INNOCENT GIRL 1/11/2012update on pg 23 chapter 7

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OS INOCCENT GIRL

Hay guys I write first time a story please give comments on my story

And please forgive me for mistakes

THE MAIN CONCEPT OF STORY

IT IS A LOVE STORY

THIS IS A IPKKND FORUM SO GIVE THEM NAME SAME ARNAV AND KHUSHI

CHARACTOR

;KHUSHI VERY RESPONSIBLE GRIL BELONG WEALTHY FAMILY
ARNAV; WELL EDUCATED RESPONSIBLE LOVING BELONG A MIDDLE CLASS FAMILY

COCEPT OF STORY

This is story about a girl she is very innocent her she have 4 brothers and 1 sister the girl is a responsible daughter and sister her mother is working women and her father is a teacher

Her mother is a working women so behalf of her mother she take care of all house

RELATIONSHIP WITH HER WITH MOTHER IS VERY CRITICAL ALTHOUGH SHE DO ALL THINGS FOR HER FAMILY BUT HER MOTHER IS NOT UNDERSTAND HER

Later then a boy enter her life and they both fall in love

How that's I will write later

SCENE AT GIRL HOME;

MOTHE: Enter the house she asked from khushi

Does u give milk to your sister?

Khush; yes

Mother; do you prepared the meat

Khushi ; yes mother

Mother; give me

And her mother is have gone

Khushi in deep thought thinking that her mother not asks from her is she all right she feeling so sad

She also need love and care of her mother because she is also only 18

While she is in deep thought then her brother call her because he is not feeling well

BROTHER ; SISTER

KUSHI; yes coming

BROTHER; I have pain in my legs

KHUSHI; put her hand on his cheeks sab theek ho ja ai ga khushi ni apny bhai ko zoor dai

And he feels rest and asleep she covers him with blanket and turns off light and go for sleep

IN THE MORNING:

She makes breakfast in hurry

Then she serves whole family

Then she goes to prepare her little sister she is only 8 year old in studying in class 3

KHUSHI; apny bahan ki bal badhti hoi choti sidhi karhi ho jaio

CHOTI; OUCH! Di dhokhta hi zor si mut bandho na

KHUSHI; OK now u are ready go to school

CHOTI; OK by di and she kiss khushi cheecks

Then khushi go for ready for her collage

While she reach at her home gate someone ring the bell

She open the door a boy stand in front her

KHUSHI;

Yes

BOY ;(he is cousin of arnav) the give her a invitation card of his brother marriage

KHUSHI; take the card and go back inside the house and give card her father and then she ready to going to collage.

SCENCE AT ARNAV HOUSE

ARNAV MOTHER; Talking with her daughter

Sanam tum ni aranv ka camra theek kar diya

ARNAV SISTER; Ha ama mani kar diya

ARNAV MOTHER; Aj puri ek mahini ki baad mera bacha hostel si ghar a raha hi

Woh bhi apni cousin ki shadi ki layi aghar us ki cousin ki shadi na hoti tu woh ab bhi nahi ata ankheen tarus gai hi us ko dekhi hoi

ARNAV SISTER; Ha ama ap sach bol rahi ankheen tarus gai hi bhi ko dekhti hoi

update date 23/10/2012

SCENE AT KHUSHI HOUSE

KHUSHI back at home and goes to for fresh

On lunch table

KHUSHI'S FATHER; Khushi do u remember that in the morning you have gave me a marriage ceremony card

KHUSHI; off course baba I remember

KHUSHI'S FATHER; as you know your mother is not here she is out of city for her meeting

And that marriage invitation is from your uncle best friend so will must go so be ready at night we will go to attend that marriage ok

