os: dinner date (prediction for monday episode)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hope u like it.. its first i m trying something on ansh...😆😊😊



anandi has just reached home after a long day and is welcomed by a sweet smile of her dadisa'.

dadisa: aa gai chori. kaisa gaya din'shiv chod ke gaya hai ke thare ko..?

anandi:nahi dadisa .. main khood hi ai hoon ' wo collector sahib ko kaam tha office mein to main khud hi a gai'.

dadisa: chal acha hai.. ja jake muh haath dho le , mein gehna se keh ke khana lagwa deti hoon'

anandi: nahi dadisa abhi bhook nahi hai.. main thodi der baad kha lungi' abhi mein ja kar tai ji ki madat kar de deti hoon khana bana be mein

anandi was about to leave when dadisa holds her hand

dadisa: chori.. maahre paas beth' thare se baat karni hain maine kuch..

anandi:ji kahiye dadisa

dadisa: tu thik hai na chori' mera matlab hai jo kal maine thare ko samjhaya 'samajh aya na thare k' ki jagiya ko bhool kar shiv ke saath tujhe age badhna hai

listening to this, today's all events again start flashing towards her eyes of jagiya accident by their car'she wanted to tell dadisa about all that happened but then stopped herself as she knows it would only worry her dadisa more about jagiya '

anandi (composing herself): dadisa mujhe sab yaaad hai.. aur jaisa ki apne kal kaha tha main puri koshish bhi kar rahi hoon age badhne ki'

dadisa smiled

anandi (continues): main janti hoon ki ap sab mujhe khush dekhna chahte hai.. par mere liye apki, bapusa ki, ma ki , tauji, taiji ki khushi se badh kar kuch bhi nahi hai' isliye mein puri koshish kar rahi hoon apne ateet ko bhoolkar age badhne ki'

dadisa was really happy to hear those words coming out ofher ladli's mouth. she rubs her hand over her hair blessing her with all the happiness that she deserves''.

anandi: acha dadisa.. main taiji ki jakar madat karti hoon' tab se akeli rasoi mein lagi hui hai'

dadisa shook her head givin her permission

(in the kitchen)

gehna was cutting the salad when anandi enters the kitchen.

anandi: LAiye taiji mein kar deti hoon..

gehna: arey anandi tu a gai'

anandi: ji bas abhi ai hoon. aur ap jaiye main kar dungi ye sab..

gehna: arey nahi ' tu chinta mat kar' thak gai hogi .. ja muh hath dhokar aram kar le' waise bhi ab zyada kam nahi bach' bas sabzi banani rehti hi'

anandi: ha to mein kar deti hoon na' waise bhi mein itni thaki nahi hui

gehna knew ki there is no point in arguing with anandi as she would never let her taiji work alone and rest herself..

gehna(smiles): thik hai meri ma kar le.. tujhse na ladai mein koi nahi jeet sakta.. pata nahi shiv se kitni baar ladti hogi daftar mein'..
anandi( smiles ); nahi taiji .. meri aur collector sahab ki bilkul ladai na hove'

gehna: acha!pehle to khub gussa rehti thi unpar ki wo kitne nakchade, adiyal insaan hai..

anandi: ha rehti thi par wo pehle ki baat thi jab mein unhe thik se jaanti nahi thi' lekin ab dheere dheere jaan ne lagi hu , aur taiji saachi kahu to main wakai bahut galat thi kyunki collector sahab na sirf samajhdar or padhe likhe hai balki kafi suljhe hue bhi'.

gehna was really to hear those words from anandi in praise of shiv'.

gehna: kya baat hai .. aj to lagta hai suraj ulti disha se nikla hai ki hamari anandi apne collector sahab ki tarif ke pull hi bandhe ja rahi hai

anandi blushes a little bit when she realised that her taiji is teasing her..

gehna(laughed out loudly): par sach kahun anandi.. shiv wakai main bahut acha hai..bahut hi samajhdar aur khule vicharo ka hai .. bado ki izzat bhi bahut karta hai'

Anandi smiles

Anandi: pata hai taiji jab bhi unse baat karti hoon mujhe unki bato mein bilkul bapusa ki jhalak dikhti hai.. jaise bapusa har baat ko samajhdari, maturity se suljhate hai bilkul waise hi' apko pata hai taiji jab maine unhe bataya ki karni ma ke mandir mein dadisa ne hi urmi devi se unke bare mein bhal bura kaha to pata hai''

anandi was about to say something when she was abruptly stopped by gehna

gehna(shocked): kya? tune shiv ko ye bata diya'

anandi: ha

gehna: tu pagal hai kya anandi ' pata nahi shiv kya soch raha hoga masa ke bare mein

anandi: wahi to taiji' jab maine collector sahab ko dadisa ki is harkat ke bare mein bataya to bajaye gussa hone ke wo hasne lag gae

gehna: kya?

anandi: ha taiji .. main to heran reh gai ' mujhe lag raha tha ki wo dadisa pe gussa honge par pata hai unhone kya kaha?

gehna: kya?

anandi:yehi ki ye sab bate sun kar wo dadisa ke aur bhi zyada fan ho gae hai'

gehna(shocked to hear this)huh?

