FF-Hail Storm in Thendral! - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Wowww awesome part. Loved the athmosphere there...Too good..Waiting for their reaction 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What's going to happen next...
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Thulasi goes and sits next to him, "Ena ga? Nijamavai nala valikutha? Oruku pogavendama?"
Tamil, " Apdi lan illa. Kai ya asaikamudila, athan shirt a matha mudiyala."
Thulasi, "Ivalo thana!" She gets up and takes a new shirt from the cupboard.
Tamil plays with his hands😲 mockingly as Thulasi isn't looking😆.
(Ada pavi! Nadathu! Nadathu!😉)
Thulasi turns, Tamil gives the painful look.Thulasi, "Elumbunka! Ada shirta kalathunga."
Tamil gets up, "Mudiyala, kuttima!"
Thulasi goes near him and starts unbuttoning his shirt☺️.
Thulasi realizes Tamil is looking at her and a shiver runs down her spine😳.
She removes the shirt off and puts on the new shirt.
In the process touching his chest, feeling the heat and his heartbeat.
She buttons the shirt, restless☺️.
Tamil smiles mockingly at Thulasi. (Neejamavai Kadhal Manan than!😉)
Thulasi rests her ear on his chest listening to his heartbeat😳.
Tamil, "Ena? Thulasi! Thulasi! nu sollutha?"
Thulasi just smiles.
*Honk*
Tamil, "Car vanthiduchu. Vaa."
Thulasi takes the bag, they come out, lock the door and go to the car.
Cardriver, "Inthanga sir savi." and he leaves.
Thulasi, "Enga ithu? Neenga epdi car ottuveinga intha kaiya vechikittu."
Tamil plays with his hand normally😆. Thulasi sees this shocked and starts beating him😆.
Tamil runs. Thulasi chases him around the car😆.
(Public! Public!😛)
Finally both of them are inside the car. Tamil starts the ignition.
Thulasi, "Ungaluku eppo car license kadaichuthu? Car otta theriyuma?😛"
Tamil, "Velayutham than license kuduthan. Kadavula vendiko. Safe a poirulam."
😕?
Thodarum!


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Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Hahahaha awww superb Srsly Gisel your appointed as CT in Thendral. Goo and direct 😉😆 Btw it was super when he said Velayudham gave 🤣 Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Lol find it so funny to see TT like this...but it's sweet to see Tulasi helping Tamil like this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Lovely part Gisel, aww so sweet, waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Thanks Gisel for Part 5 and Part 6🤗.
Nice... Part 5 was very soothing with beautiful narration.
But Part 6 you gave a big shock in the end 😲. Appa TA is in touch with Vel aa😲😲? woowww... Hope Vel does not give the car and follow them wherever they are going. Waiting for the next one...
Sorry for the late comments Gisel... Last 2 days was extremely busy at work 😕. Weekend naala ippo thaan free to read😛.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kovil kollam padikattu
Praba and Deepa go and sit in the steps of the temple pond😳.
Praba, "Intha ooru romba alaga irukula?" admiring the scenery😊.
Deepa keeps quite😕. Praba turns to see Deepa deep in thoughts.
Praba, "Ena achu Deepa?"
Deepa, "Antha Josiyar...😕"
Praba, "Ada atha elam nee en nenaikira? Athu verum time pass."
Deepa, "Illa..."
Praba holds her hand😳, "Manasa potu kolapikathe"
He notices Deepa looking at his hand and realizes what he is doing and leaves her hand abruptly😛. A group of small boys come there.
Praba, "Kelambulama?" gets up.
Deepa still confused, gets up. One of the boy pushes another boy with an aim to make him fall into the water. In a split of second, the boy moves causing Deepa to lose her balance, She tries holding Praba. But, falls into the water😲. *Splash*
Praba, "DEEPA!" The boys seeing the chaos and run away😡.
The water is deep. She tries to keep herself afloat. But, the saree is weighing on her, "Pra...Ba!" Praba looks here and there😡 for help. The place is deserted.
Deepa, "Ena...pannureinga?...Vanthu...help...pannuga..."
Praba, "Aiyoo! Deepa! Enaku swimming theriyathei!😲"
By now Deepa looses control and disappears under water😲. Praba is shocked, without thinking, he jumps into the water😲.
(Dai! Unaku than swimming theriyathu la. Poi yaraivuthu help ku kupudu?)
Both of them underwater. Praba finds her. Her saree is entangled to weeds😲. She is trying to take them off. Praba disentangles the saree. By now he is feeling out of breath😲. Deepa holds him and both of them swim up😲. Both of them come above water. They paddle out of water. Praba removes his shirt and puts it around her as she is uncomfortable on her wet saree. Evening breeze and being wet gives a chill atmosphere😉. Praba faints😲 and falls. (Appovai sonnen poi yaraivuthu helpku kupuda!)

Thodarum!


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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Lol ohhh Prabha!! Even Deepa never fainted...lol...waiting for next one.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Hahahaha cute part.. What Prabha faints ah?? 😆 U know in mine Deepa faints and in yours Prabha faints, what a sync. But nice part, kovil scene was good. Excited to know whats gonna happen 😃

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