INNOCENT GIRL 1/11/2012update on pg 23 chapter 7 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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pls continue
its really interesting
hope nothing happens to d kid
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Originally posted by: coronapsyche

Poor child! 😔
Hope the kid is fine!
Awesme chpter
Pls continue it
Thnx for the PM

thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
sorry for the late comment
it was an awsome part so arnav and khushi are coming close close ahan loved it do cont it soon
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CHAPTER 4
AT THE HOSPITAL

DOCTOR; Take the kid in Operation Theatre.

At the same time 3 people more comes in very bad condition

Khushi is very disturb to see all this condition and sit on hospital bench

Arnav fell that khushi is upset he also sit beside her

ARNA; what are you thinking kya soch rahi ho

KHUSHI;What kind of people they are why they are doing this? Kya in logo kay pas dill nahi hai kya in ki hath nahi kapti golya chalati waqat iss bachy ki ma par kya gozri gi jab woh usi is halat nain dekhi gi our yai jo baqi log aie hai in sab ki family ka kya hoga

ARNAV; in logo ka koi religion nahi hota in ka zamer mar choka hota hai or in par in batu ka koi aser nahi hota yei tu sirf mohra hoti hi

or asal ghunegar tu chopi hoi hoti hain jo in logo ko trend karti hain apny maqsad{aims)

kay layi teen ages boys ka barin wash karti hain religion kay nam par cast kay nam par

ya phir money ka laluch dai kar

AT the same time kids patents have comes kids mother is crying khushi try to give support her

Doctor come from OT and talks with kid parents

DOCTOR; He is out of danger now.

Kid's parents say thanks to doctor but doctor said if you want to say thanks then tell them he pointed to khushi and arnav

Kid's parents said thanks to arnav and khushi

Arnav talk with khushi

ARNA; Ok so kid is better now

KUSHI; yes thanks of GOD

ARNAV; I will come tomorrow again to see kid will you?

KHUSHI; No me not will you tell me about the kid?

ARNV; ok but how?

KHUSHI; I give you my number

Khushi give him his number

ARNAN; Name?

KHUSHI; khushi

ARNAV; me arnav

KHUSHI; Ok

ARNAV; Friends

KHUSHI;Ok friends

They shake their hands

ARNAV; B/W you give your number so it means you believe me

Khushi don't give answer she only smiled and go

SCENE AT ARNAV'S HOUSE

ARNAV'S MOTHER; arnav kha thi tum tumhi pata hai main katni pereshan thi or halat bhi sahi nahi hain

ARNAV; Ma main bus ek bachy ko hospital lay gaya tha usi goli lagi thi

ARNAV'S MTHER;ab kesa hai woh

ARNAV; He is okay now

ARNAV'S MOTHER; tumhari nani aie hoi hain

ARNAV; ok

RANAV'S MOTHER; for your marriage

ARNAV; marriage and mine

ARNAV'S MOTHER; yes woh tumhari layi tumhari cousin ka reshta lai hain

ARNAV; No way mera abhi shadi karni ka mood nahi hain first I will finish my study then I think about that

While he talking about his marriage with his mother he think about khushi her smile face comes in his thought

ARANV'S MOTHER; Aranv kha kho gai tu theek hai na abhy bat paki kar lati hain bhad may shadi kar lena

ARNAV; shouted No

ARNAV'S MOTHER; what no arnav tum shadi karna nahi chhati ya apny cousin si shadi nahi karna chahti

ARNAV; Ha main shadi apny marzi si karoo ga

And he goes to his room he only thinks about khushi

Arnav talk herself

ARNVA; I met many of girls but I did not saw girl like khushi

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NEXT DAY IN THE MORNING

ARNAV'S MOTHER; Arnav wake up its 9 o clock .

ARNAV; good morning mom

ARAN'S MOTHER; good morning

ARNAV; mom do you packed my bag I will go back hostel today.

ARNAV'S MOTHER; yes but I do not understand that your exams is over and this is your last year then why you go back university.

ARNAV; mom my thesis are remains.

ARNA'S MOTHER; ok

After the breakfast aranv have gone to hospital to see the kid

He met with doctor he said that he is out of danger now.

Then arnav call khushi.

KHUSHI; hello

ARNAV; hello arnav is here

KHUSI; hello me khushi

ARNAV; yes I know I recognize you from your voice.