anandi: ha taiji.. aur unhone kaha ki wo khud hi apne parivar ko sab kuch sahi samay ane par bata denge aur unke parivar ko bura nahi lagega'

gehna: mujhe to vishwas hi nahi ho raha anandi.. wakai shiv mein koi to baat hai..

anandi(mischeviously): baat collectr sahab mein nahi hamari dadisa mein hai.. puri tarah deewana kar rakh hai collector sahab ko'

gehna(laughing): chup! pagal'

anandi was laughing continuosly .. it was a rare treat for gehna to watch after all that she had suffered'. its been ages since she has seen her laugh so much' tears roll down her eyes seeing her happiness...

anandi(noticed tears in her eyes and got serious): kya hua taiji ap ro kyun rahi hai..

gehna(* smiling with her eyes still full of tears but tears of happiness): nahi kuch nahi' bas acha laga tujhe hasta dekh.. aur ye dekh kar bhi ki tu shiv ke saath itna ghul mil gai hai'

anandi smiles with tears forming in her eyes too' she has always loved her taiji in same manner as her mothers.. infact she has been more of a friend to her as there was not much age difference between them' she shares everything with her without any hesitation..

gehna( lovingly cups her face in her hands): hamesha aise hi khush rahio anandi'

she hugs anandi tightly with both smiling still crying

after few minutes dinner was ready

gehna: chal khana to ban gaya'. abhi inke aur bhaisa ke ane mein samay hai.. chal bahar chalte hai..

anandi nods her head and switch off the stove and walk outside kitchen with gehna..

in the hall dadisa was sitting engrossed in some deep thoughts

anandi: dadisa'

dadisa comes out of her thoughts:huh?

anandi: kya hua kya soch rahi hai

dadisa: kuch nahi ' tum batao.. khana ban gaya'

gehna: ji masa' bas sab a jae to paros dungi..

dadisa: thik hai.

she was about to get up when a thought strike her and she puts her hands on her mouth

anandi(confused): kya hua dadisa?sab thik hai na

dadisa: haye devi ma.. yo mere dimag se kaiso nikal gayo..

gehna: kya masa

dadisa: arey wo shiv ke gharwale to sab chale gaye ho.. ab uske liye khano kaun banawogo?

gehna: masa unke yaha rasoiya hoga na , wohi bana dega..

anandi : ha dadisa .. pehle bhi to wo aise hi khate the'

dadisa: pehle mein aur ab mein farak hai ' ab shiv hamara hone wala kunwarsa hai' uska dhyan to rakhna hi howo ga

gehna: to hame kya karna chahiye masa?

dadisa(after deep thinking): abhi to samay hai.. abhi usne khana nahi khya hoga.. tu aisa kar gehna jaldi se uske liye badiya si sabzi roti dabbe mein bandh de , aur anandi chore ke liye halwa bana dewe gi.. chore ko bahut pasand hai mahri anandi ke haath ka halwa'

anandi smiles listening to this and recalls how he has praised her halwa every time he has eaten..

anandi: thik hai dadisa..

both gehna and anandi rushes to kitchen to prepare food

while going anandi mischeviosly says in gehna's ears: dekha taiji.. ab samajh aya ki main galat na thi' dadisa to puar deewana karke chode gi collector sahab ko

gehna laughed and hit anandi

after few minutes tiffin was ready'

anandi: lijiye dadisa.. apke collector sahab ka khana tayar hai..

dadisa: ache se dala hai na sab..

anandi smiling nodes her head..

dadisa: thik hai ab ja makhan ke saath ja je shiv ko ghar pe de ke ache se khila ke a ja..

a(shocked) : main jaoon? makhan kaka de aenge na.. collector sahab bache thode hi hai, khud kha lenge'

dadisa( little angrily): chori acha thode hi lagega.. aur waise bhi bechare ko akele khana padega' tu jawe gi to chore ko acha lagega..

anandi: par dadisa''.

dadisa(angrily): ab tu mahre se bhains karegi..chup chap ja aur ache se khila ke aio shiv ko..

anandi nods her head , still hesitating a little.. but she knows that she cant argue with dadisa, so left with makhan'..

to be continued

plz hit like if you like it

Edited by luv_shanak - 13 years ago

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Vishakha_Sakhi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start! 👏
Do continue soon! 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You write well
👍🏼
Thank you for sharing
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Like? All will love it I am sure...we all r waiting for this towel date😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice OS. Do continue soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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arrey u stopped at most int part !!

do cont nicely written
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome---

kaash serial me-- gehna aur anandi ke beech me aise convos ho

Love the way DS is back to playing her Cupid role -- a huge bouquet of roses to her 😊..

In earlier episodes in the serial, when she was planning and plotting to bring Ansh together, She was awesome in her expressions and the bg music was naughty-- want it back in the serial, though she has accomplished her mission--- no harm in further cementing the rishta⭐️
Missing this DS-- Cvs please bring her back..
Edited by umam - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice! Please continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start...But sad that u ended it midway and that too the part I think all the ANSH fans are waiting eagerly for...I lost all my nails since I saw the promo...Cant wait for Monday and neither wait for ur OS to b complete...Plz update sooonn...

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