet na
but will it remain so and for how long
looking forward to the actual meet as well
what i mean is their meet with them saying something as well
cheers for pm


thanks all of you...
priyanshi15 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 7(b)


He again sees in her eyes.

"geet bhut si baatein hai jo tumse khni hai'..

Meri muskilo ko aur mt bdayo''.."

"hum aapki mushkil kaise bda sakte hai'''

Wo to hum khwabo mein bhi nhi soch sakte'''"

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Daadi :- ye maan na jane kha rh gye

Rano: aur ye geet bhi

Daadi: hum yha unhe shopping krane laye the

Yha khud shopping krne

Annie: khud ke liye shopping krne

Daadi: annie ye koi mjak ka waqt nhi hai

Abhi bhut se kaam pde hai

Aur maan hai ki unhe office ke kaam ke alawa aur kuch dikhta hi nhi hai

Annie: daadi, bhai jaroor phone pe busy honge''.

Koi na koi project discuss kr rhe honge

Rano: pr ye geet kha rh gyi

Annie: mein dekhke aati hu

Both ladies nodded.

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Without breaking eye contact, he helps her for standing straight. His both hand circled around his waist and her one arm circled around his neck and second rest on his cheek'.

Girl 1: wow, kitne pyare lag rhe hai'..

Girl 2:- shi kha tumne

Kha milte hai aajkal'''jo kissi ki aankhen pd ske

Girl 1:- how romantic?

Boy:- isme kya romantic hai

Ladki ka feet slip ho gya, aur ladke ne smbhal liya toh'

Girl 2 :- tum nhi smjhonge

Boy: bs tum ladkiyo ko yhi khehna aata hai

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Annie : yha log(people) ase kyun khde hai

Chlo check krti hu

Excuse me''.

Mujhe bhi dekhna hai

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Madhu : tumhe asa kaise kh sakte ho

Asa kuch nhi hai

Rishu: oh really

So, why you not look into my eyes?

Nazre kyun chura rhi ho

Madhu: asa kuch nhi hai

Rishu: madhu , I know you say always lie to me and own self.

Why dammed?

Why?

Madhu: mera dil nhi tha shopping pe jane ka

Rishu: hmm

Madhu: aur kuch nhi hai

Jaisa tu soch rha hai

Rishu: mein kya soch rha hu madhu

Zara mujhe bi bta'.

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Annie: mujhe nhi pta tha''mere bhai bhabhi ke khyalo mein sbke samne bhi kho sakte hai

Interesting''..is yaadgaar lamhe ki ek photo to banti hai

She clicks the photo from the mobile.

Ab inhe zara dreamland se bahar nikala jaye

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Geet : maan apki aankho mein ye udaasi kyun hai

Maan:

Geet: aap kuch khte kyun nhi

Maan: khehna to bhut kuch hai''bs khi lafz km na pd jaye'

Geet: aapko kbse kuch khne mein takleef hone lagi''.

Maan: jbse aankho ko galat pdna shuru kr diya'..

Geet: kya?

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She (Annie) came near to his ear and shout'''

For sudden scream, both came out from own thoughts.

Both look all round, feel embarrassed'

Annie: kya huya bhai

Maan(angry tone) : Annie

Annie: bhai aap mujhe kyun gusse se dekh rhe hai

Maine kya kiya

She make baby face.

She look towards geet and said dekho na bhabhi "jb aapko dekh rhe the ''.tb kaise khoye huye the'..

Aur ab mainekuch kaha toh''gusse se dekh rhe hai"

She looks down feels shy.

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Daadi : annie ko beja , wo bhi nhi aayi abhi tk

Rano: maaji aa jayenge bache

Idher pass mein hi khi gye honge

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Rishu: mein kya soch rha hu madhu

Zara mujhe bi bta'.

She not gives any answer'..

Rishu: kya huya

Koi jwab nhi hai

Madhu :mein

Rishu: mein

Aage kho na

Mein sun rha hu madhu


part 8 on page 69

Edited by maanetpriyanka - 12 years ago
chavvi16 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
this sure is getting even more complicated
and yet maneet do get married how ever not forver
wow that sure was something and yet nothing
dude say what ever you have to before its too late
cheers for pm
will look forward to more

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi
the up is good
geet and mann wow the song and its apt
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice updates
both the parts were awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
So maaneet khoye khoye. Loved it.

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