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Posted: 12 years ago
That ws Awesome blossom Update!!
I Loved it very much.
awww really Geet s so innocent
Loved maan & her Convarsation
hyeee Maan watching Movie's for his belove wifey..mar jaawan
Woww!! So Dreamy Confession Di
Amazingly Written...Loved the PoeM & song
hyeee i'm in Love wit dis FF
Eageraly waiting for rest of Confession
continue super soon
thank you for pm





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Posted: 12 years ago
AWSM UPDATE DEAR...<3<3<3
WAITING FOR NEXT...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow iam fida over maan's cnfesn
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Posted: 12 years ago
love u sooo much dear...dis is my favourite...thank u dear...

love d way maan confessed his love fr her...n making it special fr geet...

awesome n beautiful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it... totally and thier talks was just fab...
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi All,

I have never written such fancy update so may be you will feel its bit cheesy but if there have to be fairytale confession then it will be little cheesy.

Lots of effort for this update so do click like and lamba comments needed dearies.
-Anu
Part 33
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Maan turned Geet to other side "close your eyes" "now what" "shhh'just do as I say " he hissed near her ear and she shivered by his seductive voice near her ear throwing warm air.

She then felt something silky on her eyes and next she found that she was blind folded. "Maan what's this"

"You don't trust me? " "you know I do more than anything" "then Shh" and he placed his fingers on her lips. Geet was melting more and more. His new acts were making her dizzy, she just wanted to melt in his arms.

And that's what she got, before even she could realize he had picked blind folded Geet in his arms. Geet ko to jaise jannat mil gaya ho.

Geet cocooned herself in his embrace while Maan was moving, she could feel. So close to him, her cheeks touching and feeling the strong muscle of his chest, his fragrance was so intoxicating.

"I got everything, being in his arms like this. Now what surprise can be bigger than this feeling?" Geet could not imagine what could give her more happiness than what she was currently experiencing.

Geet after a while felt him rising on the stairs and then he removed her sandals.

"Maan" she said when she felt his fingers on her feet. But soon he placed her down but it felt different. Her feet were on something very soft, he led her forward few steps with his hands, it felt so soft and ticklish. What was he up to now. But soon he made her sit on swing and then opened her blind fold. Her eyes went wide open.

She was on the terrace which was so wonderfully decorated with small different colors light and white, pink and red balloon and then she realized that whole ground was covered with red rose petals. Ohh he made her walk on the rose petals'

Geet's eyes got filled with tears of joy. It was too much to handle. Knowing Maan very well, she could not imagine how far he went ahead to make everything so fairytalish.

Maan came forward and wiped her tears "I did not do all this to make you cry. You are not suppose to cry on my confession date"

"Maan but you don't believe in these things. I know you find these things so silly and you have to do all this" she made baby face.

"Now this you have to think before making the demand. Now that you placed the demand I have to fulfill it. How can I deny my princess' wish?" and he sat down on his knees and kissed her hand taking it in hers.

Geet turned red with shyness and felt little embarrassed with the way he was treating her.

"Abb bass bhi kijiye na" shyness taking over her as he was still sitting on his knees and looking intently at her with her hand in his. Her lips started shaking again.

And then the music started

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4g9zKRe-Is [/YOUTUBE]

(Mere Rang Mein Rangne Wali Pari Ho

Ya Ho Pariyoon Ki Rani

Ya Ho Meri Prem Kahani, Hooo

Mere Sawaloon Ka, Jawab Do,

Do Na) 2

Maan lifted Geet on her feet and got up along with her. He held her waist from his one hand placed her corresponding hand on his shoulder and took her other hand in his. Geet's shaking lips formed a smile and she looked down in shy.

They started swinging on song with each other, actually Geet's condition was so vulnerable that she was just following his moves.

(Bolo Na Kyoon Ye Chaand Sitare

Takte Hain Yoon Mukhde ko Tumhare) 2

Maan twirled her around and then pulled her to himself

Choo Ke badan Ko Havaa Kyoon Mehki

Raat Bhi Hai Kyoon Behki Behki

Mere Sawaloon Ka, Jawab Do,

Do Na...

Geet hit his chest while he opened the pin of her bun leaving her hair loose.

