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Hi friends,
Here's Aarthi's ( @boreddamsel ) concept,
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As you all know that 4 Lions have asked for a story to continue IPKKND. Aarthi, Avni and I have come up with this following story.
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If you can't see it, it's on Page 3. Scroll down to find comment by Tia.
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The concept:
On Karwa Chauth night, Khushi finds out that Sheetal keeps fast for Aarav's father. Sheetal does a huge drama of not wanting to reveal his father. But later bursts out in fake tears and tells Khushi that that it is Arnav.
Hearing this, Khushi goes in shock and goes straight to Arnav and tells him what Sheetal told her and Arnav as usual shouts at Khushi for not trusting him.
Khushi finally has enough and bursts in anger: I'm not trusting? I'm not trusting when I believed in your love when you saw me getting insulted but still didn't tell anyone why I had to marry you? I'm not trusting when I waited for you at the alter even when everyone told me that you won't come and until everyone left? I'm not trusting when I am still here standing in front of you, even after you didn't even looked at me all day on family outing let alone thank me for my efforts for arranging it because you were too busy with someone who doesn't even meant anything to you?
You have some gall to say that, Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada. When have you ever believed me? Did you believe me when you forced me in a farce of a marriage? Did you believe me when I sat in your office all day to tell you the truth or ran behind your car while you drove away? Where was your trust when you blamed me for driving Anjaliji to suicide?
Arnav: But Khushi I told you that Aarav is not my son. Why would you believe anyone over me?
Khushi: You believed Shaymji over me on the basis of one hug you saw. Didn't you? On the other hand, Aarav is like your miniature clone. The entire family keeps pointing out to me that in front of you. Yet, you react as if it's normal to have an ex-girlfriend with a son who is exactly like you in everything.
Either he is your son or someone taught him to be exactly like you. Either way, you should have realized how it would look like to me as your wife. But you ignored my concerns and actually made me feel stupid and gauche for thinking the obvious conclusion.
Is that your understanding? You accused me that I don't understand you. But it's you who doesn't understand me.
But you know what? I have had enough of watching you playing best buddies with Sheetal. I am leaving.
Arnav shouts: Fine. Then go. Who's stopping you?
Khushi leaves with tears in her eyes from RM.
The moment Khushi leaves, Arnav gets a flashback of everything and realizes his mistake and runs after Khushi.
He reaches living room where his family was. They ask, "What's wrong?"
He doesn't answer and runs to the door.
Sheetal heard everything Khushi and Arnav said to each other. She stops Arnav and says, "I'm sorry Arnav. It seems your wife doesn't understand you. I don't blame her. She is not from our world. See how she went behind your back and did DNA test? She doesn't believe you at all."
Arnav freezes for a minute, "Hold on a minute. How did you know that she doesn't understand me and she did DNA test? Were you listening to our conversation?"
Sheetal stammers, "No no... I mean it's obvious isn't it?"
ASR gets the severity of the situation then, "No it's not obvious. It means that you were the one pulling the strings to make Khushi think in those lines and I unknowingly helped you against my wife. I can't believe how stupid I was. I'm going after Khushi, but before I come back, I want you get out of this house."
Sheetal, "But Arnav, where will I go? And Aarav? He is your son."
The family gasps, "What?"
Arnav looks at her in disgust, "Aarav can't be my son. So get lost before I finish you completely."
He leaves.
Here's Avni's ( @highonshows ) concept,
Sheetal on the other hand tries to convince the angry family that Aarav is Arnav's son.
Nani (angry), "I don't believe a word you say. If you were truthful, you'd have told us that you had relationship with Chotey. But you said that you were only friends. If we had known how much pain we were giving Khushi for comparing Aarav with Arnav, we'd have never let you stay here."
Anjali looks at Nani, "But Nani, what if Aarav is Chotey's son?"
A new voice booms, "Aarav is my son."
Everyone turns to see a handsome army man standing near the door.
Mr.ABC (Put your preferred name here): Aarav is my son. Sheetal is not even his mother. She is his aunt. Her sister and I were dating. I was a doctor in Kargill war and were injured there. When I got well, I came back to find out that Sneha (or whoever is Sheetal's sister) had died giving birth to my son. I searched everywhere for him when I eventually came across his birth certificate where Sheetal has put her name as the mother and named my son ASR."
Sheetal screams, "He is lying. Aarav is ASR and my son."
Mr. ABC, "I'm willing to do a DNA test for confirmation."
Sheetal turns to Anjali, "Anjaliji, you know right how like ASR he is? He even has diabetes like him."
Anjali turns to Mr.ABC, "He is just like my brother. How can he be your son? He even has diabetes like him."
Mr. ABC raises his brow, "I have diabetes too and since he never met me, I don't expect him to be like me. But how can you expect a child who never met your brother to be like him unless he was brought up that way?"
Anjali and Mr. ABC goes into an angry battle (later they can form romantic relationship over Aarav)
Mr. ABC finally establishes how Aarav was his son and Sheetal was a fraud. Aarav hears that and is happy to meet his father finally.
Here's Tia's ( Tia.O ) concept,
Arnav reaches Buaji's house and rings the bell. Buaji opens the door. Arnav asks for Khushi.
Buaji was surprised and says, "She didn't come here. Today is Karva Chauth and she must be keeping fast for you. Why would she come here today?"
Arnav feels very low thinking that Khushi kept fast for him while he shouted at her.
He keeps looking for her.
Suddenly he sees the temple where Khushi always goes.
He sees Khushi climbing the steps of the temple.
He runs to her when he sees her swaying and about to fall. But he runs and holds her before she falls. He picks her up and feeds her water breaking her fast. (Teej style)
But she is still unconscious. So he lifts her up and takes her to hospital.
The doctor tells him that due to stress and fasting, her sugar level has dropped and they need to do an intravenous infusion. So they admit her in the hospital.
Tensed Arnav blames himself for everything. So he calls his and her family there. Both Raizada and Gupta family arrives. Arnav was worried and sad for Khushi.
Gupta family wonder why she suddenly left her house? Arnav reveals that it's his fault and tells them about everything from contract marriage to Khushi's pain to the torture to their marriage to Sheetal's track.
Everyone feels sad thinking how they all treated Khushi badly. Buaji gets angry and turns her face away as this is not the time to accuse/argue.
The doctor comes out and tells that she needs to stay there overnight but she will be discharged the next day.
Arnav sits in the hospital all night.
Next day, Arnav goes to Khushi's room to get her home. But she is not in hospital. He finds out that she has gone to Gupta House with Buaji.
When Arnav goes to Gupta House, Khushi refuses to come back home.
Arnav can then woo her including Raizada family who also needs to ask forgiveness for treating her badly.
(If this track is accepted, I can write the wooing strategies after that, ending it with a honeymoon/Anjali & Aarav's father's romance/La and NK's romance track/all past revelation track)
We have enough ideas to run this show for another two years. But this track is only for Iss Pyaar ko Kya Naam Doon and we will write them after we know that it's actually being used.
Otherwise, thanks for reading our ideas.
UPDATE: We have total 125 Likes/Agree/Insightful in Forum32 along with 326 Likes here. So in total this track got, 451 thumbs up with only one disagree. Awesome work, guys. But 4Lions haven't responded to anything yet.
The only response they have shown is to someone called "Ann" and replied, "Ok, we will extend it then." Don't know what they mean. The comment they have replied this to, just has 5 likes.
I have asked them what they were talking about. Will keep you posted on the development.
Thanks to you all for your support.
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