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Posted: 12 years ago
Very cute one. Loved this sweet maaneet OS.
Plz do give us epilogue
Edited by dreamy4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome os
waiting for epilogue
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Chachuuu dekho na Choti maa is forcing me to have food….

Maan who had just come from the office saw Geet running behind little Pari (daughter of Meera and Dev who is 4 years old)…….. and seeing Maan…. Pari came running to Maan to complain about her Choti Maa…….. But for Pari her Choti Maa was her favorite…… Pari would only listen to her Choti Maa and no one else……..

Maan: Kya hua meri Pari ko……

Pari: Choti Maa is forcing me to have food… I don't want…….

Maan was about to say something but before that Geet only said: Maan you are not going to support her at all…… So you better stay away from us……

Pari looked very innocently at Maan for help…… Maan: Pari have little……

Pari nodded her head in no…..

Maan: Ok have it after sometime…. Theek hai…..

Pari became very happy and showed her tongue to her Choti Mergers and acquisitions and ran away and Geet cribbed saying that you should have not allow her to go….

Maan came and hold her from the waist and huskily said: Now that I am here you can feed me……

Geet: Maan….. leave me…..koi ajayega…..

Maan: Koi nahi ayega... one kiss otherwise I will not leave you...

Geet: Maan kuch to sharam kijiye….. It is been 5 years of our marriage and you behave like we are newly wed……

Maan brings her more closer: But you have change….

Geet: Means……

Maan: When we were friends tum to kabhi nahi sharmati thi and now after 5 years of marriage also tum to aise sharmati ho jaise we just got married yesterday and I am taking you for our first night…..

Geet got shy and hug him tightly……..

While they both were lost in each other they heard a coughing sound and they came back from there la la land………

Meera: Earlier the romance use to happen only in bedroom now in hall also…..

Geet pushed Maan as he was still holding her….

Dev: Kya Meera love birds ko disturb kar rahi ho……

Geet was about to run as they were teasing but Maan carried her in his arms and started walking saying: Don't disturb us……..

Geet: Maan what are you doing???

Maan: What?? Aare I need help to get fresh to whom should I say my wife only right…….

Meera: Don't worry no one will disturb you both but ha Maan don't trouble her more as I am serving dinner desert you can have later……

Geet got more shy and hide herself in the crook of Maan's neck……..

Maan took Geet directly to the washroom and they freshen each other with lot of passion……

Maan: Geet be ready at night…. I am not going to leave you for sure………. You are looking so fresh and yummy……..

Geet blurted out saying: When have I said no………

Maan hugged her from behind and planted a wet kisses on her shoulder and said: Why don't we directly have desert……

Geet hit him on his arm: Maan…… Chalo everyone will be waiting for us……

Maan and Geet went down for dinner and saw Dev and Meera were waiting for them….. Geet and Maan's parents had gone to do thirth Yatra…… and little Pari was troubling her mom for food….. Seeing Geet coming Pari went near her and started complaining that mom is forcing her to have dinner and also to tell her that she just had food……

Geet: When did you have food….. You did not have anything….. Chalo I will tell you a story then will you have food……..

Pari got very excited and sat beside Geet and listened to the story and had her dinner…… Geet was feeding Pari and Maan was feeding Geet….

All were having great time while having food…… Dev and Meera were happy to see both of them happy….. But somewhere Meera had noticed some pain in Geet's eyes but decided to ask her later……..

It was night time and they all decided to retire to their bed….. Pari insisted that she will sleep with her Choti Maa and Chachu……..

Meera: Pari you need to sleep in your room….

Pari: No I will sleep with Choti Maa………

Geet: Bhabhi let be na…. she will sleep with us hai na Maan…….

Maan: Yes Bhabhi….. Pari will sleep with us………

Meera: But…..

Maan: Bhabhi what...

Meera: ok Now go and Good Night……..

All three wishes Meera Good Night and goes to their room……..

In Room

Maan and Pari were playing game when Geet came after changing her clothes……

Geet: Pari chalo change your clothes and let us all sleep…..

Maan: Ha ha chalo…….. It is already very late…….

Pari: Thodi der baad soyege….

Geet: No….. now…..

Pari looked at Maan but this time Maan did not support her and she had to go to sleep……..

As soon as Pari went to sleep Maan came beside Geet and hugged her from behind and whispered: So you made Pari sleep early……… So now and bite it at her ears……..

Geet: Maann…… Please Pari utt jayegi………..

Maan: Nahi…… She will not and waise bhi I have to take revenge……..

Maan came on top of Geet and started kissing on her lips….. The simple kiss turned into a passionate one…… Geet was also turning on……. Maan was just about to move towards her neck they heard a voice and Maan and Geet saw Pari sitting on the bed and rubbing her eyes…….

Geet looked at Maan and Maan went and hugged Pari

Maan: Kya hua mere bacchi ko…..

Pari: Aap ko bhi neeni nahi arahi thi isiliye aap Choti Maa ke upar soye hue the……

Maan looked at Geet and smirked at her and said: ha mujhe need nahi arahi thi…….

