MAANEET SS HEAVEN IN HELL THREAD-1 - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome part...
waiitng for maan & guru to meeting...
precap in intresting
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet found maan..
guru is in danger..
may be the bullet is also 4 guru..
the hard shell msk crying..
hmmm that is called blood
geet saying funnily she will garland maan..
n we know geet maan ki hai..but how..w8ing 2 know..
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 6
nice part...
so Geet has seen Maan...
and he has come to know about his siblings too...
interesting...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago











H2 - 7


MAAN'S GH


As morning rays falls on Maan , he wakes up. Due to exhaustion, Maan slept in te gym last night.

Maan gets up and saw he was lying in te floor and he saw te time, it was 8'clock




Maan : oh shit, I slept so long, he got up , went to his room and get ready and gets into te car. He went to finish his mission

Maan got a call : were is he

Person : at ur xy construction site

Maan and Adi went to xy site. Maan enter to site in his style, there MR.Gupta was tied and blood was flowing non stop from his body. Wen he saw Maan




Gupta : Mr.Khurana, aap , so behind all tis u r te one

Maan smirks at him : so smart Mr.Gupta

Gupta : Khurana stop ur play or u have to face te consequence , u don't know to who im

Maan laughed : how come both te friends saying te same thing

Gupta : both friends ?

Maan : chopra

Gupta was so shocked : so u killed him

Maan : any doubt

Gupta : ur playing with ur death KHURANA, u know whom ur dealing with

Maan laughed hysterically : RAHUL KHANNA

Gupta was shocked

Maan : am I right Gupta

Gupta : u know him, but u don't wat kind of person he is, u want to die like ur parents did, then go ahead

Maan tightened his fist and closed his eyes.


Gupta laughed : now u scared, u know ur dad too mess with my boss Rahul, he didt leave ur dad's ashes too. Te great YASH SINGH KHURANA , was disappear from tis world , but no proof against my boss, te same thing is going to happen to his son. He will make te name khuranas to disappear from te world. u meet him soon Khurana, he is cuming to meet u. he is cuming


Maan opened his eyes , Gupta was was shocked to see Maan's eyes which pured burning volcano.




Maan laughed :wat did u say he is cuming to meet me, and he smirks, nice joke


Maan : I made him to cum here. I was planning for 20 years u listened 20 years, wen I came to know he killed my parents and separate me from my siblings. My papa YASH SINGH KHURANA very soft heart person, forgive even his enemies. But me im MAAN SINGH KHURANA, te real HELL, will burn tis whole world to get wat im want, roaring like lion which echoed te whole building.

Gupta was so scared to see him, he felt he is standing in front of angry sher who hunting for his prey.

Maan : so better don't threaten with ur silly jokes. Now sign tis , and wait for ur boss in ur hell.

Gupta : no I wont, do whatever u want, any how u will kill me after I sign, so better u do it., I will not sign

Maan : ok then as u wish, but before u die u want see ur daughter

Gupta was shocked : daughter

Maan : ah Mr. Gupta ur daughter who is staying with ur mom in ur village, u want to see her

Maan eyed Adi, then Adi on te screen, 16 year girl running in te field, some mens watching her away.

Maan : Gupta I should say ur daughter looks pretty sexy rather than ur girlfriends, whom u r changing for seasons.

Gupta : pls don't harm her, pls he started to beg

Maan : I will if u sign or else see my mens are watching her

Gupta tilt his head in defeat,

Maan : good

Adi gave te papers , Gupta signed it, Maan got from te chair to leave

Gupta : Khurana u think u win, but my boss Rahul wont leave u, u will suffer for ur death , how ur parents struggled. U will Khurana


That is te limit for Maan, he closed his eyes , took his gun, wen he opened his eyes , there lied Gupta's dead body due to continous gun shot.


Maan came out and fuming in angry, now he wants to burn tis world to calm himself , he took his alcohol bottle and drunk fully. Adi stopped him, but he glared him and sat inside te car.


Te car started to move, that time his phone started to ring, seeing his condition, Adi took te call.



Adi : wat , ok I will inform sir, Adi was so happy to hear te news tat Guru and Ani was alive, now he know tat Maan will get his family back and his happiness too.

