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beeny

@beeny

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

nivriti it's soo good
so sweet OS spsly last part of date & swaron convo lived dat
Thank u so much for PM😃

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I'm Speechless!😃 I loved it to the core!!

Thanx for the pm😊

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Appu

@Parvathi12

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing

Actually the next turn is of SwaRon only.. 😆 But I have a different concept.😳 I will surely add it on the list and write on it As Soon As Possible! 😃 Hope you don't mind. 😕 Else I can write one on this concept and post the one I have written later ! 😉

Do Reply Soon.

-Nivriti :)

OMG.. i did not see this.., I am so sorry... just please add this one to ur writing list and write it whenever u can.. i'll be waiting...

thakns..

appu

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

P.S: Crotchet cadences mean "Mood Swings" :P

is wonderful..!!

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

outstanding os dear..!!

must say ur a fab writer..!!

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Hmmm this is your second work I'm reading after the FF and I must say I'm getting impressed with your writing skills more and more with each update. If the FF is all about whirlpool of emotions that various character along with Swayam is facing then this was quite a pleasant surprise and break from that in form of sweet romantic SwaRon. And kudos to you for completely justifying their character and penning this story.

As Kankshita said this OS was so D3 ish that it was startling to read the beginign part. The character bore striking resemblance to characters thats been shown in the show. I won't dive into plot of the OS, as it was nicely chosen but I would like to talk about how it was dealt with. And there you just nailed this OS. Sharon has always been mine favourite character so it was quite a pleasure to see so many shades of her in this OS. Swayam's character was dealt perfectly just in the way it was needed. Dinner sequence was brilliantly written with nicely thrown surprise of proposal. And yeah it was nice to see some refrence from The Rhyme Of Ancient Mariner thrown in. I so wish I somehow use that alabatross refrence somewhere but kabhi mauka nahi milta. So it was really awesome to read it here.

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Tania

@--Tanzz--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Hi nivriti! gal i must say your writing standard is too good!
i am getting impressed each time i am reading your works..:)
first your ff and then this one, dear you should try writing more..
i tell you,you gonna go very high...hugs...tania:)

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Nivriti.. U neva fail to amaze me.. Seriously!!
I love d way u narrate d story.. U hav dat charm.. U know!!
Loved it.. U hav portrayed sharon beautifully :)
Her fears.. Inhibitions.. Emotions.. Evrythn was perfect :)
N swayam.. As he's one of ur fav charactr.. U yet again gav full justice to him..
I had a great great time readin it.. It ended wid tears in my eyes!!
I went emotional readin dat beach part.. D description was dis mesmerising!!
Keep writin more!!

Umm.. One request.. Not fr an OS bt for a FF(as u hvnt written on d3 yet)..
Can u plz start a new FF in accordance wid d current d3 situation ???
I wud love to read it by u bt if u not interestd as in if u dun av time o something,not a problem!!
OS/FF's on Kriyaansh r always welcomed n on swaron too..!
Try writin it on viha too.. They mak a cute couple :)

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Beautiful and romantic update ever, it awesome and the best, loved it especially the fight part. Kriya and swayam frndship and Sharey frndship is at topmost. YOU have done a wonderful job.