Rk n his laila split the news os

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rk sat watching the news he n madhu were the talk of the town, how they had split up, rk had refused to press charges against malik, madhu was constantly harrassed by reporters but she kept quiet never spoke. Rk recorded the scene where madhu is leaving with her mother to the mandir he continuously watched it, it had been 3 days since he last spoke or touched her he missed her so much, he smiled when he remember when she fed him n pretended to be mr india, then madhu speaking to him about changing his clothes he remembers how he told her no one uses that tone with him n she answers him back, he missed her so. Bittu ji comes in he sees "chief bring bhabhi ji back home" Rk looks at him.
Madhu barely spoke not even to her mother she was just quiet all she thought about was rk, many times she wanted to call but she did not, her ego was just a big as rks she missed him so much but would never admit it, padmini knew she never spoke to trishna or malik, Trishna just taunted madhu n Malik she looked at him with disgust this man whom she had been living with never had a relationship could hurt her daughter like this, he did not believe her about madhu n rk so he tries to kill the same man who cured him yes rk had done wrong with malik but what he had done was equally wrong.
Madhu n padmini were shown in the news at Ganpathi bappa madhir rk watched it was the only way he was going to meet madhu, he tells bittuji to tell his mother that he wants her to go to mandir with him, she was only too delighted to, when they get their madhu had gone in to do her prayers only a few reporters were there when rk got out of the car all the reporters went mad everyone in the mandir started to whisper rk is here people doing pooja stopped, except madhu n padmini who continued, Rk comes n stands next to madhu ignoring all he looks at his wife she was looking beautiful as ever, fame did not change her, she was wearing her clothes before she got married to him the only thing she wore of his was his manglesutra. Both mothers on one side madhu n rk both doing pooja madhu never looked at rk once, once madhu finished she looked at her mother who was also finished n she saw radhaji madhu went to touch her mil feet, Radhji says no betis dont touch feet, madhu hugs her "ma how are you?" Radhajis tears start to fall " i am missing you my beti come back" Madhu has tears she does not reply she looks at padmini "ma shall we go?" padmini looks at her "beta rk is behind you" madhu does not look " ma lets go" she starts to walk "madhu" thats all rk says.

well thats all i am leaving you all to think what kinda of ending you would want i know what i want this is the complete os no part 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice!
I need to know what happens next...my imagination isn't working right now. šŸ˜’
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrittB

Nice!

I need to know what happens next...my imagination isn't working right now. šŸ˜’



option one

madhu stops rk tells her how he is feeling without her n they hug in front of all

option two

madhu continues to walk as she is very hurt by rk how could he let her go like that

option three

madhu continues to walk leaving rk shocked, she does it rk style he comes home broken hearted n does want to talk to anyone then goes upstairs n sees madhu cleaning their bedroom, she looks at him n smiles " looks like a animal has been staying here not a human " he smiles " i am a animal a lion after my lioness heart "😈


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suk19



option one

madhu stops rk tells her how he is feeling without her n they hug in front of all

option two

madhu continues to walk as she is very hurt by rk how could he let her go like that

option three

madhu continues to walk leaving rk shocked, she does it rk style he comes home broken hearted n does want to talk to anyone then goes upstairs n sees madhu cleaning their bedroom, she looks at him n smiles " looks like a animal has been staying here not a human " he smiles " i am a animal a lion after my lioness heart "😈



OPTION 3 PLEASE! šŸ‘šŸ˜³šŸ‘šŸ¼
Love that!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice writing wow! RK went to mandir to meet Madhu & that too with his mom, that really imaginative bt plz can u write part 2 , i want to know what will happen next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A v nice os.no part 2.nd u ended it at a cliffhanger.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS
Combo of 2 & 3 šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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option one

madhu stops rk tells her how he is feeling without her n they hug in front of all

option two

madhu continues to walk as she is very hurt by rk how could he let her go like that

option three

madhu continues to walk leaving rk shocked, she does it rk style he comes home broken hearted n does want to talk to anyone then goes upstairs n sees madhu cleaning their bedroom, she looks at him n smiles " looks like a animal has been staying here not a human " he smiles " i am a animal a lion after my lioness heart "😈



my last favourite one will be rk madhu shtyle

Rk comes to chawl n says not even a apology to madhu forget the 40 lac now i will give you punishment he grabs her hand madhu smiles n he takes her back to rm punishment rk style šŸ˜†šŸ˜³
Edited by suk19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: suk19

option one

madhu stops rk tells her how he is feeling without her n they hug in front of all

option two

madhu continues to walk as she is very hurt by rk how could he let her go like that

option three

madhu continues to walk leaving rk shocked, she does it rk style he comes home broken hearted n does want to talk to anyone then goes upstairs n sees madhu cleaning their bedroom, she looks at him n smiles " looks like a animal has been staying here not a human " he smiles " i am a animal a lion after my lioness heart "😈



my last favourite one will be rk madhu shtyle

Rk comes to chawl n says not even a apology to madhu forget the 40 lac now i will give you punishment he grabs her hand madhu smiles n he takes her back to rm punishment rk style šŸ˜†
😳



@bold : This one šŸ‘šŸ¼ gets my vote too !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Suk , Tujhe marne ka mann kar raha hai . Tumne aise waqt par stop kiya story jab interest level 10th floor par pohoch gaya tha šŸ˜† .

Awesome part Darling šŸ˜›

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