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Posted: 13 years ago
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This story is about two innocents girls and how their life got entangled with each other though both enjoy this hide and seek of destiny ,but sometime god has other plan which u can't even imagine...
khuda ki iyanat ne saase mila di...zindagi ki sazisho ne taqdeer ulzha di.
CHARACTERS:
MADHUR HANDA

madhur(madhu):She is innocent , naive, and obedient child of their parent and want to be fashion deshiner and not so friendly with anyone
GEET HANDA
Drashti Dhami

she is naughty yet innocent ,biggest prankster,she is a rebel,chatter box @500/minute nonstop...


MAAN SINGH KHURANA

Gurmeet as Maan

biggest business tycoon of world, he is rude , arrogant and hate female of human spieces

RIDHVIK KAPOOR
actor, superstar, casonova ,film industry owe kapoors
other characters:
Dev singh khurana: maan' brother
Savitri Khurana: maan's daadi
Padmini handa: geet' n madhur's mom
Prolouge
they both borned simultaneous and were jointed to each other through few nevres near their heart or say their nerve got entangled in such way that heart pumping blood for each other body but each day progressing medical science did manage to separate them at age of one but they were never...
part:2/pg 2
so guy howz this please do comment...
i'll be waiting for ur comments n likes
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Posted: 13 years ago
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LOVED IT!!! Its really interesting to have Geet and Madhur in one story, with my husband MSK 😛 and cool dude RK. Please do continue, the story sounds so interesting. Waiting to read more. Tc, Bless and best of luck for ur FF.x.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1

"It was like some usual day for all and all those tooo workaholic people busy in there routine , u know what routine putting lotsss of make up which which can b enough to repair all the roads all over india light and when that crazy director move his lips to say same words" camera sound and action then some people which u can called actors move their limbs mindlessly and to add up some essence to it rarely moves their labia, no no they can't move it of their own they need dilougue writer for that too, huh i can't even breath there mum asking me to accompain her", geet said all in one go and then inhaled which according to her was taboo till she finishes

so what do wann? madhur asked
"aaj tu chali ja" geet said making cute bechara face
"but mum wann u, to accompain her"
"please madhu only this
"i know but i have an idea for it"
" NO WAy"
time, u know na aaj match hai aur waise bhi tu janti hai mujhe real hero acche laggete"
"toh yeh saari plot tune criket match dekhne k liye kiya"
"man ja na madhu plzzz"
"but tu janti hai it too tough to talk like u"
"i know u 'll manage it "
after troubling their hair to every torture they exchanged their hairstyle now it was time fortheir inborn acting skill to bo tested their mom was home and they were on
madhur was non stop chatterbox though some time she was short of breath which didn't go unnoticed by padmini( maa ki ankho se kuch nai chhupta) and geet was sitting aloof as madhur was quite reserved but she was an silent observer, to teach them a lesson she was quick of an idea
"madhu , today RK starting his shoot so i dont u accompane me "padmini said it out of blue, which made geet jump at her place, compose the situation madhur was on ride to save geet
no mum why madhu , kal mein nahi jana chahti thi then also u took me now rk is coming so u r taking madhu
"no geet beta aj toh tumhe live match dekhne jana hai na so u enjoy sachin ur real hero "
"but mumma"
" no but or if "
"maine keh diya toh keh diya, u r coming with me ", padmini ordered
"poor soul again landed on miserable land with all lunatic acting like PM no no , sorry for mistake like some terrorist attack them and all rescue their life god knows what i'll b doing here" geet said trying to put all her complain in one sentence anware pair of following her each move who was no other than RF , heir of all names and fame of KAROORs and this movie wasdebut and his first day first shot and he was not an exception who can escape the charm of epitome of beauty, lost in her serene beauty when his mind order him to locomate toward her he himself unaware of his state tapped her soft milky soldierit did n't take second and she glared him back like stabbing him like million question before setting it in word
"what???" geet asked in rage his tapping has only added fuel to it , getting no responce from him she shook him holding his " MAINE POOCHA KUCH KAM THA" almost shouting which brought him back and here she sanding his dream girl.who took away his heart at first sight.
"ish nacheez ko RK kehta" he bowed dramatically"
"accha toh aap hai woh cheez jiski wajah se mujhe real hero sachin ka live match nahi dekh payi pata hia appko kitni mushkil se maine ticket arrange kiye the"
"but maine kya kiya ??"
"aap hi na nakli hero RK jiski wajah se mum mujhe yaha le k aayi"
"aapki mum ?? "
"haan aapki onscreen MOTHER INDIA" she said with teary eyes, these small bead in her was enough to drown him witnessing her daughter behavior she was between them to put halt to their 3rd world war
"RK ji meet my daughter Madhur and madhur u must be knowing him THE RK"
one last time she glared him with big almond shape eyes , marched to farthest corner of hall
so howz this plz comment.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww Great concept:-):-) plz cont:-)...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow...loved it...continue soon...n do pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
Pindrop silence in their home,something seldom though madhur was not charter box like geet ,how can geet be so quite, thought madhur while darting their huge room where is she???
GEEET, GEEET kaha hai tu???shouted madhu to seek geet attention but could n't find her , fear of what happen to geet , madhur ran downstair her vision blurred n she didn't notice the big vase and collided she fall on sofa it was when madhu found geet sleeping on it and tv remote in her hand and at same time tendulkar completed his 100th century for a second she forgot to inhale n jus shouted, GEEET GEEET uth dekh he completed his 100th century
"WHAT!!! he hit his100th century , aur main budhu gode bach k so rahi thu", geet complained
"yeh sab us RK ki wajah se hua naa woh so called superstar aata aur na mum mujhe us boring jagah le jati aur naa mera match chhootta " geet continues her shikayat
"geet but yeh uska kam hai naa ,hua yeh ki mom caught us and she took u means geet with her not madhur,said madhur
"then also mum took me,how cruel ",geet said annoyingly
"stop it geet mum does it for ur betterment actually she want u to be actor " madhur revealed padmini secret.
"what, she can't force me i wanna be doctor jisme brain use hota not that nonsense occupation acting and tell me when u wanna be fashion designer mum don't had any problem wid u then why me?
" mum hate docters n u knew it but u always justify ur rebellious nature n u opting medical as ur profession "mentioned madhu
"but why madhu , doesn't they treat us infact they are god to save our precious life"
"whatever, i dunno now cheer up and u didnt updated fb and we have bed to sleep over not sofa "said madhur
"tu chal main aati hoon,geet said lazily and typed few word on fb trimphantt smile on her beautiful face and headed for their room
if u like it plz comment and press like button
Edited by swarnakanak - 13 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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