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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

awesome Neha

loved Geet's innocence and confession that he looks best when he smiles and laughs bringing that long lost hapiness to him
Those sweet moments in the car park makes relationship sweet and strong and I guess gave foundation of most enchanting part
loved Maan's gesture of confiding in her his thoughts and promising lifetime of hapiness...and a promise to be together always...awesome



thanks a lot di, , glad that you loved it...
yup di, you are right, these small-2 things in relationship made it more stronger...

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: nishitaa25

honey sweet maneet moment ...sabse pahle thank u mera sms ki line yaha likha tune yesha laga jada beautiful ho gaye maneet ke sweetness ke sath ...muaaah n love u lots


now hai maan naughty hota hai to kitna maja aata hai naa ...geet maine kuch kiya kya oye hoye maja aaya ...

.kuch karu kya ?? MAAN NEKI AUR PUCH PUCH


last part was really emotional ...simple n sweet ...l👍🏼🤗



thank u sweety...
hehehe,when i read ur sms, then suddenly it strike my mind and thought to use it in update...
hehehehe, sahi kaha neki aur puch puch,,,😉😆
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Posted: 12 years ago


updating di, just give me little time for color code...
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Posted: 12 years ago





First of all, , thank you so much for the likes and comments, , love you all for the support you gave me, , hugs to you all…..

Now again sorry, , the last precap has been extended to the next part, , actually I was all set with the precap in this part but when I sat to type it, , don't know kaha se my fingers started typing total different thing and the part come up like this, , the last precap and the precap of this part, , you can merge it together and the next part will have the both precap…. Ok…. Jayada nahi bolungi, , pls read the part and tell me how it come up????


Part-45



"now it's my turn" said maan, , behaving like a little kid who is happy like his mom will feed him food, , geet smiled at him and feed him , , maan again feed her, , turn by turn both are having their food…. It was best time of their till yet and they are cherishing it completely lost in each other….

Geet felt his gaze on her, , she looked up and found he was staring at her, , his intense gaze awakening some desires inside her, , she knotted her brows and asked him what happened? Why are you staring at me? He shook his head and pointed at her lip….

She doesn't understand what he is saying? She asked to him again with her eyes, , maan told her wait with his eyes and she nodded….. he moved his finger towards her lips, , her heart beats raised and she felt like submit herself in him, , she closed her eyes and the next moment his finger on her lip, , ohh it felt so soothing like he has applied ointment on her wounds, , the touch of his finger on her lips felt amazing, , but he is awakening more desires in her, ,

His finger was rubbing her lower lip, , she opened her eyes and found him staring at her, , she lowered her lashes and blushed, , his thumb caressed the side skin of her lip on her cheek and the next moment she was shocked but the blushed furiously due to his act…. He tasted his finger which was rubbing her lower lip , , she felt like he is tasting her lip with his lips, , her throat went dry with his little act but he doesn't know what effect it left on her, , the feminine hormones are changing it's motions, ,

"wo geet, , tumhare face par thoda food laga tha, so maine" maan trying to explain his act to her….

"maan, , please don't give explanation to me, , you have every right" she told some words which gave relief to him….. both finished their lunch feeding to each other , lost in each other, , they doesn't know how close they came in this one day only…. Today morning their day starts with niharofying each other then good bye kiss, , then the college fiasco, , and then the parking area teasing and now the time they spend with each other in lunch time… it was different feeling for each other….. half day changed their lives….

Maan paid the bill and both moved out….

After a week, it was Sunday, , everyone was enjoying

Their time with each other talking with each other…. All were sitting in living room, , just then reyhansh spoke,

Rey-bhai, , we are getting bore, , no fun at all….

Ash-yup bhai, I am agree this time with rey, , koi faida nahi India aane ka,,, you all are so busy, , no fun…. She made a face….

Annie-ha bhai…. You are bust in office, bhabhi busy in studies, and this little one cutie also not doing anything, , I am also having my holiday, , what to do?

"then join me" a voice interrupt their talk… all looked at the source of voice…..

Arjun, annie exclaimed in happiness and ran towards him…. She hugged at him at once while arjun looked baffeled with he sudden hug, , he was not expecting hug, yeah expecting it but from geet not from annie…. All looked at annie with their wide eyes, , geet gulped her saliva and looked at maan, , his facial expressions saying that he is not approving this….

What are you doing? Arjun whispered in her ear…. Annie come back to reality and broke the hug… she went back to her seat and arjun also took his seat beside geet…..

