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Posted: 12 years ago




PART-22

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"geet..i don't know how u'll react after listening to me but I want u to know this..mein ye baat tumse kabhi nahi chupana chahtha tha but I was scared of ur reaction"maan said..


"maan plz tell me what's the matter..u are scaring me"she said..maan closed his eyes n took a sigh gathering the courage to speak out finally.."geet..i…I have.."

"bro!!!"dev almost screamed while pushing maan from the place he is standing..due to the sudden push maan was not able to balance himself properly n so his head hit the pole near him n it started bleeding.

Dev who came there along with police saw two men in the van which was parked there..one of them aiming rifle at maan..dev was quick enough to save maan from the bullet..he was about to pull maan to sitting position but due to the speed with which he came running there he ended up in pushing maan forward but he managed to pull geet down.

Maan's head started spinning at the same time but he somehow got up holding his bleeding forehead.To his dismay he started feeling giddy.

"maannn"geet cried when she found him holding his head.dev n geet held him for support n took him from there in the car.police however managed to catch the two men who tried to shot maan even when they tried to escape.


In the car geet placed maan's head in her lap n continuously called him patting his cheek as he already fell unconscious..his health condition made him to fell unconscious even with this small cut.geet is crying badly as if she lost her life..meanwhile,dev called pinky n informed about maan as she knows what maan needs now."maan plz open ur eyes..maan plz"geet is crying even more bitterly.


"dev dekho na why he is not looking at me..tell him to open his eyes…"she pleaded for dev's help..she again looked at maan n tried to wake him but of no use..she held her dupatta on his head to stop bleeding.finally they reached hospital where pinky is waiting for them.pinky knew what treatment maan needed so she didn't allow geet to enter inside the ward..geet sat outside crying badly..she got scared when she saw maan in that condition..someone came to shot her maan,that thought shivered her more..dev who stood beside her felt very bad for her..he wanted her to know why maan fell unconscious..it's not becoz of his wound but becoz of his disease..but when he saw her crying verybadly,her fear to loose him just zipped his mouth..he also thought that it's not right time as she is already in very bad state..




Pinky injected maan n bandaged his cut on forehead..within few minutes maan came back to his senses n saw geet beside him crying bitterly holding his hand in her's..dev n pinky tried to calm her as there is nothing to worry n he is ok but she is not at all listening to them..she got back maan in her life after many hinderances n she was somewhere scared of her fate..her fate which always took her everything away from her..she is not at all ready to loose maan this time..these all things increased her fear of loosing him.



Maan instantly got up n hugged her tight.."shhh geet stop crying..iam ok jaan.."but geet is no where to stop..he hugged her more tight while recollecting what happened there when he was about to say her his truth.he made her look at him n wiped her tears.."geet…look at me"she looked at him with teary eyes.


"look kuch nahi hua hai muje..iam fine jaan..plz don't cry now"he said wiping her tears..geet hugged him again hiding herself in his embrace.


Meanwhile,police came there to meet maan.."mr.khurana we need ur statement so that we can take action against them..we came to know from dev that they are ur business rivals..he informed us previously that they threatened mr.dev to leave some contract to them but he didn't agree so he thought to blackmail dev saying they'll shot u if dev wont agree for that"


"and thank god bhai I managed to save u in time..warna pata nahi kya hota..thanku so much sir you were very helpful"dev thanked that cop..maan stood there talking to them n dev saw geet who sat on couch..there were still tears in her eyes..she looked so pale due to continous crying.


Dev who was watching this with tears was trying hard to control himself..he just couldn't able to hold himself when he saw geet like that..she is not even able to see maan in small pain then how can she handle when she comes to know that maan is suffering from cancer but she should know this..how long can they keep her in dark? ?


He went in front of her n spoke which he never thought he could do."bhabi just relax bro is fine..bas mamuli si chot hai see he's fine"geet smiled a li'l but dev continued lost in his thoughts.."iam wondering what would happen to u if really something happens to bro.. I mean koi dangerous disease"he could see the change of her expressions.."like canc.."

Geet gave a tight slap to dev without letting him complete n said"don't u dare say that again..maan ko kuch nahi hoga..samje tum..it wont be good if u say these things again.."she said n her tears which were already not ready to stop joined fresh tears which slipped down from her eyes.


