MN FF-*Kuch to hain Tujhse Raabta* Prt-14,Pg-83 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
loving it shaffy ...
cont soon ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
nice ss shafyyy cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Awesome SS dear
loved both parts
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Kuch To Hain Tujhse Raabta



Part-3




I looked at the clock and realised it's time to go,How time flew while talking to him I didn't realise...,well I , Took some notes , my laptop,my iphone,grabbed the keys of my scooty and marched towards parking area.

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She started her scooty and drove to her Institute.All the day she was so busy with lectures,that she forgot about the converstation which she had with Hate_me.After reaching home she fall down on couch..she was damm tired.7 lectures continous back to back plus 4 test who will not be tired.

"Mom'!!!Are you Home.."

"YEAH.. sweety'.Feeling tired..???"

"Hmmm'It was so hectic today.."

"Okay', well dinner is all set.. go and reshen up we will have dinner then.."

"Okay'."

She came down in her pink pj's and light blue t-shirt.They pleasently had their diner..talking about their days and traffic and all that.

"Nupur'Shona'"

"Yes!!!Mom.."

"I need to check some files and also filled some qutations and work on a presentation , I have to go. You better go to your room and relax'."

"Fine mom'."As Mrs.Bhushan was going Nupur called her out,"'Mom'"

"Yeas..!!!"

"How.. much you work..!!.Toady also so went early and now late night work..Won't your Mind and Body need rest Maa'I am there na.. then why do you work..",By Saying this Nupur was almost teary.

"Darling I work.. ,because I feel good...,I can't sit in home idle'and morover I have to saved something for your marriage also'"

"Mom..Not again..,You promise me that you won't bring marriage proposal atleast for year then,Mom..I want to attain something in my life,I saw you struggling for your whole life to provide me comfortable life,Good education,Good clothes and gadegts..Now it's my turn to do something for you..You are my only family Mom..And I don't want you to work at this Ths ..you need to relax,now shoud rest your whole life you struggles ."A tear dropped her eyes but she quickly wipe it off.

"Nupur..,I know you really care for me.And you know something I am really proud of you,You do so much for me.."Changing the tense environment to light she said"I have only one problem,You Never buy any clothes for me 'Why you are not a shopoholic dear'"They giggle a bit.Changing her tone to serious ," Face the reality child..i know your are a very strong and brave girl'But it's the reality.. child.."

"But I don't want to leave you alone.."Saying this she hug Mrs.Bhushan.

"Okay..Okay'But I really need to go'.Lot of work is pending sweetheart.."

"Fine..go'Goodnight.."

"Goodnight.."

Kissing her forhead,Mrs.Bhushan resides to her room'

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Wiping her tears which form in her eyes , she headed towards her room.She was getting bored and not able to understand what to do ,suddenly morning incident flash on her mind , she immediately opened her laptop and login to her I-F Account.She saw he has replied to her,Which has nothing but increase her temper.

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*Brain''.ooOh..!!!Haha haha haha haha Seriously you are talking about brain'This is most funniest joke I have listened..


Oh..God'!!!My stomach is paining so much..I haven't laugh this much.You have yourself clarified that You don't have brains'!!!*

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She immediately replied to him

*How can you say that*

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Within a moment he replied

*You yourself said one needs brain to understand the deep feelings of your story , but at first there actually deep feelings should be thee na,'.Its all kidoo' ,A kiddish story and you says about Brains'Hahahahaha.."

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*You know what I just posted a new chapter and within 5 minutes I got numbers of likes and comments*

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*WHAT'!!!Let me read' you be online'don't go anywhere..*

*Why should I Wait or you'*

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*Come on Kid'.have patience..*


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Hope you like it


Part-4 -Page 25

Edited by shafyyy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
mee first
awesome update shafyyy
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Awesom part
well written...loved it
do continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
😆oh god they are still fighting uff but thats the essence of love stories
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Nice one. Keep it up!!!
All your vids are also wonderful!!!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MultiPAULOMI

😆oh god they are still fighting uff but thats the essence of love stories



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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Part 2
It wss very nice.
Typical Mayurish. Miltey hi fight shoro.If the Mister Hate- me will say such things hen ppl will defiantly hate him
Bt OMG wt a concept shaffy.U included I-F in this concept.

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