MG-Innocent Love#5 LINK THREAD 6/pg153 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it graphics
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Posted: 12 years ago
Such a cute and sweet update.

Vicky is really funny...

Really loved the way Maan accepting their relationship
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved the hubby wifey talk
Pls cont.
Great update
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CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART...PLZ DO UPDATE SOON,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi All,

I am so honoured that one of my reader Mel420 is so much attached to this FF that she wanted to contribute to Maan's confession. And when she wrote the confession I really fell for it and decided to make it the first part of Maan's confession. It's really dreamy and I would never have written confession in such dreamy way.
So today's part of confession is contributed by Mel420. So everyone today press like for her.

Thanks Mel for such beautiful contribution.
Thanks
-Anu
Part 32
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She was lost, could not say a word, he lost his patience and nuzzled his nose on the side of her neck, his lips touching her shoulder. Geet lost the track of everything, she was just drowning in the situation, the cool breeze where touching them, making the closeness even more pleasurable. Maan just stayed there like that for long while "Bolo na Geet" and his moving lips brushed her skin, unable to bear, she tightened their entangled fingers

Now that I'm close to you,

You I'm starting to know,

Now that I feel you near,

I'm beginning to get you.

Your innocence draws me,

Towards you it attracts,

Your beauty is what lies in,

Your heart is all I see.

You mean a lot to me,

More than I can ever say,

The difference you make,

Is because you're free.

@AbbyLuvsMaan

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"Maan" immediately came to sense and left her and turned facing his back to her. Geet immediately came and hugged him from back and placed a soft kiss on his back above his shirt. Maan burned with the kiss.

"I love you Maan" He turned with a smile and encircled her waist within his arm "Sacchi"

She pouted her lips "You doubt my love" "Umm hmm.. nahi" he traced his fingers up her arm, making Geet shiver.

"But now you have to tell me everything that is worrying you and what people have been asking you or else I don't deserve to even touch me"

"Yeh Kaisee shart hai'." Maan smiled looking at her while Geet kept fiddling with her duppatta thinking how to start, she went and sat at the corner of bed. Maan went and sat beside her and pulling her in his arms

"Woo Annie, she said ours was arrange marriage so" she paused," so" Geet hesitated "she says in arrange marriage there is nothing like love and passion na.. she says"

Maan got serious now "yes, what she says" "woo in arrange marriage, people get married and they just know that they have to live together and make lo.. I mean " Maan held Geet's shoulder

"you don't need to hesitate from me geet, I am your husband.. hmm" Geet nodded her head in yes and looked down "she said, in arrange marriage we know that we have to make love with person we are married so there is nothing like passion "

"And in my case, I mean" "yes Geet go ahead" "woo we did not share such realtion" she kept quiet for moment in hesitation

"I understand Geet, just feel free to speak your heart out today, please'" "we did not sahre such relation so I had nothing to say and I felt so low' but its not like that with us na Maan"

Maan sat on bed with leg criss cross and pulled geet on his lap, hugged her encirciling his hands around "our is mot special relation Geet, you know why" "Why? " she asked innocently and in shy, sitting on his lap "Coz, in our relation we have you.. who is most special then how can our relation not be special" she hid her face in his neck

"hey if you do so, I will have to show you what a real passion is ?" Maan teased. Geet immediately separated herself and got shy with blush on her cheeks but could not speak a word.

"what else did she ask? " "when I denied her, she asked me.. how special was our" she abruptly stopped "Leave it na Maan, I don't care. You are with me now so nothing else matter"

"but I want to know, tell me" and he pulled her even closer on his lap to make her feel more comfortable and intimate

"she asked how special was our special first k---ki-- Kiss" she closed her eyes as her cheeks turned complete red."and you had no answer" Geet looked down, slight tears in her eyes

"and you had similar question with Rajji and others who would have asked about our relation."

Geet then told him how similar kinds of talks girls and ladies did with her and expected her to know but she felt so out of place and no one could even imagine they did not share husband wife relation and that made her feel even low.

Geet hugged him, knowing he must be feeling guilty "It's ok Maan, nothing matters to me, you are here for me is so much for me"

Maan just made her lay down and made her sleep in his embrace. Not what questions people asked bothered him, but what Geet's pain was regarding their relation is what was bothering him.

These were just girly and womenly talk but what was painful was what Geet was going thru.