Maan n pinky were shocked to beyond to see this angry geet..maan was listening to their convo but didn't interrupt n was observing geet's change of expressions..dev also was shocked but he just wanted her to know so he tried to say may it be indirect.maan came running to her n hugged her tight.."maan dekho na ye kya keh raha hai..kuch bhi bol raha hai"he rubbed her back to calm her but even maan thought to tell her everything..he however decided to reveal the truth to her n would have told her if that incident would have not taken place.he held geet's face in between his palms making her look at him.."geet..dekho meri taraf..dev ne jo kuch bhi kaha wo.."



"bhai…"pinky intruded n signaled maan to not to tell anything to geet with her facial gestures..he was confused but did what she said knowing there must be a reason behind it."bhai sambhalo apne geet ko..kabse roye ja rahi hai..oye geet stop it yar..kahi hospital mein tsunami na ajaye.." she tried to change the topic..


"wo kya maan??"geet asked seriously..


"wo..i mean he didnt meant that he just.."maan was trying to explain still confused why pinky stopped him..

"geet chodo na wo sab.."pinky intruded..

pinky quickly turned geet to her n caressed her cheek.."don cry now...bhai is fine na..see he is infront of u n ab hum ghar ja rahe hai..so stop it now"she wiped her tears.

Maan was all the while looking at pinky confusingly..he wanted to tell everything to geet then n there but pinky is pleading him not to say anything..soon they started to KM..In the car pinky spoke"bhai plz drop me n geet at my place.."

"nai pinky..maan is not fine how can i??"geet said as don't want to leave maan..

"geet maan bhai is fine and u forgot??we don't have time with us..ARE YAR DO DIN MEIN EXAMS HAIN WE NEED TO COVER SO MUCH OF PORTION.."she looked at maan from corner of eyes n maan got that she stopped him becoz of exams..geet could not concentrate on exams anymore if she comes to know about maan..she would defo have mental stress then n she cant fulfill her dream to become a doctor..

"nai pinky…nothing is imp than maan to me plz tum jao mein kahi nahi ja rahi hoon"she declared her decision…maan turned her face by holding her chin.."jaan plz don't do that..see iam fine na..kuch nai huwa hai muje..iam perfectly alright!!and u know it's my dream too to see u as a doctor then how can u ignore ur exams n back off at last minute..no!!u should not do that..u are going with pinky n that's it "geet nodded in no but he held her in his embrace.."I'll call u n let u know that iam fine n if u want u come to me.."she agreed with half heart becoz whatever maan said is true.


Soon they reached pinky's place n geet was about to step down but dev called her…he held his ears making baby face n said"iam so sorry bhabi..i never wanted to hurt u..bas muh se nikal gaya..iam so sorry"


She smiled looking his baby face.."actually iam sorry..i would have not reacted like that but I was scared even to think like that so..sorry"

"ofooo ab ye sorry sorry program khatam hogaya toh hum chale??"pinky diverted the topic..geet nodded with a smile..she hugged maan n he kissed on her forehead before she left.

Before u guys throw chappals on me 😳 plz read the pinky's dialogue which I mentioned in caps.. next update mein pakka pata chalega use..i wont stretch anymore n will go in fast pace from next part as iam going to finshing this ss soon..so plz bear with this update.😭

Precap:

"naiii…naiii..naiii"geet screamed loudly closing her ears tight while crying..

"how can my maan have cancer..how..nai "she cried loudly hugging her knees tight.😭


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Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting eagerly for geet to know this will finish but you are not giving dosti pyar



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

waiting eagerly for geet to know this will finish but you are not giving dosti pyar






iam updating dosti 2morrow di😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanku shri😃
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Posted: 12 years ago


thanks meena 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
its just awesome dear..to see a different Geet who will not let anything happen to her Maan even in imagination.. v pray to god tat she will b able to bear the truth
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update
Continue Soon
Thank You So Much For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
so b/c of exams pinky stopped maan from saying the truth..
That was so cute of pinky..
precap shows that geet noeing the truth.. but hw?
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Posted: 12 years ago
love it...
thinking how will geet take maan illness...
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg who dare to think abt killing my maanu
n in all this he got hurt babji
n geet 😭
geet slapped dev
obviously when she cant see him in any prob.
toh aise baat pe slap hi skrgi laddo toh degi nhi
me 😕😕😕
wt will she do after knowing abt his disease 😕😕
precap waiting

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