Ok i want inform you that child are out of danger now.

KHUSHI; ok

Khushi is very confused.

ARNAV; are you okay i mean to say how are you.

KHUSHI; I am fine and you.

ARNAV; I am okay

For a while, silence both of side they both very confused.

In the last aranv break the silence

ARNAV; I am going university today for my theisis.

KHUSHI; ok

ARNAV; tumhi ok ki alawa or khuch bolna ata hai

KUSHI; nahi main woh

ARNAV; ok main phone rakh raha ho take care.

KHUSHI; ok

KHUSHI TALK HERSELF MAIN KYA BAAT KARTI

ARNAV TALK HERSELF BAAT KARNI HAIN NAHI ATI LAGTA HAIN ISS LARKI NI CHUP RAHNI KI KASAM KHAI HAIN

Arnav gone to university back but he only think about khushi.

He cannot focus his thesis.

Even his friend's teas him that what happen with him is not same.

They all ask him that he fall in love with someone.

Arnav also very worried.

Because he himself do not know what happen with him why he always think about khushi.

In the same time,

His brother also comes too met with him his brother also feels that arnav is worried.

ARNAV'S BROTHER TALK WITH ARANAV

ARNAV'S BROTHER; are you okay bhai?

ARNAV; yes i am fine.

ARNAV'S BROTHER; lugta tu nahi

ARNAV; ok i will tell you but first you promise me that you will not laugh.

ARNAV'S BROTHER; ok but tell me what happen.

ARNAV; actually i am very worried i don't know what happen with main apny theisis par focus nahi kar pa raha koi cheez achi nahi lag rahi friends se milna acha nahi lag raha othti bathti khati peeti bas iss ka khayal.

ARNAV'S BROTHER; kis ka bhai

ARNAV; khushi ka i mean that girl which you saw in market.

ARANV'S BROTHER; bhai please give full stop your feeling here and please forget that girl you don't know her family they are very strict woh log apny batyoon ki marriage out of cast nahi karti in kay yahan in batoon par khoon ho jati hain bhai tum apny jan tu danger main dalo gi sath mi is masoom ki bhi.

AND ARAV LOST HIS DEEP TOUGHT

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After discussion with his brother arnav decide that he can think about khushi.

He decides that he will control his feeling.

He tries to busy herself.

Whenever khushi's thought comes he try to do some work.

He tries to very hard to forget khushi.

One day he sits with his friends (here i tell you that one is friend of arnav is a girl she and arnav both are very best friends) .all friends to go library for buy some books for thesis.

Arnav and all his friends go to library.

While aranv looks for good book he hear khushi voice.

He thinks he is going to be mad.

ARANV TALK HERSELF

ARNAV; I think I am going to be mad phali tu sirf khyaloo main ati thi ab tu iss ki awaz bhi sunai denay lagi hain i am very stooped man. Woh yahan kha ho gi.

Again, he hears her voice.

Moreover, this time he turns he cannot believe herself yes, there is she in front of his.

His heart start beating quickly he want to talk with her but he ignore her because he know that it's good for both that they keep away from each other .

Other hand khushi also see him but she noticed that he ignore her.

Khushi do not understand why he behaves like this.

Arnav ask his friends that let go back to hostel. Khushi saw that arnav talk with agirl very friendly. khushi feel very jealous she start talking with herself .

KHUSHI; OH tu yeh baat hai larki sath main hai chalo mera kya jata hain mujhy bora kyoo lagi ga kisi kay bhi saath ho mujhy kya farq parta hain. She trun in anger and walked away.

When aranv and his friends are coming out, he saw khushi is looking here and there in library and looks very worried arnav ignore but he cannot. Finally, he come towards her and talks with her.

ARNAV; Hi

Khushi see him but not answered because she still angry on him.

ARNAV AGAIN TALK WITH HER

ARNAV; what happen? What are you finding?

KHUSHI; in anger ap say matlab

ARNAV; ok as you wish.

Arnav go away in anger.

However, he comes back and again asking from khushi.

ARNAV; Look you are here in strange city this is not your own city jo tum atni nakhri dekha rahi ho

Sedhi sedhi batio kasi dhoondh rahi ho.

KHUSHI; I am finding my cousin actually my aunt is live here and my whole family is come here to meet her and my cousin want to buy some books she said me join me .

