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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fatprincess

Just caught up on part 5,6, and 7 hence this comment/blabbering is going to be a bit long so bear with me will u ? 😳

From Manorama's rant, I have a feeling sth is scandalous abt KKG's past, most probably her parents which gives me jitters 😕 ... . . But moving on to KKG and ASR's midnight convo : Khushi's "capable-of-building-whole-cities-in-the-air, brain & confusing the person listening to it thoroughly & completely " reminded me a little of some Austen protagonists u know with their long verbose rants 😆, but the twist in conversation u introduced with what comes after "what the .." was well 🤔 ...i had just about the same reaction as khushi 😆.
Okay before i say anything farther abt the story i wud like to let u know what an amazing fashion sense u've got ! Seriously the outfits u pick for khushi are so simple and sophisticated yet so pretty, feminine, flirty, and fresh and just . . . . perfect 😉 . Loved how ASR felt KKG's presence and had a hard time ignoring her and then same was the case with khushi , this is so typical Arshi from the golden old epis .
Part 7 was so amazing it messed up my breathing rate 😆. This reminded me so much of Arshi from the old intense days . Esp when Asr caresses khushi unknowingly which is such an ASR thing to and then their reaction. This story is becoming more and more intense with each update and i am loving every bit of it. N woot woot NK is here and Khushi is fond him 😉, I am sooo looking forward to the jealous ASR 😈 which is the most hottest thing in the entire IPKKND . Precap of this part got a huge swarm of butterflies in my stomach n they dont seem to stop so please update soon and put an end to my misery will yah 😵.



Thank you! The following update is jointly dedicated to you & my dear buddy Sami!!

A big thank you to you..If I hadn't had your comment waiting for me in the morning today, I swear, even Sami wouldn't have been able to wiggle an update out of me any time soon... Thanks!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly. Farah a big hug to you for updating

Secondly, as uaual I loved your update

Arnav was so f'ing jealous

he actually brooded the whole time😆

For a man who has been with so many girls he seems a pretty jealous sort😉

OMG loved how he could not stop watching her while sulking

Loved how he pulled her between his legs

For the first time, a payash track that has me totally hooked

Arnav felt a pang when he realized akash probably realized after payal got engaged... he doesn't want princess Gupta to get engaged does he??

Loved how khushi gave it back to him... loved her retorts

Loved Arnav forgetting abt rohan-Di everytime she is near him

Actually I loved all of it 😃

This is my fav ff [it's a compliment as I do read a lot of ffs😉]

hope you get out of your sulking mood and start writing

chal likne beth girl😆


Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry for late editing i got busy. Update was superb... Oh Akash loooves payal poor guy she has been taken TAKEN? wht am i saying seriously m i talking abt a girl or a thing ... Anyways oho just talking abt guptas made out hotwa think abt the youngest gupta... Oh what a dress... Arnav is so J. Oh the pulling n placing her in btw his legs so scandalous... He hurted her poor girl has to suffer coz of a jealous lover who himself couldnt understand it
Edited by Farwa_Ibrahim - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update!!!

so we do have payash here...want to know what their story...

will be happy to see the three gupta sibling with the three raizadas
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Posted: 12 years ago
farah superb update honey !!!!

i know hw u feel...even i feel exactly the same !!!!

i just want an end to this ongoin track...its killin me !!! i feel like throwin somethin at the TV when i see shitall and the way khushi acts like a clown !!!!

i just want an end to all this !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyy awesome update!!!! loved it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
So akash has some feeling for payal and loved the jealous arnav..hahaha.. but in his jealousy and anger he says hurtful thinks to kushi...

loved the update and looking forward to the next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWESOME AND FABULOUS UPDATE!! LOVED IT👏
Edited by diyawaqas - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved da jealous arnav...ArHi fights r da best 2 read...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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