Adi : sir tat detective agency called and said tat they mailed full details of Guru

Maan saw him, Adi nodes his head and had tears in his eyes and smiling at him.

Maan opens his mail and saw, was so shocked to see Guru who looks like him.



Then he saw his princess Ani and had tears but wipe it with out other notices it.


then he saw some girl's pic


Maan (st) : oh she is Guru's fianc



Then he go through full details , he came to know tat Guru finished his studies in through orphan school, and now working in small consent, for 40, 000 salary. Now he is staying in small apartment in xyz area with his sister and his finc.

Maan (st) : multimillionaire, working for 40,000 which he giving for his Body guards

He started to read , he came to know he is working as police informer . then some thing stircks him



Maan : Adi did u try to find them, who attack tat day

Adi : ah sir some Shankar lal, some local goon, aimed to some one, but our mens are tracing him sir

Maan : Adi Guru's life is in danger

Adi was shocked : wat , then tat mens thought u as Guru

Maan nodes his head

Adi : now wat to do

Maan : ask driver to go to tis address

Adi smiles at him , and nodes

Here , Guru's flat


Dadi : Guru we are going for shopping to buy some girls stuffs,

Guru : no Dadi im not cuming

Dadi : good better u be in home till we cums

Guru : ok Dadi , me too having some works, so I will be in home till u cums

Dadi stares at him

Guru : wat Dadi why u staring at me

Dadi : u same like Maan, he too always work, work, like machine he will works

Dadi had tears in her eyes thinking abt Maan. Guru cums and side hugs her.

Guru : Dadi don't worry we will change him and get nice girl for him like our Geet

Ani : yes Dadi, we will change my Maan bhai too and get him married to a girl like our Geet, she too hugs Dadi

Dadi hugs both of them

Geet : Guru don't think smart abt u, all tis only now, after our marriage I will house arrest u

Ani : Geet its not house arrest , room arrest

hearing tis Geet's mouth open to touch te ground



Geet : chi chi babaji naughty girl and started to chase her , and Ani runs and hides behind Guru

Guru holds Geet's hands : wat is wrong in tat , she is correct and winks at her

Geet glares at him and Guru too glares at her



Geet : beshram

Dadi : why u all teasing my bahu

Geet : thanku Dadi , and shows her tongue to Guru and Ani

Dadi : ok cum now we hav to go or it will be late

Three left Guru alone in te flat

Guru was working , his phone rings, he took te call

Guru : hello inspector

Ip : Guru I got a information, tat Shankar is planning to kill u, so better be care ful

Guru : don't worry sir , we will catch him before he harms me

Ip : I will arrange security for u

Guru : no need sir, I will manage

Ip : but Guru

Guru : its ok sir and they started to discuss abt some thing, his door bell rings

Guru opens te door , with phone in his ear.. went to door opens, he stood numb, his phone drops to te floor.



Maan was looking at him, like a five old boy, who missed his brother in a crowd and got him after long search.



Guru and Maan was staring at each other, with out a word, as they heart was bursting .


PRECAP : FAMILY TOGETHER IN GUEST HOUSE


NEXT PART :part 8


Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yippeee
me grabbed second position
awesome update
maan a true devil
he killed that man
wow..loved that line
i made ur boss come here..
truely brilliant maan...
guru,ani n geet part was funny
light hearted
teasings was gud
maan guru met..
so next part emotional atyachar hai kya????
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow this is awesome maan and guru met and guru's life is in danger
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...nice part...so finaly maan meet guru...cant wait for next part..
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Posted: 12 years ago
thankgod! they r going to meet...
Loved maan's part.. he s so involved in his revenge..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow so the twins finally meet again
guru and annie oh hello geet is one peice only there cant be anyone else like her so you cant find someone else like her for maan
so maan found out that those ppl who shot at him are after his brother
and he bringing down their parents killers
wow this reunion of the two i will love to read about
pls do continue soon pls

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Posted: 12 years ago
Maan will any cost take revenge on behalf of his but i'm scared dat Guru will have to pay d price by giving his life.

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