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Posted: 12 years ago

Characters: They are the same as the original show. and Swamini is NOT a Kamini.
The Vadheras are settled in Mumbai. The Chaudharys are settled in Delhi.
Viren and Virat's father is alive and he is Vijender Vadhera.
Jeevika and Maanvi's parents are alive too...Janardan Chaudhary and Maithili Chaudhary

The story will begin soon...

Edited by saggitarius687 - 12 years ago

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Jannat

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice character sketch
Update the story dear 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

always open for new attempts update soon

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faye.

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Posted: 12 years ago

lol, 'swamini is not a kamini', good to know ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice character sketch Plzzz pm me wn u update thnx

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome cannot wait another one of your superb stories very excited

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Posted: 12 years ago

Please Continue Soon! and Please PM me.😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome concept

continue soon and do pm me!!

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 12 years ago

Jeevika is a lawyer. She has a degree and is being sent to the Mumbai College for Professional Degrees(MCPD) as a guest lecturer on the subject of Law. Maanvi studies in (MCPD). Viren is a pass-out from the same college and Virat is a student in the final year, a year senior to Maanvi in the same college.Maanvi is in Delhi for her vacations.
It's night time . Delhi.
Jeevika is packing her stuffs and Maanvi is watching T. V.. Maithili enters
Maithili is a strict lady. But she dotes on her daughters.
Maithili: Jeevika packing ho gayi tumhari...
Jeevika:ha mamma..meri packing complete. Ab bas Maanvi ki shuru karni hai.
Maithili:Maanvi ki kyun? woh apni packing khud karegi. tum uski madad kar sakti ho...lekin apni packing woh khud karegi.
Maanvi:kya baat kar rahi ho mataji...main aopni packing khud se...di ke bina
Maithili:haa Maanvi tum apni packing khud karogi tumhari di ke bina. taaki last time ke tarah tum Mumbai se aate samay apna adha saman wahi na chhodh aao...samajh gayi? aur Jeevika tumhe beeji bula rahi thi unse mil lo...
Maanvi:Matashri...dabbu kaha hai...
Maithili:Dabbu bhi tumhari madad nahi karega woh abhi bahar gaya hai.
Dabbu is Maanvi and Jeevika's cousin and is 15 years old.
scene shift.
Mumbai.
Virat is playing on his laptop. viren is working.
Viren:Virat din bhar tu khel ta rehta hai. yeh tera final year hai aur B.Com ka final year bohot important hota hai..
Virat:Bhai tumhe kissne kaha B.Com mere liye important hai. Mujhe toh singer banna hai.
Viren:beta tu toh pitega jab Dad ko yeh baat pata chalegi tab.
Virat:bataunga. pehle main ek singer ban jaau...
Viren:iss ghar mein pehle kissine itni creative profession nahi choose kiya.
Just then Shlok enters. shlok is 12 years old.
Shlok:bhaiyya. bade papa ne kaha hai ki aap ne mere liye encyclopaedia laye kaha hai woh.
Virat:lo aa gaye aap lawyer ban chuke yeh banega einstein koi toh hona chahiye na jo Elvis Priesley bane.
Vanshika enters.
Vanshika:kya ho raha hai yaha chalo so jao tumlog.
Virat:ha Mom mujhe kal jaldi uthna hai. & baje bula dena
Vanshika:hmm and leaves
Viren:kal tera college 10 baje se hi hai na?
Virat:ha
Viren:toh tu 7 baje uthkar kya khet mein jayega...
Virat:bhai samjho kal 1st year aayenge...toh 1st year yani nayi ladkiya...aur ragging...
Viren:...aur tera panga us anti ragging committee ki head se...kya naam hai usska...
Virat:Makhkhi Chaudhary
Viren:Maanvi...yea ladki achi hai nahi..?
Virat:huh??!! whatever...

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saggitarius687

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Posted: 12 years ago

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people those of you who want a pm do send me a buddy request please 😊

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