weekend treat for virmanians :an os

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its weekend n weekends are broing widout virman so thot of writin a os
m a bad write so plzz bear wid me



finally virman were maried
but family didnt let dem have der suhaagraat as dey were busy tryin to pull der legs 😆n tease
it was 2 am n all were still wide awake sitting in d vadhera hall
viraat imaptiently wanted to take manvi in der room(n y not after it was der sr)
all were playing passing d parcels..
so all were sitted in circless
virman were sitted next to eahother..
parceling d cushion was going on..
viraat suddenly put his hand on manvi n holded it tight😳
manvi lookd at him shyly
she was blushing..viren saw d duo
coughing said ahem ahem control mere bhai yaha sab hai😆
viraat:bhai fir hum apne room mein jate hai☺️
viren:joking arey bhai itna intezaar kiya hai toh aur saahi
whole night dey were playing n no1 let virman go in der room
next morning...manvi woke up in d arms of viraat in der room
he had hugged her backside she removed his hand looking at d time it was 7 she quickly woke up
had bath n came..viraat was still fast asleep she went near him n said to herself sote huee yeeh aur bhi cute lagta hai ..
n den loudy said i love u viraatn turned to leave suddenly viraat said i love u manvi n he pulled her she fell on him..
dey had a eyelock for 5 mintues manvi suddenly broke d eyelock n was tryin to free herself as she was getting late
manvi:virat chodo aj mera bahu ke roop mein yaha pehla din hai isilye muje khana banane ki rasam nibhani hongi
virat wid a naughty smirk said:manvi usse pehle tum aur ek rasam nibhani hai😳
manvi:at onceunderstood wad he was talking abt..suhagraat she blushed😳
virat pulled her more closed but manvi pushed him back n went while leaving she said uskeliye tumhe abhi intezaar karna hoga bachhu!😆
viraat:while she left said meri pagal sherni jiske bina meri zindagi adhuri hai

this is d first part if i get good response would write d second part!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was short and cuteee😃

Me first to comment eee after so many days😆
Edited by Nivluvsvirman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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UnRes :)-- eee a romantic one...continue soon..hayee hayee virat pulled her and she fell on him ..ufff..
Edited by shrav_virman - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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plzzz continue soon:)
it was really a dhasu os:)...loooved it sooo much:)🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Res,.. kya baath hai Ash and shrav are on a roll with OS

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Wow Ash that was super cute and romantic

and who said u write bad>?? - not fair ,. that was written so well 👏
so the family playing passing parcel all through the night 😆

i can see this scene in the show.. can't wait to read the next part - Maanvi as bahu ,,😳

lovely OS Ash.. pm me the next part 😃
Edited by munnihyderabad - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely plz continue soon and pm me.
Edited by sapphhire - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ash continue yar... poor Virman... Nice 1...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was really very good
cont soon
awee poor virman
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It is too good...plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww Great OS from you and Shrav...Ash why u left in such a crucial situation not good..☺️...Can you update today plzz n PM me..

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