Therefore, I come with her she was coming with me but I don't know where she have gone I am finding him.

ARNAV; ok come with me we will announce her name at counter if she hears she will come.

But at the same time khushi's cousin find khushi .

KUSHI'S COUISIN; khushi where are you I was finding you like a mad.

KHUSHI; same here me also finding you like a mad.

Kushi's cousin see arnav and ask from khushi who is he.

KHUSHI; he is from my city.

KHUSHI's COUSIN; nice, to meet you.

At the same time the girl, which is come with aranv, is also come and start talks with

arnav.

Arnav's friend; aranv come we will be late. In addition, she holds arnav's hand.

ARANV;ok lets go.

Khushi feel very jealous when the girl holds arnav's hand.

Arnav introduce khushi with his friend.

ARANAV; She is my university friend.

Aranv friends also ask about khushi that who is she.

Arnav introduce khushi that she is from my city and daughter of my uncle friends.

Arnav' friends ask aranv lets go.

When they all comes out from the library aranv's see one boy is continuously to see khushi and trying to come close to khushi

Arnav's become furious and he holds the boy from collar and said.

ARNAV; How dare you to come close to her and give a tight slap to boy.

In addition, arnav's hold khushi hand and ask her that comes with me.

ARNAV; khuhi come with I will drop you.

KHUSHI; no thanks we will go in taxi. Leave my hand.

ARNAV; in anger I said come with me.

Khushi see in his eyes his eyes are full with anger and khushi feels scare.

KHUSHI; ok

Then he will go to drop khushi and khushi's cousin.

IN THE NIGHT

Kushi and her cousin sleep in same rooms and khushi's cousin asking from khushi about arnav.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN;

khushi woh larka kon tha.

KHUSHI; kon

KHUSHI's COUSIN; are wohi jo humy drop karni aya tha.

KHUSHI; bataya tu tha he is from my city main us si ek shadi main mali thi.

KHUSHI'S COUSION; I think he likes you.

KHUSHI;

What kya bakwas kar rahi ho.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; no dear main bakwas nahi kar rahi hoo tum ni dekha nahi kay ki jab woh larka tumhari pass ani ki koshish kar raha tha tu iss ki ankhi ghosi say lal ho gai thi aur phar

iss ni katna zoor ka thapar mara tha usi.

Khushi ; ha tu iss ka matlab yeh thori na hain kay woh mujhy pasand karta hain

Khushi's cousin; khushi you are mad kon karta hain kasi kay layi itna and don't you see his eyes when she introduce you with his friends his eyes clearly told that he likes you.

KHUSHI; ha tu woh larki kon thi jo iss kay sath thi jis nay os ka hath pakra howa tha.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN' OH! So you also feel jealous tu agh dono taraf barabar hain.

Khusi throw the pillow to her cousin

Ans ask her cousin just stop.

I do not want to talk about arnav

KHUSI'S COUSIN';

OH! Tu janab ko nam bhi pata hain

KHUSHI; now please sleep warna humari shoor say poora ghar jag jai ga

And , khushi start thinking about why she feels bad when arnav talked with that girl.

And start talk with herself.

KHUSHI; why i feels like this kahain such much mujhy os si nahi yeh kabhi nahi ho sakta.

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Innocent girl

Chapter 7

OK guys i give the name which is girl and arnav's best frinds his name is sofya

Arnav and his friends reached at hostel all friends gone only sofya is with arnav

Sofya talk with arnav.

SOFYA; arnav are you like that girl

ARNAV; which girl.

SOFYA; arnav bano mat tum janto ho main kis kay baat kar rahi ho

ARNAV; no

SOFYA; arnav jhoot nahi bolo i read your face clearly .

ARNAV' I do not know but yes from the day when I met with her first time, i feel something different i feel attraction towards her

When she comes in front of my i did not takes my eyes away from her

When i alone her smiling face always comes in my mind i want go away from her but I cannot.

SOFYA; why you want to go away from her if you have feeling for her then go and tell her.

ARNAV; my brother said that her family is very strict they do not give their daughters out of cast .

SOFYA; what rubbish the world is change know every one change may be her family thoughts also changed. At least you should try for once tell her about your feeling at lease you will be satisfied ARNAV; yes you are right i will tell her.