KHUSHI; Ok baba I will

AT THE 9 PM

KHUSHI'S FATHER; khushi are you ready

KHUSHI; yes baba

KHUSHI'S FATHER; OK driver drop you

KHUSHI; Baba you are not coming

KHUSHI' FATHER; yes I am coming but join later I have some work

KHUSHI ; Ok baba

SO GUYS BE READY FOR ARNAV AND KHUSI FIRST MEETING

DRIVER; Khushi madam we are reach at ceremony

KHUSHI; Ok you go now and come back after one hour

DRIVER; Ok madam

Khushi is coming out from car and close the car door

Khushi's langha is very long she trying to handle her langha but she lost her balance and falling she closed her eyes and put her hand on her eyes but wait someone catch her when he open her eyes she feel she is in someone arms she saw a boy continue looking to in her eyes she also not resist she feel something attractive his eyes but later then she come back her sense and trying to leave her self

KHUSI ; Leave me

ARNAV ; LEAVE HER

AS he leaves she and she start running

ARNAV 'what the I helped her and she don't say one word and don't say thank you unbelievable man and start walk to his home where marriage ceremony started

UPDATE DATE 24/10/2012

Khushi enter in house where e marriage held she try to find out her uncle wife she saw her cousin

KHUSI COUSIN; Hi how are you

KHUSHI; Me fine and you

KHUSI COUSIN; me also good you look beautiful in this blue black langha

KHUSI; Thanks and you too look beautiful

KUSHI COUSIN; Thanks

KHUSHI; where is chachi (uncle's wife)

KHUSHI COUSIN; OH she is at dhula chacha house (groom uncle house)

KHUSHI; Where dullah chacha house OH here left side

KHUSHI; Ok i am going to met her

KHUSI'S COUSIN; Ok

One thing I tell here that arnav's house and arnav uncle house are same houses

And other side arnav enter his house

Arnav put her hands on his mother eyes from her behind when she was busy in talking with her daughter arnav pointing to her sister that stop don't talk

ARNAV's MOTHER; I know that is you arnav

ARNAV; OH you recognize me like always ma (ma tum mujhy pehchan gai hamesha ki tarah)

ARNA'S MTHER; Yes off course after all you are my son wasi tumhi ek bar bhi ma ki yad nahi ae is ek mahani main

ARNAV; Kyoo nahi ae thi ma ae thi leekan bus exame chal rahi thi is laye anahi paya woh tu shukar hai ki kal exame khatum ho gai thi warna baki rusmo ki tarah shadi mai bhi nahi apata

ARNAV;S MOTHER ; Ok go and get fresh I know that you are tired

Arnav have gone for fresh

Khusi enter arnav house she and start looking here and there and she start calling her chachi

KHUSI; CHACHI CHACHI

While ARNAV hear her voice and he get out from his room and again start watching towards khushi and other hand khushi don't know that someone watching him and she countinousely calling her chachi and then she collide with arnav

She turned

KHUSHI; Sorry main woh woh main she is very confused

ARNAV; Ok ok I don't know that who is your chachi but everyone is in terrace he pointed

Khushi start walking and go to terrace

ARNAV; Hay apna lengha sabhaloo warna dobara gir jao gi

Khushi turn and give him angry look

ARNAV; WOW kya ghusa hai yar and smiled laghta hai hamesha ghusi mai rahti hain

Khushi go to terrace and met with her cahchi

KHUSHI; Thanks God I find you chachi

KHUSI' CHACHI; Khushi betya kasi ho Betya (how are you)

KHUSI; hum theek hai chachi woh mujhy ap si poochna tha ki may gift kis ko doo

KHUSHI'S CACHI; OH tum mujhy di doo nam tu lekha howa hi na may dullah ki ama ko di do gi

KHUSHI; Ha

KHUSI 'CHACHI INTRODUCE KHUSHI TO ARNAV'S MOTHER

KHUSI'S CHACHI; OH yeh mere devar ki bati hai khushi

ARNA'S MOTHER; payari hai kasi ho petya

KHUSI; Hum theekh hai aur ap

At same time arnav come terrace

ARNAV; MA chalo barat jani ko tayar hai

ARNA'S MOTHER; Ha chaloo chaloo

Arnav looks toward khushi and smiled

Khushi give again angry looks and go

ARNV; Again said unbelievable man!

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Originally posted by: sweetnoori

Hi dear i cannnt belive that u write
well abhi meine parha nahi but
appiii woow good job again i will gv comment,,,
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Nice start dear...will be waiting for an update..and do pm me. Happy writing..😊

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