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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Wow Gisel, next with P and D...very nice start!!...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Thanks Gisel... P/D scenes nicely blended with the current track. Good onešŸ‘! Well written.
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Tamil is sitting on the bed, folding the clothes and putting it into a bagšŸ˜†.
Thulasi is sitting behind him putting her arms over his neck and rocking him😳.
Thulasi, "Enga Bangalore kandipa poganuma?😲"
Tamil, "AmašŸ˜• ein?Ponna thadava aga oru edathuku kutti pogala, athan..."(Pothum ethoda nepatikenga flashback poga vendam)
Thulasi, "Ithuku nan friends kudavai poveinai😔"
She takes her arms away, with an arm on his shoulders, thinking.
Tamil, "Ein, en kuda vara matuya?" stops his work and looks at her.
Thulasi, "Illa summa than." Tamil gives a jerk, making her fall on him as he holds her😳.
Tamil, "Porein na poo un freinds kuda." angry.
Thulasi regains posture, "Aiyaoo! Yen purushanukku kovatha paru" and starts tickling him😳.
Tamil, "Ai..vidu..šŸ˜†"laughing, "Adinga.." Thulasi gets up and runs. Tamil chases her. Both of them round the dinning table. Tamil, "Inga va.😳" Thulasi laughing, "Mudiyathu! Mudinga pidinga". Just then something falls from the roof on Tamil's back😲. Tamil wriggles and tries to take it off. In the process hits the table and the vessels in it tumble down. Curry on his shirt. He hits his arm. He cries in pain. Totally a chaos in the hall.
Thulasi, "Ena ga ithu? Cha." and holds him and makes him sit on a chair.
She goes and starts clearing the mess😔.
Tamil, "Purushan inga vali la thudikirein, ippo cleaning thevai ya?"
Thulasi, "Seri ena pannanum!šŸ˜•"
Tamil, "Oru nalu varutha aruthala? Kaiyuku amarthangan?"
Thulasi, "Oru pali ulanthathuku ivalo arapathuma?šŸ˜•."
(Pali uluntha? Etho solunvangalai😲!)
Tamil, "Pali ya?" jumps up in fright toppling over the chair, "Ow!" holding his arm.(nalavalikutha?)
Thulasi looks at him angry and hands on her hipsšŸ˜›.
Thulasi, "Time achu. Car vera ippo vanthurum. Shirt a mathunga. Athukula nan clean pannitu varein."
Thulasi cleans the mess and goes to the bedroom to see Tamil sitting there sulking😲.
(Touru kata?)

Thodarum!


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Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Hahaha palli vizhunthathuku TA cried ah?? šŸ˜† Nice one, so Thuls is going to tour, TA too va? Hope they do their honeymoon there šŸ˜† Cute one šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A point of note, I have mentioned that this is the last year of their studies, so it can be assumed to happen 6months or one year from the real Thendral story line...

Shamu kadaisi line a vasima, "Bangalore trip kattu"šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gisel

A point of note, I have mentioned that this is the last year of their studies, so it can be assumed to happen 6months or one year from the real Thendral story line...


Shamu kadaisi line a vasima, "Bangalore trip kattu"šŸ˜›


Ohhh appo illaiyaaa?? 😭 Pogathiyum, better yenna approm they have to see Charu šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Thanks Gisel... very nice.
TA making the house a mess for Palli ya... Rofl..šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
oh Bangalore trip cut aa😲?? Deepa is also not going...
But what excuse TA is going to make for not sending T to BlorešŸ˜›? Waiting for next chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lol funny part Gisel! I can so picture Ta creating a mess in the house.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lax veetu hall
Patti, "Dai Praba! Poi Deepa va college la irunthu kuttitu va😳."
Praba, "Ethuku patti? Enum 2 manarathila avalai vanthirvalai."
Patti, "Chonatha sei! Kulatheva koviluku poganum. Ippo ponathan, nenga Bangalore kelambrathaku munadi, therumbi vara mudiyumšŸ¤”."

Kulatheva kovil
Praba, Deepa, Lax, Sundari & Paati are praying.
The Iyer comes with the scared fire for blessings.
Deepa is about to take the kunkumam.
Iyer stops her😲, "Kunkumam athukarar than vechu vidanum.šŸ˜‰"
After a minute of uneasy silence, Praba takes it and puts it on her forehead😳.
Other side la, Lax puts it on Sundari's forehead🤢.
Everyone goes and sits.
Patti, "Dai ponga. Apdiya kovila suthipathutu vanga. Ada, ponganašŸ˜†."
Both of them look at each other uneasily and get up to go.
Lax, "En athe? Avunga inga iruntha ena?😔"
Sundari, "Chinam chirusunga thaniya irukathumšŸ‘"
Both of them are in earshot distance😲 and look at each other uneasily😳.
Praba breaks the silence, "Antha pakam etho kolam irukunu neinaikirein va pogalam."
Deepa follows him.
Two ladies come to them😲.
First lady, "Neenga Laxman pulla thena?"
Second lady, "Ama di. Neibagam illa. Anaiku kalyanam mari poche."
Both of them look at each other uneasily.
First lady, "Ena ma? Ethavuthu vishaisham unda?😲"
Both of them look embarrassed😳. Praba tries to change the topic, "Anga ena nadakuthu."
The ladies turn to see a sanyasi sitting there and people are going to him.
Second lady, "Josiyum sollitu irukaru. Avar ena sonalum apdiya nadakuthu."
Praba turns to Deepa, "Va poiyu pakalam" and escapes from them.
Deepa, "Negama poi pakanuma?"
Praba, "Avangata irunthu thapika than apdi sonnein." and turns to look back.
The ladies are still looking at themšŸ˜•.
Praba, "Chumma poiyu josiyam kekalam. Time pass agum."
The josiyar looks at them and smiles, " Kalyanam kadamaikaga illa, kannavukaga."
Both of them look baffled (Same herešŸ˜•! Elaborate please.)
He smiles again, "Valakaiya vala kathukonga" (Factu! Factu! Factu!😃)
He stops smilingšŸ˜•, "Ungaluku nerukamana vangatirunthu ambathu vara poguthu. Kavanama irunga." He gives some vibuthi to the already baffled couple.
They turn to go. He says, "Valakaiya kanavu akiratheinga😲."
Edited by Gisel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
Nice.. well written Gisel.. šŸ‘

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