Arjun-geet,, actually I came here to inform you that I am going to shimla for some business work… and will stay there around 2-3 weeks…. I come here specially for informing you otherwise later you quarrel with me….. geet's mouth dropped hearing that shw will quarrel with him…

Geet-what do you mean that I'll quarrel with you? Maine tumse kab jhagda kiya? Bolo…

Arjun-achha, , you forgot the last one, , I went to chennai and god the whole week you didn't talk or met with me…. That's why this time I don't want to take any risk…

Geet-theek hai, , go away and apne sath rey, ash and annie ko bhi le jao.. bechare they will have fun also…

Annie-really bhabhi… we can go??? Asked annie…

Maan-excuse me, , I am here still…. Koi mujhse bhi puchhega?? Maan interrupt them…. Annie bit her lip and her whole excitement went in vain… geet held his arm and told him that say yes by their eye talk… first maan thought to tease them and have little fun but then gave up….

Rey-bhai please say yes na… I have never been in hill stations in India…

Ash-please bhai, say yes na

Maan-okay but

Annie-but what bhai?

Maan-yahi ki take care of each other…. Everyone smiled and beamed with happiness… after that rey,ash and annie packed their clothes and the very next day they flew away to shimla for enjoying…. They wanted to take Vedanta with them but he is so small and having school also…..

It was two week from that day, , geet had a two week holidays for the preparations of pre-exams, , and she has to complete all the assignments…. She was very busy in her assignments and she has to cope up with vedanta's studies too, , though maan was there for them but still he has his office work also, , and always get tired with the hectic schedule of his office now-a days, , he is working on a very important project and daily he has to visit construction sites and daily he had meetings about the changes they are having in their model, ,


on the other hand, , in KT, , they are having the upcoming winter collection, , he has to meet with the designer, , finalize the material, , finalize the design , , finalize the material stock, , dealing with other companies , from whom they are purchasing the material in a heavy stock, planning the strategies for endorsing their collection, , this was not so easy but this was his daily routine , ,

maan was used to all this but that time he was alone, , only annie and dadi was with him, , there was no any thought that he has to give his time to others but now there is geet & vedanta for him, , responsibility and has to take care of them, , give his time to them, , pamper them, , and now-a-days it is really impossible for him but still he is trying his best….. when he come back, only he found geet waiting for him, , he felt bad for her but what he can do, , work ate up his whole time, ,

geet understood him, , because this really happened with her brother Tej and her dad… they also used to come home late nights when there was much work in office… but she is happy with this also, , at least they can spend little time with each other….. still there is no much open relation between them but there is no much hesitation between them, , they are coping up with each other very efficiently,

On the other hand, geet is also not able to give much time to Vedanta as her & his studies taking her whole time and then she has to spend little bit time with dadi and annie also and at night , she wants to spend few minutes with maan, , Vedanta daily slept with maan and geet on their bed, , he went early in their room and slept before maan come home, ,

By this act of Vedanta, geet & maan also sleep on the same bed with each other….Vedanta is not used to awake late nights so he went to sleep till maan come home, , Vedanta wanted to go to park that day but maan has to canceled it because of his sudden meeting and he couldn't ignore that, ,

It's been two weeks that geet didn't talk with anyone of her friends, , because they went to Dehradun for spending their holidays with their parents and they can prepare there too, ,

It was a Monday , , geet has her exam today, , geet was getting ready while maan also, , Vedanta was already ready and went downstairs for breakfast, , maan was getting late because he has a final meeting today then the work load will be less and he can spend his time with his family also,, just this final meeting, ,

Maan- geet, where is my matching tie, ,I am getting late…. Geet was in bathroom wearing her clothes after bath, ,

Geet-maan, please check, , wahi kahi hoga, , geet shouted from the washroom,, maan checked it, , he wants black tie with white stripes on it matching with his shirt, ,

Maan-geet, nahi mil raha hai, , kaha rakha hai? Please aakar help karo na…. maan shouted again busy in searching tie in his wardrobe, , geet gave up and wore her clothes in such a hurry…..

Geet-coming maan…. Maan heard her voice and stopped searching and went to comb his hairs, , geet come and starts searching his tie…. She was having all fresh look on her face, , little wet curls teasing her cheeks, , top was not at it's proper place and she was wearing the shirt, , two buttons were not close because she wore her clothes in hurry, ,

Geet-maan, , aapko tie milta bhi kaha se, , you have put your laptop bag on it…. She told him showing the tie and laptop bag, , while maan smiled at his foolishness,, he move towards her and took tie from her hand and mouthed thank you to her, , she smiled at him and went to comb her hairs…..