He looked at sleeping Geet "I definitly will give you a fairytale confession Geet. I don't know how but I will try my best"

Maan asked Geet to postpone her tonight's dinner at Rajji's place to next night. First she denied but then if Maan asked her how could she say no for long

"Baas aaj kee rat de do mujhe' all other nights will be according to your wish and plan."

Maan then did not know how to confess in fairytale style but he had to, whatever it takes, he will make her feel super special.

Maan then went to his private place where no one would disturb him and watched all famous hindi romantic movies.. DDLJ Geet's fav, Lamhe his favorite and many such movies and kept gathering ideas. He also quietly saw all fairy tale DVD's Geet had.

What will anyone say, if they know Maan is watching these, but for his wifey he had to do so. He was doing the things anyone would know it is impossible for Maan to do.

Then he made the plan.

Yes it will be a grand confession, just hoping it will be upto her expectaion.

In the evening: [Contributed by @Mel420]

Geet walked into her room to be greeted with the cutest sight ever. Rosie was sitting in front of her with a note and package in its lap. Geet jumped and grabbed the note.

Good Evening Misty,

Wear the suit that's in the package and walk outside.

There will be a car in front of the gates.

Sit in it. The driver will take you to your Maan.

She blushed reading your Maan. She kissed the note and tore the package open to find a beautiful sari. Geet frowned. I thought he liked western dresses, then why did he send a Sari. Well Maan send it so I will wear it and I like indian dress more, anyway. She smiled and rushed to the washroom to get ready.

Geet arrived finally arrived. When she opened the car door she saw a heavenly sight in front of her. The floor was covered with flower. And at the at the end of the flower carpet Maan sitting in a white shirt with a guitar in his hand. Smoke was all over him. It looked like he was a angel send only for his Geet. When Maan saw Geet walking slowly to his direction he started playing on his guitar.

''Ho aaj kal tanha main kahan hoon, saath chalta koi''.'' Uski hame aadat hone ki aadat ho gayi"

Maan stood up and walked towards his angel, she looked heavenly in the red saree that she was wearing.The moment he grabbed her hand Geet fellt her heart wordt burst out of her chest. Maan smiled seeing the affect he had on his angel.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wco90L3e15A [/YOUTUBE]

''Woh jo mila hai jab se uski sauhbat ho gayi ''

Maan carresed her face while singing


''ik zara masoom se dil ki aafat ho gai ''

Geet's heartbeat rose, she was feeling all ticklish in her tummy.Maan let her go and walked around her while singing

''Sun le zara, sun le zara''.'' Dil ne kaha, itna bas mujhe pata hai ''

He came infront of her went on his knees, grabbed her hand and sung looking directly in her eyes.

''I am in love, I am in love''''Tu hi bataa jaane kya mujhe hua hai ''

Geet felt her heart skipping a beat, this was what she always had dreamt off and Maan had finally said it.Maan stood up and twirled her around, while singing.

''Dishaayon das tu hai, tu hi hai bas tu hai'' '' Dil ka shehar tu hai, acchi khabar tu hai''Fursat ki hassi tu hai, jo bhi thi kami tu hai''Tu hai mera, tu hai mera''''Kuch main jaanu na, itna bas mujhe pataa hai''I am in love, I am in love.

Maan let her go and satrted singing

''Baadal pe chalta hoon main, girta sambhalta hoon main''Khwaishein karta hoon main, khone se darta hoon main ''

He sang last line looking directly into her eyes. Geet saw the fear in his eyes to loss the innocent her. She indicated a no shaking her head she will never change and always stay his Misty.Maan ki Geet. Geet threw her self in Maan's arms. They hugged like never before.

Next : Confession continued.

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww...wat a shahrukh khan type confession
lvd it...
i think i m first...yyiiipppeee
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww thanks anu that's so sweeet😳
thank you sooo much🤗
so they finally had their hubby, wifey talk
aww maan watching dvds to get a idea😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh emm gee
superb update
just loved it...
Hayee maan watched romantic movies fr idea
tooo sweett
n the cnfessing part is jjst amazing
So finally he confessed
love the way maan made her all the thingd that r bothering her
pls pls update soon
Cant wait more fr nxt uodate
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor geet so much has to listen

wowww love sharukh khan's style of maan for confession
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Posted: 12 years ago
maan nd filmy confession omg it's true love V well written

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