OS: Kangan - Page 12

Originally posted by: ipkkndank

awww sweeettt 😃

i really wish if they show this in the SHOW

and i want arnav to know about the plants

anyways great work and loved it

Originally posted by: roseycheek

{He opened his eyes slowly and sighed. Di, you win this one, he thought.}

This line jus did Magic! awesome OS!

Originally posted by: shaheerdiwani

Hey Janet ... even I hate Cvs for forgetting such an impt track but uve done justice truly ...amazing OS ... luvd it 😃

Originally posted by: karisma

i like the part where he says he'll jump with her if she were to fall !😍 what a hero!❤️ lovely OS

Originally posted by: Shifat

Awesome

Originally posted by: onlyindiaforums

Oh my goodness. I don't know how I stumbled upon this one! But, am I glad I did! This is the single most beautiful piece of writing I've seen on this infamous bangle. And you know what the most amazing thing is? In spite of Khushi not being in this OS, I felt her presence throughout the OS. And Arnav's thoughts are so beautifully portrayed. I could almost see him standing in his cabin in the last scene.

I'm quite thrilled to see such professional talent on this forum! You should write, you should write!

Beautiful. Lump-in-throat.

Originally posted by: onlyindiaforums

At the cost of sounding like a stalker, I read this again today and I wanted to thank you for this. At the time that they are killing the characters the way they are, I realize your OSs always catch the original characters.

It's a shame you don't write anymore. If I had a say in hiring, I would ask 4Lions to hire you and to never let you go.