Pari: Even I want to sleep with Choti Maa… I also want to sleep with both of you………

Pari came and slept in between both of them and put her one hand on Maan and other on Geet and both of them hugged her and Maan kept on caressing Geet's hand…………

After they felt that Pari has gone to deep sleep…… Geet came on Maan side and the night turn into a passionate one………

They all were happy with each other…….. One day they all had to go to a party….

Meera and Dev were with their friends and Pari was with Geet…… and Maan had not come yet as he was busy in office…….

Geet received a call from Maan and started talking to him……..

Pari was running from here to there and fall down… Pari started crying loudly….. Hearing her cry everyone came running towards her……

Meera came and hug her and was making her to stop her from crying……..

Geet was came and was about to touch Pari when one of her friend started saying…….

One friend: This has happen because of Geet only Meera…… Just because she does not have her own children…… she does not know how to take care of child……..

Second friend: Aur nahi to kya…… she was busy on phone and Pari ka dhayan hi nahi diya…….

Geet was not able to see Pari crying and upon that people around were saying such thing to her……….

Geet (crying): Bhabhi I am sorry……. Mai uska dhyan nahi rakh payi… I am sorry……..I am sorry……..

Geet went running away from there…..

One friend: See how she went away……… Just because she cannot be a mother how can she take care of some other's child…….

Meera: Enough all of you….. Geet se jyada dhyan Pari ka aur koi nahi rakh sakta……. Geet Pari ki Maa hai……… I will not hear anything against Geet samje tum log…..

Dev took Pari in his hand and they all left from there to go home……. Maan had heard some part of it so he just called Dev and he told him that Geet left from there……..

Dev, Meera and Maan all three reached home at same time……. Maan rushed to their room and saw Geet lying on the bed and crying…..

Maan went near her and put his hand on her shoulder: Geet…….

Geet saw Maan and hugged him tightly and said with sobs in between: Maan maine Pari ko nahi ghiraya……. For me she is my own daughter……..

Maan hugged her and said: Geet……… I know that……

Geet (crying): Maan why can't I become mother…… You also cannot become father because of me…….. I am sorry Maan….. I am sorry………

Maan hugged her tightly: No Geet never ever say that….. You know that na I don't want anything except your love…. And till the time we are together I don't want anything…….. Geet…… we can adopt a child hai na………

Why is Pari not your daughter Maan bolo Geet: Meera said……

Dev: Ha Maan…. Meera is right is Pari not your daughter and how can you think Geet that we will all here to what they were saying…….

Pari was looking at her Choti Maa crying very badly she went and hug her…….

Pari: Please Choti Maa don't cry…… I will not do anything again……

Geet hugged Pari and started kissing her on her face…….

Meera went near Geet: Geet never ever say that again that you can never be a mother……… Pari ka dhyan jitna tum rakhti ho utna to koi bhi nahi rakh sakta……….. and Pari bhi to humesha tumhare pass rehti hai………..

Geet put Pari down and hugged Meera and just nodded her in yes……

Meera: Geet look at Maan….. Tumhe dekhkar Maan ki kya halat ho gayi hai….. Go and talk to him…….. and turn towards Pari and Dev and says: Pari beta today you will sleep with mumma and papa your Choti Maa needs rest na……

Pari: Ha and turns towards Maan and says Chachu today also sleep hugging Choti Maa…… and give her kissi also……… like that day…….

Maan: Chup badmash………

Dev: Kya Maan….. Bachi ke samne bhi…….

Maan: Who Bhai……

Dev: Now go and take care of Geet……. Chalo Pari …. Meera let us go and have ice cream……. Choti Maa ko bhi nahi……….

As soon as they go out Maan closes the door and goes towards his cupboard without even looking at Geet….. Geet went towards Maan……..

Geet: Maan…….

Maan did not answer her……….

Geet: I am sorry Maan……

Maan: You know very well Geet I cant see you like this and how can you even think that you are not able to give me happiness just because we cannot become parents…….

Geet: I promise I will not say that again…..

Maan: I will only except sorry if you will accept the punishment which I give you…..

Geet very innocently nodded her head with realizing what is store for her…. Maan looked at her with desire in his eyes and Geet understood his intension……. Maan hugged her in his embrace and then the night turned into a most passionate night……….

The Unconditional Love for each other increased day by day and made their life more beautiful………..










This is the end of the story with an Epilogue... Please press like and do comment... Will be waiting for your response
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Posted: 12 years ago
Me furstvyipppeee
loved it
awsone epiloguw
Geet can never become mother opppsss
sooo sad bt pari deir littleangel
Edited by uteem - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome,very realistic epilogue yar,loved it a lot.
Edited by sona-rai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
tat was nice...
the way maan, dev and meera understood her was just superb
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet can never becum a mom..hw sad..
But maan supported her b/c of his unconditional love..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely epilogue. Very realistic end
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it...
awesome but emotional one...
poor geet... pari is so cute...
but it is a sad one... any ways part is there na...
beautifully written...

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