Maan was about to wear his tie but suddenly he got the call from his one client with whom he was having meeting, , maan got lost in his call so that he forgot to wear his tie, , geet glanced at him, , she put down the comb and move towards him and took tie from his hand, , first he startled with the sudden touch because he was too lost in his call, , but then smiled at her and gave her space to access the work…

She starts tiding his tie and he was talking on phone, , by the time he finished his call and geet also finished with his tie, , she was checking his clothes whether they are perfect or not , , on the other hand maan was busy checking her, , his sight fell on her two buttons which were not closed, , maan smiled at her negligence and his finger automatic moved on her buttons, ,

She felt shivers with the touch of the tip of his cold fingers on her belly, , his heating gaze on her face while his fingers on her shirt button, , her hands automatically moved on his chest, , she was taking heavy breath while his fingers stopped on button and his whole attention was on her face, , she was looking so angelic, so pure and serene, , his fingers moved on second button and close it, , he moved his face towards her ear and whisper that made her blush, ,

Maan-geet, , thoda dhyaan, , I don't want that anyone will see my wife like this…. Maan encircled his arms around her waist while she was setting his tie, ,

Geet-really mr. khurana?

Maan-yes of course mrs. Khurana….

Geet-then you have to take care also of yourself…. Maan knotted his brows…

Maan- like mrs. Khurana? Asked maan,

Geet-like, , you have to take care of your dressing style…. Replied geet with a naughty glint in her eyes….

Maan-matlab? Geet buttoned up his waist coat…

Geet- matlab, I don't want that anyone see my husband without pant, , and giggled looking at him…. First he was little confused then he followed her gaze and realized that h didn't wear his pant till yet…. He felt embarrassed first then smiled at her, ,

Maan-wo geet, , I was little tensed that's why and… maan again was interrupted by geet…..

Geet-maan, don't give explanation… ho jata hai…. Now wear it fast….. maan wore his pant and hurriedly wore his pant and then cupped her face…

all the best for today's exam…. And saying this kissed on her forehead, , geet also get ready and both moved downstairs, ,

Geet's exam was over and she got a call from that he will pick her up as the meeting got over, , maan picked her and both had lunch together in hotel, , both wants to spend little time with each other, , it's been two weeks that they didn't have lunch or dinner together…

Jus then geet got a call from home….

"hello" geet took the call..

"hello mama" told Vedanta from the other side…

"haan baby, , kya hua?" asked geet…. Maan gestured to geet that you talk to him till then he will take the car from parking, , she nodded and maan left her there….

"mama, , please bring pastries and my new wali remote " Vedanta requested to geet, , he was asking from so many days for remote car and today he thought that he will ask to her again….

"okay bacha, , mama aapki pastries and remote car le aayegi… abhi happy na?." asked geet….

"haan, , bohot happy, , love you mama" told Vedanta, , he beamed with happiness, , today he'll get his favorite remote car….

"love you too vedu" told geet and kissed him through the phone….. they cut the call, , maan was not there so she thought that she will call him and tell him that toy shop is outside so she will buy the toys and pastries also which is near by of toy shop, , he will pick her from there…..

She called maan and told him everything , , he said he will accompany her…. She said okay to him and the next minute maan was there in car, , geet get inside the car and both zoomed out…

"geet, , we'll buy from the mall which is not far.." said maan to her… she accepted and both went there in the mall which is not is not far from there….

They get inside and selected toys for Vedanta and buy pastries and ice creams for other members, , maan paid the bill and then they are coming out from the shop, , both were so lost in their talking and laughing ,,

Precap

Abhi-2 to miley ho, abhi na karo chhutne ki baat,

Abhi-2 to pasand aaye ho, abhi-2 ruthne ki baat,

Abhi-2 to roshni aayi, abhi na karo chhupane ki baat

Abhi-2 zindagi shuru hai, abhi-2 tham jane ki baat,

Hum to hare mahiye re, munde naina neend tihare,






longgg part na?????


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Posted: 12 years ago
.me first
loved it
maneet parts awesome
romantic n naughty..
teasing each others
maan trying his best
to spend time with her...
Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
yaaay...me second awesome and cute update...
update soon...
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Edited by pari_jyothika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
cute part😉
lekin last precap wala part nahi tha😕
current precap --interesting

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part...
Maaneet moments were superb...
Bt u dint show abt geets frnds reaction...
I mean they shuld hv asked geet abt hr n maan... Specially piya...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: divya22

Nice part...
Maaneet moments were superb...
Bt u dint show abt geets frnds reaction...
I mean they shuld hv asked geet abt hr n maan... Specially piya...



thanks a lot dear...
i'll show it but later coz right now they didn't know about it...

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