NEXT MORNING

KHUSHI'S AUNTY READ A NEWSPAPER

KHUSHI AND HER COUSIN ARE SITTING INFRON OF AUNTY AND DRIKING THE TEA

SUDDENLY KHUSHI'S AUNTY READ A NEWS LOULDLY

THE NEW IS

SHE TELLS IN A UNIVERSITY DURING STUDENT ELECTION STUDENT OF TWO DIFFERENT PARTIES IS FIGHT AND DURING THIS FIGHTING, SOME STUDENT INJURED.

KHUSHI IS VERY WORRY BECAUSE THIS IS SAME UNIVERSITY IN WHICH ARNAV IS STUDYING

KHUSHI GO IN ROOM AND CALL ARNAV BUT ARNAV NOT PICK SHE TRY IT 5 TIME BUT ARNAV NOT

PICK.

KHUSHI IS VERY WORRIED AND SHE ASK HER COUSIN THAT LETS GO UNIVERSITY.

KHUSHI WITH HER COUSIN her cousin name is sadiya

KHUSHI; sadiya this university is same

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; which university

KHUSHI; in which arnav is studying

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; so what why you are worried

KHUSH; I called him five time but he did not picked.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; so you are worried for him but you said that he is nothing for you why you do not realize that you loves him.

KHUSHI; i don't know we talk about this later lets go to university.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; wait what we will tell in home.

KHUSHI; i don't know you think about that

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; OK I will tell mother that I have some work at university.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN ALSO STUDYING IN UNIVERSITY NOT SAME ARNAV UNIVERSITY BUT ARNAV AND KHUSHI'S COUSIN UNIVERSITY ARE NEAR TO EACHOTER.

KHUSHI AND HER COUSIN REACHED AT UNIVERSITY.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; how can we find him. The university is so big lots of department.

KHUSHI; Lets go to counter may be we get some information about injured people.

KHUSHI AND KHUSHI'S COUSIN REACHED AT COUNTER

KHUSHI; Hi can you tell me about student that injured in yesterday election fight.

Receptionist; yes maim they all admitted in the hospital .the hospital is left side of

University.

KHUSI AND HER COUSIN GO TO THE HOSPITAL

AT THE HOSPITAL COUNTER

KHUSHI; maim can you tell about aranv.

Receptionist; what maim i do not get it.

KHUSHI; I mean to say arnav.

WHILE KHUSHI IS TALKING WITH Receptionist, SHE SAW ARNAV.

SHE SMILED RAINING TOWARDS ARNAV BUT SHE SAW THE ARNAV IS TALKING HIS FRIEND sofya. SHE GET ANGRY, TRUNED, AND GO AWAY AND CRYING HER COUSIN SHOUTED.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; khushi

BUT KHUSHI DONT LISTEN WHILE HER COUSIN CALL KHUSHI ARNAV HEARED AND SAW KHUSHI IS RUNNING AND CRYING HE GET WORRIED AND SEE TO KHUSHI COUSIN AND ASK HIM WHAT HAPPENED WITH KHUSHI.

ARNA; what happened with khushi.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; I don't know woh tu ap say milnay aie thi.

ARNAV; MUJH SE KYOO.

KHUSHI'S COUSIN; woh iss nay election fight kay bari main suna tu woh pareshan ho gai thi kay khi ap ko tu khuch howa nahi.

ARNAV SMILED

ARNAV; pareshan for me its means she also

HE STARTS RUNNING TO WARDS KHUSHI WHILE KHUSHI IS STILL CRYING IN HOSPITAL GARDEN.

ARNAV COMES NEAR TO KHUSHI

ARNAV; khushi

KHUSHI saw aranv in anger

ARNAV; kya howa why you are crying

KHUSHI; ap ko matlab ap ko pata hain main katni pareshan thi itni bar ap ko phone kya magar janab nay phone uthaya hai nahi aur phone kyoo uthai gai doosro say bat karni say fursat mali gi tu na.

ARNAV UNDERSTANT THAT KHUSHI JEALOUS FROM SOFYA

ARNAV; you are worried for me why.

KHUSHI FEELING SHY AND DONT GIVE ANSWER TO ARNAV AND SHE WANT TO GO AWAY AND START RUNNING BUT ARNAV HOLD HER HAND.

ARNAV; khushi i love you

KHUSHI Looked ARNAV IN SHOCK.

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@faha1979: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊
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Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@faha1979: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊



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