The cool air touched her skin soothing her erratic heart as his long fingers touched her cheeks to remove her flowing hair from her face. Maan could not bear not seeing her face. But his fingers lingered there for a while and smoothly started going down her shoulder, burning her as he was making her swing on music supporting her waist from other hand.

(Kyoon Ho Tum Sharmayi Hui Si

Lagti Ho Kuch Ghabrayi Hui Si) 2

Dhalka Hua Sa Aanchal Kyoon Hai

Ye Mere Dil Mein Halchal Kyoon Hai

Mere Sawaloon Ka, Jawab Do,

Do Na...

While Maan was swinging her on his moves with one hand his other hands could not stop lingering on her body, here and there making Geet completely in molten state, ready to take any form he was giving her while her heart felt like it would come out of its shell anytime.

(Dono Taraf Benaam Si Uljhan

Jaise Milein Ho Dulha Dulhan) 2

Dono Ki Aisi Haalat Kyoon Hai

Aakhir Itni Mohabbat Kyoon Hai

Mere Sawaloon Ka, Jawab Do,

Do Na...

Maan then while dancing picked her in his arms and took her to a small decorated bench cum bed and made her sit there and again sat on his knees on ground.

And then from vase near it took a rose and presented her, she smiled in shyness but he again presented her next

Mere Rang Mein Rangne Wali Pari Ho

Ya Ho Pariyoon Ki Rani

Ya Ho Meri Prem Kahani, Hooo

Mere Sawaloon Ka, Jawab Do...

And he kept on presenting her rose till the vase was empty. Then he walked her to the corner of the terrace'

Holding her hand and rubbing it he looked up the sky. It felt so light after opening his heart in front of her. Why not? If she could bare her heart in front of him, why should he not.

"Beautifull night" "umm" is only she could utter. She just wanted to live this moment. Maan, her Maan was making her feel so special, what else could she ask for. She did still not believe it was all true. She felt like she was having a beautiful dream of fairytale.

Then Maan Maan made some movement and the big board on the opposite wall lighted

A big I LOVE YOU lighted.

Geet thought it was over and he did it again, surprised she looked at him and he just hugged her. They stayed there like that for a while and then he picked her up in his arms to go to their room.

Geet who was already so vulnerable went sharam se pani pani

"Maan I can walk" voice barely coming out

"Why don't you like being in my arms" Geet's heart went Dhak Dhak with his words.

Next morning, Geet who was already in her dream world woke up with her cell ringing.

She picked the phone in sleepy state "Geet I have something important to show you. Get ready in half and hour and get in the car outside"

"Maan aap, but where are you" "Geet questing can be later right. Just get ready and get in the car within half hour"

Geet got confused and little scared to, why was Maan in so urgency.

She got ready fast and hopped in the car. And the car took her to the park

"Itne sawere sawere park me? " Then she found she was all alone in such big park but before she could gather anything flower started dropping on her and she looked up to see Maan on helicopter.

"Maan" she stretched her arms to feel the flower and smile formed on her face. She started twirling around feeling the flowers on her and Maan was enjoying his flower from top.

Later helicoper moved from her and started dropping flowers on different place. He was fast and then he came down, picked her up in helicopter and took her with him.

Geet was still gathering his fast moves when he showed her down'

Ohhh the flower pattern that he had made on the ground

I LOVE YOU

Again!!!!!

"wow Maan.. its so beautiful.. thank you thank you thank you " Yes the night was gone and the bright morning brought glow in their relation overshadowing the shyness and Geet felt more free and open.

They were openly happy, laughing, enjoying the height

"Maan you know to fly helicopter"

"Nah, I am doing it just like that" Innocent Geet believed him "Really, but it can be risky na"

"Tum nahi badlogee" and he pulled her cheeks "I have license to ride it.. now enjoy the ride and view Delhi from top."

Next: back to reality- pyar me kya na kerna pare.. Maan on back to back punjabi dinner invite. 😆😆

Edited by tellyme - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update! I am not getting to comment much nowadays but this def is my fav ff! I love it absolutely n u r a wonderful writer! This n the last update truly made me speechless! Beautifully written =) btw did they consummate their marriage though I highly doubt that Maan would do that yet 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful
Truly dreamy update
Especially for this Maan😳
Awesome

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