OS: Writing 'Pillow Talk'

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This OS is special for various reasons:

1. Obviously me 😉
2. It talks about India Forums where we spend countless hours. 😊
3. It talks about all the Fan Fictions we get so involved into and many times enjoy more than the serial. 😊
4. K did you do a Big Boss at my house? 😲 Choti and I make each other proof-read all our work. Be it work or travelling we have to do it for each other. The boons of living in the 21st Century. We eat each others' brains to ensure if the work is good enough to be posted. 😛
5. Khushi wrote gutter! That's my girl. Unlike me 😔
6. Payal actually swooned knowing what action Khushi is getting and she is missing. Poor girl. She married the wrong Raizada. 😃
7. Arnav and Khushi are ever ready to pounce on each other at all time ☺️
7. Aakash snores and makes more noise than when making out. 😆

Point to Ponder:

Difference between Khushi and Payal: Payal blushing after all this time of being married to Aakash by reading hot stuff vs. Khushi talking shamelessly of what all they do in the bedroom and writing about it too.

Difference between Arnav and Aakash: "HP coffee" vs. "Hariprakash Ji chai". Need I say more?

Difference between ArHi and PayAsh: "laad_governor_ki_jalebi" vs. "akash_se_nerash_payal". I really need not say more.

Questions nagging my innocent brain:

1. What exactly were "those particular parts" that for Payal could only be "imagination" (until she was corrected) and for Khushi "common things that happen between a couple"??? K batao na...
2. What exactly did Arnav bitwa teach Khushi bitya later??? K batao na...
3. What exactly does Payal want Aakash to read on India Forums? K batao na...
4. What exactly were those sounds from Khushi's room that Payal tried to block? K batao na...

After writing this mini-thesis all I will say is I LOVED IT! 😊

Thank you. Thank you. Thank you 🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lmao!

-OMG let me take a whole minute to laugh!-

This was so hilarious!!
Khushi on IF! Well isn't IF such an obsession?! 😉
laad governor ki jalebi 🤣
akash se nerash payal 🤣🤣🤣

Could it get any better? I doubt!
It was amazing! I had a gala time reading it! :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Saiyu dragged us by our ears to read this OS which is dedicated to her

I've probably never read any of your work before but I must say Kalyani you write exceptionally well👏

From now on I plan to read everything written by you😃

I loved the OS

This is my ghar ki kahani😆

I can so relate to Khushi

It was hilarious... 👍🏼

wish you'd continue by giving us the OS that sanka devi wrote as Laad_Governor_ki_Jalebi😉

ha ha Payal's id name cracked me up

great job dear🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣






Edited by SamiyaIPKKND - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ha Ha 🤣

If not for Saiyu I'd have probably missed this OS !
I don't go into the main forum nowadays, see?

Loved their usernames...probably the longest...I don even know if such long names are allowed..But those usernames were so funny ! Especially Payals :D 😆

And Khushi is obsessed with IF and her ipad just like most of us are :D

Arnav and Khushi actually do so many things that Khushi writes gutter OS's and FFs based on the experience...😆
And the scene across the room...🤣

Awesome OS :)


P.S : I'm sorry for res'ing in the first page and updating my comment so late !!


Edited by asrcraze - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Haha lool This cracked me up!🤣
Edited by ayeshabfd1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hahaha.. You nailed it.. I couldn't stop laughing. Khushi on IF, her nick was fab! Hahaha.. Still can't stop laughing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love the arshi banter
too good kalyani
ur OS keep our appetite while u update the FFs
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Brilliantly written OS with adequate tinge of humour...Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hahahaha that was some cute pillow talk 😉
Edited by Kishmish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kya baat...Akash se nerash..I won't be surprised if payalji and Akash baby sex life is rocking... After all they are in their sweet world don't meddle in others affairs..have no clue what's happening around them obviously busy in bedroom..

Too cute but still waiting for pursuit and ROS

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